Nezuko, aap toh Cha gaye βοΈ
The family and their pain is so beautifully explored, especially the kids π€§ When Manas asked if Purvi too will leave them my heart shattered π
Virendra hugged his children, Baba was there for his khargosh and gendaram β€οΈ Ab bas Haati bhi aa jaye, toh family complete ho jayegi.
My, my, my, you made excellent use of my line! Purvi hearing it β€οΈ Usse kehte hai dil ka rishta, awaaz pohunch hi gayi, aur humari sleeping beauty uth jayegi ab toh. How beautiful was this!! And you say you are not a talented writer. Say that one more time and I'll cry. Wada raha.
Ok this is the first time I write something, except my exams answer sheet. It's not perfect it seems very amateur in writing stand of point but we are here for fun so why not
Act 3 - Sleeping Beauty
Continue from Act 2- Disintegrating
This chapter is mostly about the aftermath of the chaos that created by none other than KB
In the hospital
Virendra was sitting beside purvi's bed, holding her two fingers, thinking about how things end up like this. This bawari who always looks so cheerful, who always talking and muttering, who can't sit quietly, who always creates trouble for him is now laying their in silence just silence it's like time has stopped and not moving at all. Virendra can only hear the sound of the ventilator machine, the tik tok from his watch and the breathing of purvi, except this there is only silence.
In the haveli
Mamaji and prakashi just arrived in haveli they were exhaust to their limit. A servant offered them glass of water but they refused they were worrying about purvi, they were worrying about manas and juhi but the most they were worrying about was for Virendra, they never see him like that, not in the five years after sakshi demise but here we are, it seems like the horror from past has return to haunt him again, they know when the time come Virendra will attached to purvi they know purvi will become important part of his life but this soon it was not expected.
Mamaji caught the glimpse of kids who were sitting in the corner of stairs. Manas was continuously crying while juhi was at verge of crying. Juhi has very dizzy memory about her mother but the pain of parting is still fresh she knows she has to be strong not for herself but for her little brother. Mamaji came forward and ask why are they crying (he knows why) manas ask a question while whipping his tears "mukhiyani bhi humko chorke chali jayegi" mamaji was shocked and choked almost but he replied "nahi vo thik hojayegi aur jaldi se ghar bhi ajayegi"
Mamaji ask kids, they want to go hospital to meet purvi, manas and juhi stands suddenly it's like they were waiting for this moment prakashi interfere, their is no need to take kids to the hospital but mamaji insists and finally prakashi agree.
The news also reached to purvi's mother once she heard the news she starts crying on the phone it was difficult for prakashi to convey the tragic incident but it has to be done.
In the hospital
Mamaji and the kids arrived in hospital, Virendra got furious why he bring kids with them but the moment he saw the face of manas he stopped talking he realized the kids are very attached to purvi.
Virendra was looking at them and realized something, he came forward to them and pull manas and juhi closer to him it's like a little hug he was giving to them, juhi couldn't control and starts crying so did manas too. Mamaji was standing little far and he also got teary eyed this was something that was missing for 5 years, a father's affection for their children that also could become possible because of purvi.
Manas and juhi wants to meet purvi but they have to wait because of doctor put restrictions on visitors so they were sitting with Virendra on the bench outside the room.
A land with no end
The scenery the beautiful scenery, purvi opens her eyes it felt like she was sleeping for a very long time she felt a slight pain in her chest, she get up to look around but all she can see was a clear blue sky and a land with grass she was confuse how she end up here she mutters to herself that's no way a farm it doesn't look like that, wherever she was looking at, its look like a land with no end.
She was in old clothes she was worrying about she can't reached her home in time and she was scare of his father will shout at her again and her mother will worrying about her and she also was worried about her studies as well.
She was trying to find a way to get herself out from this place but she failed every time, after getting fed up with this she starts running but all she can feel was the pain in chest and the sound of gunshot after hours and hours of trying she was in same spot with the pain in chest and sound of the gunshot, it's like she was stuck in some limbo, she was tired, she was thinking why is this happening to her in that moment she heard something, a voice that she knows but can't remember she starts walking towards from where the voice is coming, she starts remembering every thing her first meeting with Virendra, her marriage, manas, juhi, her all nokjok with mukhiyaji every thing she finally knows whose voice is this she start getting closer and closer she start running faster and faster finally she hear clearly
Ab uth bhi ja Baawri, ab kitna intezaar karwaegi?
She knows it's her krur singh
It was midnight everyone is sleeping, anjali and yogi sleeping in their room meanwhile priyashi fall asleep in front of the mandir, prakashi fall asleep in sofa meanwhile in hospital while waiting kids fall asleep along side with Virendra
Now its was the time finally the sleeping beauty woke up
If feel you like spongebob after reading this
You are most welcome
Bas gali mat denaπππ
PM nish_vir to nominate yourself for next Act
π another amazingly written episode πππ u girls are so good .. nish, nezuko, shaon like really u guys have damn good creative mind.
Nezuko, aap toh Cha gaye βοΈ
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The family and their pain is so beautifully explored, especially the kids π€§ When Manas asked if Purvi too will leave them my heart shattered π
Virendra hugged his children, Baba was there for his khargosh and gendaram β€οΈ Ab bas Haati bhi aa jaye, toh family complete ho jayegi.
I really wanted to see him being a father for onceπ€§π€§
My, my, my, you made excellent use of my line! Purvi hearing it β€οΈ Usse kehte hai dil ka rishta, awaaz pohunch hi gayi, aur humari sleeping beauty uth jayegi ab toh. How beautiful was this!! And you say you are not a talented writer. Say that one more time and I'll cry. Wada raha.
Oh dear shaon don't say thatπ€§π€§ I am glad you like it πβ€β€ the idea, I really got from your last line and thank you for saying such beautiful things. β€
π another amazingly written episode πππ u girls are so good .. nish, nezuko, shaon like really u guys have damn good creative mind.
Thank you denix β€β€ππ the way nish write the premise and the way shaon expresses the vir's emotional turmoil is just ππ
And btw did you see bts picture of purvi vo thik bhi hogaye itni jaldiπππππ
Keep rocking gals
Thank you denix β€β€ππ the way nish write the premise and the way shaon expresses the vir's emotional turmoil is just ππ
And btw did you see bts picture of purvi vo thik bhi hogaye itni jaldiπππππ
πpurvi thoda din hospital main rehti toh virendra sewa karta, right? But usually kafi epi pehle hi shoot ho chuke hote hai toh maybe this week will be hospital dramaπ
Thanks palβ€οΈ
Originally posted by: nish_vir
πpurvi thoda din hospital main rehti toh virendra sewa karta, right? But usually kafi epi pehle hi shoot ho chuke hote hai toh maybe this week will be hospital dramaπ
They better give us hospital drama pata chale ghr me illaj karwa diyaπ€§π€§
Thank you denix β€β€ππ the way nish write the premise and the way shaon expresses the vir's emotional turmoil is just ππ
And btw did you see bts picture of purvi vo thik bhi hogaye itni jaldiπππππ
πππ€£ hope we get to see vir meltdown.
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