Originally posted by: Srilata.Mineil
Oh my my.... 🤗👏
hey Sri, I think its your turn next? But will it be alright if I write the next Act?😵 Actually there's this one scene that I've been meaning to write since Act 1 (and for this I think, no one will be able to read my mind). Just a chotu sa scene and then I'll hand the baton to you.
Originally posted by: nish_vir
hey Sri, I think its your turn next? But will it be alright if I write the next Act?😵 Actually there's this one scene that I've been meaning to write since Act 1 (and for this I think, no one will be able to read my mind). Just a chotu sa scene and then I'll hand the baton to you.
No problem nishi... Will continue after you write... 👍🏼
Nish shaon nezuko
Aap teeno ne itna achcha likha hai sab
Ab mujhe aap teeno se bahot sare PurVir OS ki umeed hai
Itne talented people hai humare forum me
Originally posted by: nish_vir
🤣you and your gifs
🙈🙈🙈
Onto the update, did you read my mind?😆 I actually really desperately wanted manas and juhi tobe consoled by Virendra❤️ And I really really wanted Manas to q if they are going to loose Purvi too Pakka you encroached into my brain.
Frankly speaking I was glad that shaon didn't write about them
To the opening act, where Virendra has held her hand, it was much needed😆 that initiation of touch from his side was❤️
I just want him to do in show as well ❤❤🙈
You considered the family bg too, and that's bravo. Prakashi, mama sarkar and Priyu, you showed their pain beautifully. Multipple people working on a story, really does widen scope😃- I made the premise, Shaon showed us Vir's mind and you showed us the family bachground and Purvi's state.
You and shaon write vir's wrath and emotional turmoil wonderfully 🙈🙈❤ so there was nothing left and I thought family reaction is important as well
That ending line of shaon's- you've used it wellPurvi lost in a no man's land with her sole compass being Virendra is Bravoo😎
The idea of purvi's dream sequence (or whatever you call that situation) comes from her last line🙈🙈🙈
Majo aa gayo.
Edit- purvi was shot on the side of her stomach😆
I thought she was shot on chest wait let me check🤔
Nish but thank you for your idea that was a fun activity bas ye makers hume disappoint na kare
❤❤
Originally posted by: Manisha_IF
Nish shaon nezuko
Aap teeno ne itna achcha likha hai sab
Ab mujhe aap teeno se bahot sare PurVir OS ki umeed hai
Itne talented people hai humare forum me
Mani thank you ❤❤🙈
Nish and shaon are really talented
Are aap bhi talented hai
Ek achche writer ne likha ho aesa hi ye 3rd act tha...
Nish but thank you for your idea that was a fun activity bas ye makers hume disappoint na kare
❤❤
Edit:- yup chest pe goli lagi hai abhi precap check kiya
Ek to yr ye log, precap edit karte waqt inhe jo transition aur effects hath me lage Sab laga diya zoom in, zoom out, ye filter, vo flash mtlb kuch nai chora 🙄
Originally posted by: Manisha_IF
Are aap bhi talented hai
Ek achche writer ne likha ho aesa hi ye 3rd act tha...
Are bas apne sir pe chadha diya hume🙈🙈🙈❤❤ but thank you
Edit:- yup chest pe goli lagi hai abhi precap check kiya
A🤣arre waha toh chest pe lgi hai but maine act 1 main usse stomacch side pe shoot krwaya tha.😆koi nhi
Ek to yr ye log, precap edit karte waqt inhe jo transition aur effects hath me lage Sab laga diya zoom in, zoom out, ye filter, vo flash mtlb kuch nai chora 🙄
Precap aa gya kya? Kaha hai
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