Originally posted by: milkcakejamun
What you described is the epitome of bad storytelling. Gaumbi shouldn't be the "perfect" husband. He should show stability, but he should definitely not be the "perfect" guy with little to no flaws. Dev and Shiva need to have some of the "perfectness" in their characters otherwise the story falls flat. Dev hasn't really done anything much since he keeps getting overshadowed by the other characters, and Shiva is decent until GauRa come on the screen space... and then he regresses into a child who only cares about "bhabi" and no one else 🙄
CVs should really improve everyone's characters before moving to the next track, otherwise, the writing will fall flat and no one will be able to enjoy it. And the CVs are definitely not doing anyone a favor with all the characters praising Dhara for how the brothers are raised... whatever mistakes Dev and Shiva make get thrown under the rug for far too long... and a single YKB solves it all.
For other tracks, like ShiVi's misunderstanding, little to no attention is given, and even if there is a scene, the editing is so choppy that the scene adds no meaning... I wish the show goes on a temporary break just so the CVs can figure out how best to take the story
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