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Posted: 3 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: MayaTharkiFairy

Arey yaar tum bhi na correct TIMING mein end karti ho chapter🤦‍♀️ Mujhe aur padhna hai!!!!!!🥺

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Main sahi time pe chapter khatam kr deti hu , Taki tum phast phast next wala padhne aa jao


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#73

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sweets thanks for the tag.......but havent read 2nf part😔😭💔

will wait for it and den only i can read the 3rd one.......m dying to read it further


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Originally posted by: Luvs_SanIsh

💕Super, please update soon


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#76

Part 2

The door Slammed open as Raavi reached

her room panting, exhausting physically

and mentally, tears still streaming down

from her swollen eyes. But she dont want

to rest, anger is overpowering her

senses and she is agitatingly looking for

something. Finally she got it in her

wardrobe The diary. She opens and pull

out the cap of pen down. Talking to

herself

RAAVI: sab khatam ho gya hai na , sab

khatam krna tha na tujhe. Theek hai ab ho

gyi tere mann ki . Ab nhi rahungi tujhse

chipak ke jo krna hai kar. Tu apni zindagi

jee aur main apni jiyugi. Main kyu spoil kru

apni life tere peeche ? Aaj se teri meri

kahani ka THE END shiva.

She spoke this in a single breath, and

about to write her last thoughts in her

diary , but her hands jammed. Like

thunderstorm lightening strike her, she

comes out from her stupor where she was

living in her anger . Whole conversation

from his harsh words to she breaking her

wedding chain all played like a movie in

her mind. The diary and pen fell on floor

followed by the owner, she came into

present and her eyes overflowing with

unending hot tears.

"Ye kya kar diya mene

"Kese ho gya mujhse ye "

She looked up at the mirror in front,

Her devastated image is what nobody ever

imagined in somnath. Messed hair, red

eyed, dupatta carelessly hung half on her

arm and half on floor. But these things are

not what she noticed in her form. Her

hand goes to her forehead where her

sindoor is not visible and then to her

neck, which is bruised by herself.

She remembers dhara di's words of

kuldevta Pooja.

'Sindoor ke bina adhoori lag rhi hai'

That day she didn't mind that words but at

present, she is not recognizing the person

in front of her. She wasn't Raavi Narayan

who claims herself as somnath most

beautiful girl. She wasn't looking like Raavi

shiva pandya and that realization is

killing her. Her identity with which she was

living is gone away from her .

Adhoori nahi.. . Aap galat thi di , adhoori

nhi, bikhri huyi lag rhi hu main.

Khud ko hi Anjaan lag rhi hu main

Beautiful moments of shiva with her are

coming in her mind.

Tu hamare hisse me to aane wali hai "

Raavi naam hai uska

Phoolkumari hai kyaa'

Jaan se maar dunga.

Tujhe pareshan krne ka haq sirf mera hai'

Mere bachpan ke har hisse me tujhse

ladai ke kisse hai"

Agar mere bhai nhi bhi aate na

To bhi tujhse akela nhi chodta'

Aaj chipkaliyo ki beauty queen

Chayi huyi hai'

Raavi: Aise kese sab khatam ho gya

shiva ? Kese sab kuch itna badal gya ? Haa

galat rahi hogi main bhot si cheezo me,

par unhe sudharne ki bhi koshish to kr rhi

thi na main. Ptaa hai tujhe pe meri aur mere

dosto ki baato ka bhot asar padaa

hai, par itnaaaa... , itnaaa.. ki... us Aag me

hum dono... hum dono ki sari zindagi hi jal

gyi

"Main to ummed krne lagi thi, hum dono

ko sath dekhne lgi thi,. pyaar ya Shaadi ka

tag thopna nhi chahti thi tujh par, par

saari zindagi sirf ladte jhagadte nhi

guzregi aisa vishwas dila rha tha tera

behaviour mujhe.

Kya jhoothi thi wo muskurahat jo tere

chehre par, sirf mujhe dekh kar aayi thi.

Kya meri aankho ko dhokha ho gya, jo teri

aankhon me badla dekha tha mene.

Kya jyada soch liya tha mene ki main Mami

ki behen ki beti se aage badkar Raavi ho

gyi hu tere liye.

Kya phir se galti kar di shiva mene ye chah

ke ki Tere dil me jagah bana lungi main.

Tu to badal rha tha na, gussa krna chod

diya tha tune mujhse . Aur agar nhi

badalna chahta tha to main badal jati, tu

ek mauka dekar to dekhta mujhe, bilkul

wese ban jati jesi tu chahta tha. Tune

kabhi btaya hi nhi tujhe kya chahiye. Tujhe

baar baar compromise krne ko isliye nhi

kehti thi ki tujhe badalna tha mujhe, main

bas khud ko teri nazron me dekhna chahti

thi, jese tu meri nazro me Rehne lgaa tha.

Nahi chahiye tha mujhe koi prince

charming. Nhi chahiye tha well dressed

gentlemen. Nhi poore krne barish me bike

ride ke sapne . Tera ungli pakad ke

somnath ki galiyon mein chalna hi bhaa

rha tha mujhe.

Kyu nhi dekh paya tu ye sab shiva ??

Kyuuuu?

Kyu??? Kyuuuu??

And she broke down into tears once again.

Meanwhile on Shiva's side

Shiva get up with a surprise face as he

look at the person.

SHIVA: KRISHHH ?????

(yessss guyss krish is the person who

listened Shiva's words)

KRISH: Ha bhai main, tera bhai , teri

family ka ek hisaa, jinhe lgta hai tu bhool

gya. Kya pagalpan ki baatein ke rha tha tu

SHIVA: kri..shh tu... Tu.. ja yaha.ha se.

KRISH: main kahi nhi ja rha . Aur tu, tu

chal mere sath abhi, ye sab faltu ka

tamasha clear kar. Chal.

(He started dragging him, but no one can

do anything without chattan pandya's will)

SHIVA: krish chod mujhe, aur mujhe kahi

nhi jana, tu ja ghar . Aur mujhe akela chod

KRISH: akela hone ki koshish to tu wese

bhi bhot brilliantly kar hi chuka hai.

Par main ye sab tere MAHAAN HERO wale

karname pe na abhi the end lgauga. Bada

aaya Hero no. 1 .abhi call krta hu main

Raavi bhabhi aur ghar main sabko

SHIVA: krish mene khaa na tu kuch nhi kr

rha hai, mtlb kuch nhi krega.

KRISH :dekh shiva teri ye faltu ki dhamki

side rakh, mere liye teri khokhli dhamki se

badkar tu hai, aur tu.. Tu.. jese.. abhi

toota.. huaa...

His words hang in air as he embraced his

brother providing much needed support

which shiva needed from a long time

eyes are glistening but the warmth is

lightly soothing his heart.

KRISH: shiva tu yr kya kr rha hai ? Tu sirf

khud ko aur raavi bhabhi ko tod rha hai.

Pariwar se jaan boojh ke door ho rha hai

tu. Ye sab galat hai. Ham sab wapas se

sahi kr dete hai tu chal.

SHIVA:( getting a grip over his emotions

Shiva pulled out) Tujhe lgta hai sab sahi

ho jayega. Aur kya sahi ho jayega.

raavi ke chehre pe wo khushi wapas aa

jayegi jo shadi ke phle rha krti thi?.Kya wo

raavi wapas aa jayegi jo full of life thi?. Kya

main uske layak ban jauga? ya wo mujhe

aise apna legi ?bol na jya sahi ho jayega?

KRISH: shiva tu samajh nhi rha hai ,shayad

wo tujhe pasand krti hai, aajkal tum dono

close aa rhe the, hum sab ne dekha hai .

SHIVA: wo majboori thi uski krish, khushi

nhi. Wo is shadi me adjustment kr rhi thi,

compromise ke sath zindagi jeena chahti

thi. Main khushi bnna chahta tha uski

zindagi mein, jo wo mere sath mehsoos

nhi kr skti.

KRISH:par shiva .

SHIVA Tu ghar ja rha hai krish

Aur tune na kuch suna na kuch dekha. Jo

jesa chal rha hai wese hi chalega.

KRISH: shiva tu ...

SHIVA: ham is bare me aur koi baat nhi

krege krish.

KRISH:(unwillingly start taking steps

backwards, while watching his brother,

who tackle every difficult situation without

any flinch. But never share his worries to

anyone, not to his family ,whom he

considers everything. krish is feeling

miserable by the thought that he had

misunderstood his brother and his family

is still in that hallucination that this man

has done some crime. They have failed to

read him , they ignored his pain and let him

suffer when he needed them the most.

Noooo he can't let him suffer anymore , he

is not going to listen this time, promising

himself. I will correct all this, this is not

what you deserve Bhai .I can't see you

broken. Hey somnath help me to reunite

two broken souls.

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#77

Originally posted by: frnd_ship

Part 2

The door Slammed open as Raavi reached

her room panting, exhausting physically

and mentally, tears still streaming down

from her swollen eyes. But she dont want

to rest, anger is overpowering her

senses and she is agitatingly looking for

something. Finally she got it in her

wardrobe The diary. She opens and pull

out the cap of pen down. Talking to

herself

RAAVI: sab khatam ho gya hai na , sab

khatam krna tha na tujhe. Theek hai ab ho

gyi tere mann ki . Ab nhi rahungi tujhse

chipak ke jo krna hai kar. Tu apni zindagi

jee aur main apni jiyugi. Main kyu spoil kru

apni life tere peeche ? Aaj se teri meri

kahani ka THE END shiva.

She spoke this in a single breath, and

about to write her last thoughts in her

diary , but her hands jammed. Like

thunderstorm lightening strike her, she

comes out from her stupor where she was

living in her anger . Whole conversation

from his harsh words to she breaking her

wedding chain all played like a movie in

her mind. The diary and pen fell on floor

followed by the owner, she came into

present and her eyes overflowing with

unending hot tears.

"Ye kya kar diya mene

"Kese ho gya mujhse ye "

She looked up at the mirror in front,

Her devastated image is what nobody ever

imagined in somnath. Messed hair, red

eyed, dupatta carelessly hung half on her

arm and half on floor. But these things are

not what she noticed in her form. Her

hand goes to her forehead where her

sindoor is not visible and then to her

neck, which is bruised by herself.

She remembers dhara di's words of

kuldevta Pooja.

'Sindoor ke bina adhoori lag rhi hai'

That day she didn't mind that words but at

present, she is not recognizing the person

in front of her. She wasn't Raavi Narayan

who claims herself as somnath most

beautiful girl. She wasn't looking like Raavi

shiva pandya and that realization is

killing her. Her identity with which she was

living is gone away from her .

Adhoori nahi.. . Aap galat thi di , adhoori

nhi, bikhri huyi lag rhi hu main.

Khud ko hi Anjaan lag rhi hu main

Beautiful moments of shiva with her are

coming in her mind.

Tu hamare hisse me to aane wali hai "

Raavi naam hai uska

Phoolkumari hai kyaa'

Jaan se maar dunga.

Tujhe pareshan krne ka haq sirf mera hai'

Mere bachpan ke har hisse me tujhse

ladai ke kisse hai"

Agar mere bhai nhi bhi aate na

To bhi tujhse akela nhi chodta'

Aaj chipkaliyo ki beauty queen

Chayi huyi hai'

Raavi: Aise kese sab khatam ho gya

shiva ? Kese sab kuch itna badal gya ? Haa

galat rahi hogi main bhot si cheezo me,

par unhe sudharne ki bhi koshish to kr rhi

thi na main. Ptaa hai tujhe pe meri aur mere

dosto ki baato ka bhot asar padaa

hai, par itnaaaa... , itnaaa.. ki... us Aag me

hum dono... hum dono ki sari zindagi hi jal

gyi

"Main to ummed krne lagi thi, hum dono

ko sath dekhne lgi thi,. pyaar ya Shaadi ka

tag thopna nhi chahti thi tujh par, par

saari zindagi sirf ladte jhagadte nhi

guzregi aisa vishwas dila rha tha tera

behaviour mujhe.

Kya jhoothi thi wo muskurahat jo tere

chehre par, sirf mujhe dekh kar aayi thi.

Kya meri aankho ko dhokha ho gya, jo teri

aankhon me badla dekha tha mene.

Kya jyada soch liya tha mene ki main Mami

ki behen ki beti se aage badkar Raavi ho

gyi hu tere liye.

Kya phir se galti kar di shiva mene ye chah

ke ki Tere dil me jagah bana lungi main.

Tu to badal rha tha na, gussa krna chod

diya tha tune mujhse . Aur agar nhi

badalna chahta tha to main badal jati, tu

ek mauka dekar to dekhta mujhe, bilkul

wese ban jati jesi tu chahta tha. Tune

kabhi btaya hi nhi tujhe kya chahiye. Tujhe

baar baar compromise krne ko isliye nhi

kehti thi ki tujhe badalna tha mujhe, main

bas khud ko teri nazron me dekhna chahti

thi, jese tu meri nazro me Rehne lgaa tha.

Nahi chahiye tha mujhe koi prince

charming. Nhi chahiye tha well dressed

gentlemen. Nhi poore krne barish me bike

ride ke sapne . Tera ungli pakad ke

somnath ki galiyon mein chalna hi bhaa

rha tha mujhe.

Kyu nhi dekh paya tu ye sab shiva ??

Kyuuuu?

Kyu??? Kyuuuu??

And she broke down into tears once again.

Meanwhile on Shiva's side

Shiva get up with a surprise face as he

look at the person.

SHIVA: KRISHHH ?????

(yessss guyss krish is the person who

listened Shiva's words)

KRISH: Ha bhai main, tera bhai , teri

family ka ek hisaa, jinhe lgta hai tu bhool

gya. Kya pagalpan ki baatein ke rha tha tu

SHIVA: kri..shh tu... Tu.. ja yaha.ha se.

KRISH: main kahi nhi ja rha . Aur tu, tu

chal mere sath abhi, ye sab faltu ka

tamasha clear kar. Chal.

(He started dragging him, but no one can

do anything without chattan pandya's will)

SHIVA: krish chod mujhe, aur mujhe kahi

nhi jana, tu ja ghar . Aur mujhe akela chod

KRISH: akela hone ki koshish to tu wese

bhi bhot brilliantly kar hi chuka hai.

Par main ye sab tere MAHAAN HERO wale

karname pe na abhi the end lgauga. Bada

aaya Hero no. 1 .abhi call krta hu main

Raavi bhabhi aur ghar main sabko

SHIVA: krish mene khaa na tu kuch nhi kr

rha hai, mtlb kuch nhi krega.

KRISH :dekh shiva teri ye faltu ki dhamki

side rakh, mere liye teri khokhli dhamki se

badkar tu hai, aur tu.. Tu.. jese.. abhi

toota.. huaa...

His words hang in air as he embraced his

brother providing much needed support

which shiva needed from a long time

eyes are glistening but the warmth is

lightly soothing his heart.

KRISH: shiva tu yr kya kr rha hai ? Tu sirf

khud ko aur raavi bhabhi ko tod rha hai.

Pariwar se jaan boojh ke door ho rha hai

tu. Ye sab galat hai. Ham sab wapas se

sahi kr dete hai tu chal.

SHIVA:( getting a grip over his emotions

Shiva pulled out) Tujhe lgta hai sab sahi

ho jayega. Aur kya sahi ho jayega.

raavi ke chehre pe wo khushi wapas aa

jayegi jo shadi ke phle rha krti thi?.Kya wo

raavi wapas aa jayegi jo full of life thi?. Kya

main uske layak ban jauga? ya wo mujhe

aise apna legi ?bol na jya sahi ho jayega?

KRISH: shiva tu samajh nhi rha hai ,shayad

wo tujhe pasand krti hai, aajkal tum dono

close aa rhe the, hum sab ne dekha hai .

SHIVA: wo majboori thi uski krish, khushi

nhi. Wo is shadi me adjustment kr rhi thi,

compromise ke sath zindagi jeena chahti

thi. Main khushi bnna chahta tha uski

zindagi mein, jo wo mere sath mehsoos

nhi kr skti.

KRISH:par shiva .

SHIVA Tu ghar ja rha hai krish

Aur tune na kuch suna na kuch dekha. Jo

jesa chal rha hai wese hi chalega.

KRISH: shiva tu ...

SHIVA: ham is bare me aur koi baat nhi

krege krish.

KRISH:(unwillingly start taking steps

backwards, while watching his brother,

who tackle every difficult situation without

any flinch. But never share his worries to

anyone, not to his family ,whom he

considers everything. krish is feeling

miserable by the thought that he had

misunderstood his brother and his family

is still in that hallucination that this man

has done some crime. They have failed to

read him , they ignored his pain and let him

suffer when he needed them the most.

Noooo he can't let him suffer anymore , he

is not going to listen this time, promising

himself. I will correct all this, this is not

what you deserve Bhai .I can't see you

broken. Hey somnath help me to reunite

two broken souls.

Here posting part 2 on behalf of CheerlessIM (sorry yaar didn't know your name)

As she was unable to post

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Posted: 3 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: frnd_ship

Here posting part 2 on behalf of CheerlessIM (sorry yaar didn't know your name)

As she was unable to post

Thank you soooo much lovesmiley31smiley19

I m so grateful 😘😘

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#79

Originally posted by: Sugarcanes_AC

Wow.... amazing update 😍😍😍 loved it ❤️❤️ excited for the next 😍


Thank you so much dear ❤


Keep reading 🤗

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update part 4 now plz cant wait to read the rest

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