Mera Shiva - A ShiVi TS (Completed) - Page 4

Haha thank you 😂 
“Chipkali” always nagged me, I needed to turn it into something romantic! ♥️

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

adorable ending to an adorable story.. loved how raavi was in love with shiva instead of dev and it all worked out in the end ❤️

especially loved shiva saying "ey chipkali" to a real chipkali instead of raavi 😆 

raavi partially confessed her love to shiva and he confessed his to a lizard 🤣

raavi ko sirf shiva dara sakta hai.. aur koi nahi 😎❤️❤️

can't wait to read more of your stories! 

♥️♥️♥️ I love your hashtag so much!

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

Loved it!! Two parts in a day!

And here, it kept on going from unexpected to unexpected. Never ever had I imagined this scenario to play out like this. But it was hilarious. What Raavi couldn't do, Chipkali managed to do.

#ChipkaliMilayeJodi

Yeaah, I just hope Raavi and Rishita become thick as thieves in the future! That probably is a good idea for an SS or OS. 
Hashtag cracked me up! 😂

I was actually thinking of something in the lines of #ChipkaliGundaPart2 😂

Originally posted by: milkcakejamun

Wish I could give you a thousand hearts for this story! Love, love, love it! What a cute little story, and probably the only time I'll accept Rishita and Dev "ruining" Raavi's happiness.

Also the chipkali scene 🤣. The only thing I could think of the entire scene was #chipkali_meets_chipkali. And you're right, would love to have more scenes of something that Raavi is scared of... maybe these kidnappers can provide by bringing a few chipkalis

Wow!! Amazing , definitely wasn't expecting you to go along the same lines of rishita crashing the wedding and that dancing scene 😆

The chipkali scene was hilarious, I hope we actually get something like that in the show but for now, I'll enjoy your version. 

Thank you so much for writing this!

Amazingly done👏

I was actually waiting for Rishita ka entry. Like behan aaja aur kuch dhanga karle😳

Shiva's insight padne milta toh ahr maja aata

But you wrote such a dhamakadar story.

Waiting to read more of your writings 

This is a brilliant work along with the idea👏

Continue writing more❤️

Loved it ❣️ and had a good laugh at the end 🤣

Ahhh, I read it all in one go and I am in love with the way you write. Seriously, major props for how you structure tour story 💕

Raavi being in love with Shiva is the cutest thing ever. Bechari keeps fighting with him and gets lost in his eyes also. I loved that you took the storyline from the serial and turned it on its head. 

Hahah mami ruining things for Raavi and Risitha becoming her saviour. Hahah, I like this Risitha better. Dhara knowing about Raavi's feelings. 🤣

Raavi's lol moment and her happiness 

Love the hashtags and the Chipkali romance as well.

 Awww, did Shiva like Raavi all along as well. That legit made me so happy 🙈🙈

Keep writing 💕🌼 

Love,

Abhi 

Yessss, Shiva’s insight would have been great. But less is always more and I couldn’t resist stopping it at his smile 🙈

Let’s see maybe in the future!😆

Originally posted by: Fah_huq

Amazingly done👏

I was actually waiting for Rishita ka entry. Like behan aaja aur kuch dhanga karle😳

Shiva's insight padne milta toh ahr maja aata

But you wrote such a dhamakadar story.

Waiting to read more of your writings 

Awww this is so sweeet! Means so much! Thank youuu, Abhi ♥️♥️

Originally posted by: Abhipyaarhua

Ahhh, I read it all in one go and I am in love with the way you write. Seriously, major props for how you structure tour story 💕

Raavi being in love with Shiva is the cutest thing ever. Bechari keeps fighting with him and gets lost in his eyes also. I loved that you took the storyline from the serial and turned it on its head. 

Hahah mami ruining things for Raavi and Risitha becoming her saviour. Hahah, I like this Risitha better. Dhara knowing about Raavi's feelings. 🤣

Raavi's lol moment and her happiness 

Love the hashtags and the Chipkali romance as well.

 Awww, did Shiva like Raavi all along as well. That legit made me so happy 🙈🙈

Keep writing 💕🌼 

Love,

Abhi