24/03/21 A Jeeva Shiva SS part16 p. 33 epilogue p.34 - Page 26

Originally posted by: MSgayatri

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It is of utmost pride to be part of the uniform clan an brave to endure wat they do!! 🙏🙏

I feel quite useless when I see them and us, bickering about sheer nonsense..... 

Samrat is a strong man/ soldier... Lot of respect and pride for them all...

Coming to the story, he seems to have suffered a lot but I am sure that can't be cause for such trauma.... Dsnt go with the flow for me..

Continue soon!!!

Happy writing!!!!!

seems like I have failed completely as a writer today. I have disappointed/hurt too many people today. I'm really sorry to you and everyone else 🙏🙏

Edited by cheekukabeej - 3 years ago

I'm shivered!! Hail Indian Army! For them we're sleeping peacefully at night. There are so many soldiers who endures pain for the love of our Motherland! To give us a peaceful sleep. Jai Hind!

Originally posted by: cheekukabeej

seems like I have failed completely as a writer today. I have disappointed/hurt too many people today. I'm really sorry to you and everyone else 🙏🙏

OMG.... Aisa mat bolo.....

Aisa Kuch Nahi hai...

Samrat might have PTST.... That is there.... So chill and u can ignore my comment and continue with the story

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Heartouching story❤️

The way Samrat said "Bharat Ma" touch my heart❤️

Ha can do anything for his motherland👍🏼

Samrat is very strong.

Beautifully written dear i love it❤❤❤

It is awesome dear!!!

So I think he might have suffered from any terrorist threat or likewise!!!

That's why ge must be saying dhokha nahiii....

It is more and more interesting... Please continue soon💜... Waiting for the reason behind his mental state to come out 😥😥

Very nice.....👌 

Now everything is making sense....his behaviour... his dokha word.....

In all this one best thing happened is that.... chavan's got to know about their childre's suffering because of comparison and mainly pakhi moved on from Virat.....

Eagerly waiting for next update.... please give soon....

Loved it !

It was the best from all parts 

Do continue !

Jai Hind!! ❤️❤️

finally you have revealed the reason for samrat’s behaviour.so the tortures he has endured has disturbed his mind. looking forward to see how vineet will help samrat .❤️❤️❤️❤️

Bahut dino baad chaand nikal aaya🤣

Sry I didn't mean to taunt u but to express my joy after seeing that this story has been updated

Loved the update!!

The way u solved the questions arising in reader's mind by each updating part..lovvved it sooo much👍🏼

Amazing!!!👍

Hoping to read the epilogue soon💜 Samrat get well soon...This was beautiful.. And glad to read such a beautiful piece of art...❤