ShiVi OS: Of Bangles and New Beginnings - Page 2

cheesu, meri jaan - this made my heart so happy 🤗

this was such a beautifully penned down one shot

every word, every detail was so well-written and I could picture the conversation 

loved it so so much!

you write very little meri jaan, please write more 

This was so beautiful ❤️

Shiva apologized, but still gave her time to decide what she wants.

He was watching her like a guardian angel

The Ending was superb...

Raavi really is a Nautankii, but the Cutest❤️

I love this! 

Shiva realising his mistakes and then taking time to get back to each other finally after realising how much they matter to each other🥺

So so beautiful ❤️

PS- Love that the kangan went to Raavi and not mami😆

Absolutely loved this!!!!

It was awesome. Love it

You know to be honest when I read the description ai thought phir se kangan ki kahani😔 (please don't mind ) 

But jab main age badi😃 I read 6k words😲

Or jab maine padna shuru kara🙈 I didn't wanted this to end any time soon😍

I loved this OS. Especially the fact that this was a complete OS. I know confession was not there but for me this was complete. 

I loved every bit of this piece, your described everything so beautifully and uniquely. Haye. Yeh 12k words ki bhi hoti toh main khushi se padti😆 see we are atleast I am a bukhad of good Shivi stories. And this was damn good. 

Loved it🤗

Keep writing❤️

Aaliya you write so well!!! Omg I'm going to read again and comment in detail later 😘😘

Aaliya🤗 this is so beautiful! A completely different treatment to the kangan kaand! Here again Raavi got  him the kangans but like  you always wanted Mami did not get the new kangans😆

All we want is Shiva-Raavi to be together always! ❤️

Aaliya, this was so beautiful! I loved it a lot 

I really really wish things had happened this way in the show, you wrote the characters of Shiva and Raavi so well here ❤️

Thoroughly enjoyed.. and can't wait for more from you!👏

Omg this was so good 🤩

Really loved it a lot. Please write more! 😍