Aawara Shaam Hai - A ShiVi OS - Page 3

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Posted: 3 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

that was interesting! though i have to say that like shiva i was a bit confused at the end too 😆

hoping there's a part 2!

Haha 😆 Thank you! Hopefully part 2 (if I can come up with something) can clear things up 😉

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Posted: 3 years ago
#22

Thank you ❤️❤️

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Originally posted by: chandiniebinda

This looks really interesting.

Cant wait to read more

Thank you so much!!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: ananyakhetarpal

So much pain and so much left unsaid! Please write part 2! 

Aww thank you ❤️❤️ I’ll def try to write another part! 

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Posted: 3 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: katheriene

Very interesting os👏

This suits Shivi, the pain and the unsaid words👏

Waiting for next part

Thank you so much ❤️ I wrote this one quickly but I’m glad that I was able to put forth ShiVi’s emotions correctly! Will def try and write another part!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: SlytherInMe.

take it slow but pleas upload a part 2

this was so well written I'd love to read more 

lovely os!

Aww thank you so so much!! I’ll def try and write another part! 

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Posted: 3 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: MeeraWrites

Well written. ❤️  The setting, dialogues and your way of portrayal are all amazing. It was so natural.  I loved it. 

I'm craving hard to read further. 


Do update soon. 

Thank you ❤️ I’m honestly blown away by all the love and the fact that everyone enjoyed reading this one so much!! Means a lot!! I’ll def try and write another part soon! 

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Posted: 3 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: hedwig_potter

Uff... Loved the angst🥺💔

Please please write a second part. *(haath jodne waale emoji)*

Aww 🤗 I love angst myself haha Thank you so much!! Please aap haath matt jodiye (channeling my inner Dhara) 😆😆 I’ll def try and write another part soon! 

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thank you ❤️❤️

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Originally posted by: CheerlessIM

Beautiful ❤🤗


Amazing with different plot , and their emotions n wishes👍

Thank you so much ❤️❤️ Glad you enjoyed reading it!