Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 3 - I thought he will be some serious revenge but thank god it was lovely revenge by maan, however he didn't knew that he is against our sherni geet who returned the favour with interest thats too in front of her clients.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Nice.... Revenge after revenge.... Who will win

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Posted: 3 years ago

hi thanks for the continuous updates!

wow thanks for the award... 


Part 3

entertaining update..... amazingly written....

well Maan indeed got his revenge.....

but Geet unfazed and gives as good as she gets.....

she is sassy and bindass! 

its tit for tat....

of cos he never expected that! 

Love their tashan... 

liked how Geet handled the matter when Maan came to her clinic....

Gosh 4 kisses......

looks that there is more than meets the eye....

as expected Maan is super bored with his date.....

but then he sees her at the restaurant enjoying her dessert!

I am sure he will approach her! 

already waiting for next! 

Edited by khwaishfan - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Oh Wow you have brought the awards comments back 


Thanks for Winner Award 


Part 3 


Hilarious and Feisty Update 

I totally enjoyed it 


Maan wants revenge and which is the best way then 

spoiling a girls image but guess Maan did not come across 

anyone as Spunky as Geet

like how he ensures to get Geet when she is with her friends 

and kisses her just to get back at her taking his revenge 

oh this revenge is surely going to make both fall in love 

with each other .

Geet too gets back at him when he is with his clients and wow

she too kisses him pushing him up against the wall

oh Maan will surely have excitement in his life with Geet

and now he is on a Date and his Date is boring while he spots Geet

also but she is enjoying her deserts 

I'm sure Maan will go up to her because she already is Intriguing him 

she stands up to him at every level of his revenge 

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Posted: 3 years ago

chalo maan n geet ek doosre k liye sahi hai........tit fr tat............


lovely update...............


loved it...............

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 3 

Absolutely LOVED it ❤️!!!! 👏

Loved your descriptions...... their dialogues ........... their actions ...... and of course the way the story is progressing ! 

Brilliant start with akdru’s dashing appearance & sudden kiss in front of the cameras ...... geet was left speechless .... which is not an easy task 😆

But I loved geet’s checkmate ...... in front of the Japanese delegates ........ arigato and all 🤣🤣🤣

Maan has definitely met his match !! 

Maan even shows up at the hospital 

...... and wow we are at four kisses already ..... this game is very interesting!! 😉

Now valentine ‘s day and maan is bored with his salad eating chipkali bimbo 😆

And he sees geet who is in chocolate brownie fondue heaven ..... that’s my girl .... who needs a man when you have dessert 😆

Thank you so much a very entertaining read 

Also thank you for the reading award ... I have never received one before . 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 3 Superb update...🥰🥰🥰

Totally loving their cute revenge game..😘😘😘

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: UmaDevi97

Part 2

Whoa so Geet is actually a doctor...? Yup Now that explains the terms of talking she's using. Yup very technical terms she used naa She's a badass for sure but not heartless. Yes, that's her uniqueness And Maan 🤣what a typical way of waking up after an accident yeh main kahan hon.... It's unusual for me to see Maan like that its always been Geet in that situation but I like this swap. hahahahah...why should always Geet have all the fun, ab Maan ki baari...hehheheh And I must say that your doing a great job on the dialogues especially when Maan is going to faint... 😆khud marr raha hai, phir bhi dhamki de raha hai that's a good one.... 🤣 hahahhaha glad you liked it and Geet is a smart one to hide the legal papers where Maan couldn't find.... she is Maan ke takkar ki And their bantering like kids lekin mujhe ek doubt hai ki yeh dono jagda karahi hai ya phir romance.... 😛 hahahaha good point. ab wo kya kar rahein hain unko khud ko pata nahi...kyun ki dekhne jayi indono ki words jagde wale lekin body language se aise nahi lagta.... 😉. ab inn naadaanon ko kaun samjhaaye Maans last words before going out of the room and Geet's childish mimics are really cute... And yeah I'm really excited to see how it goes with the revenge thing..... 😁. And thanks for the pm Di 


Thanks for the super-wonderful comment and analysis. Your comments are always a delight to read. Keep reading and commenting

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: meera051988

Super. This geet is not navie she gives back to back to maan.


Thanks for reading & commenting on the story. Absolutely this Geet is badass!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: UmaDevi97

Part 3

Wow Di yeh bohot hi interesting hai... Yeh dono aapna aapna hissah barabar karke jarahe hai...😲 Bilkul ek se badhkar ek hain dono arre ab lagta hai ke yeh revenge nahi yeh dono pyar karahe hai ek dusre se...hehehheeh ye inhe kaun samjhaaye . What really cracked me up was ki yeh dono normal revenge seekers nahi hai 🤣yeh dono rounds me karahe hai like a competition.... exactly....yeh toh kisi bhi angle se normal nahi hain Par Maan ne Geet ko restaurant me dekh hi liya hai ab kya hone wale hai pata nahi. But abhi mujhe Geet ka chocolate brownies sunke chocolates ki cravings ho rahi hai....😋🤦‍♀ hahahaha toh ab iss weekend apni craving satisfy hi karlo, order a nice n delicious choclate brownie and next part woh khaate hue padho. Lekin yeh dono bada ajib hai.... 🤣. Really funny and cute update Di awesome.... ye toh ajeeb hain hi, thats make them interesting. Hai naa?


Thanks for the wonderful comment❤️