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Posted: 4 years ago
#51


Thanks a lot😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Thank you. Keep reading😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: taahir004

Part 2


Mind Blowing Update Thanks a lot😃


I'm really loving and admiring this strong Geet Yasssss!!! i am so glad

though she was scared at one point when Maan comes

standing very close to her , but she only shows him

her confidence Yessss this scene showed even if she is vulnerable she will never show it. That's her one important trait. This was such an important takeaway. Thanks for reading between the lines ❤️

so Geet is a Doctor and takes Maan to her clinic so she can treat him

wow just wow he was actually drawn to her innocence

but realizing she is the same girl that made him sign the legal documents

and almost killed him he gets angry

now Maan knows where she works and he will surely pay her a visit

but I also think he wants his revenge from her

its going to be interesting to see how both of them Yes read on for that

play at this revenge


Thank you for the mind blowing comment. Loved it so muchImage

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Posted: 4 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: aparna3011

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geet treat maan as she is doctor

maan remember what geet done with him n decide to meet her again to take revenge from her


Thanks for commenting😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

thanks for the pm and for updating so soon!! Thanks for reading and commenting. That gives me motivation to write more


Part 2

Fabulous update.... superbly written 😊Thanks a lot

Gosh first she injures him and then treats him hahahaha she is like that only. You will know more

at least he is Maan....

so Maan mesmerised by her beauty! 😉Ab kyun naa ho

then recalls what she did!

Enjoyed their banter. hahahah i am so glad. I love writing their banters

Geet assumes she bested him

but she should not underestimate him

wonder what Maan will do? Keep reading for that

update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: Charanjeetkaur

Very lovely update dear Thanks for liking it

Geet is doctor and treated maan wounds maan think abaut to take revenge with geet

Thanks for pm

Watting for update


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Posted: 4 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: coderlady

There is the Maan and Geet version too. Nice.


Yup both Maan -Geet & Sujal -Kashish version

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Posted: 4 years ago
#58

Star Commentor Awards (For Part 2)⭐️


Winner: Taahir004


Runner ups: khwaishfan, creampuff


Congratulations to the winner and the runner-ups👏smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32

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Part 3

He nods his head and leaves with a smile on her cute acting

She smiles happily ki bala talli aur itna bada kaam bhi hogaya

But Maan believes in Revenge is the dish best served cold

+++++++++++++

Weekend hai toh Geet is with her medical college friends and all...shopping etc

Sab khaa piike shopping karke busy se mall se nikal rahehain

Sab chit chat karte hua jaa rahe hain

Saamne baadi si gaadi rukti hai

All are in awe ki kitni mast car hai

Nikalte hain Maan ji...apne full tashan and style mein.....shades pehenke and sab awe ki kya handsome banda hai

Geet is also looking dumb founded

He walks over to Geet and says ‘Hi Geet’

She is little unsure but replies back

Sab dost log jaan gaye ki ye Geet ko jaanta hai...hye!

Before Geet could realize, he swoops down and plants a kiss on her lips making sure all the traffic cams and cctvs get a good look

A nice aaram se wala smooch

After he is done, he calmly puts back the noodle strap of her dress back to its place which had fallen from her shoulder during the kiss and whispers in her ears

M- Revenge is best served cold dear

Baaki ko lag raha hai ki kaan mein kuch seductively bol raha hai

Geet ke hosh hi udd gaye the... Wo to samajh hi nahi paa rhi thi ki kya hua hai abhi abhi


Her mind takes time to register his words

She was shocked with the sudden kiss...she was more shocked by the fact that she responded to the kiss

She is pink as a peach

But before she could respond or do anything, he is gone

She thinks to herself, this is not over yet

Maan ka plan was ki ye bandi middle class type hai...aur unn logon ke liye apni izzat and aan etc are most important... ab Geet ki aisi image kharab kar dunga toh she will be devasted. Girgirate hue aayegi sorry bolne

Shock toh tab laga jab Maan was with his Japanese delegates

Geet appears out of nowhere

She bows to the delegates

Pulls Maan down and pushes him to the wall and kisses him thoroughly on the lips, whispering

G-Check & mate

She leaves after saying “arigato gozaimasu” (Thank you) tot he Japanese delegates

Ab round 2

Geet kind of is prepared

But is wondering which moment will Maan choose

Geet ki family doesn't live with her.So Maan ne socha toh infront of her patients

Geet ke nurse ne roka par Geet said

G-Aane do aane do

Geet ne jaldi se patient ko thermometer lagaya

G- Haan chalo. 1.5 minute

She says to Maan

She says to the patient

G- Don’t move please

Maan ne faltu ka Tashan dikhake bola ki

M- How are you, sweetheart?

G- I am great, baby.... doll

She answers with a smirk

Geet ko samajh nahi aa raha...ye bhola hai ki idiot...baaki toh intelligent types ka aura hai iska

Maan jaate hue kehta hai...

M- This is my tomorrow's schedule, if you are wondering

Geet replies casually...

G- Whatsapp me

The 4th kiss was uneventful...and didn't seem like a challenge to either of them

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Kuch dino baad valentine’s day tha

Maan was on a date with a girl

Wo bandi model types, khub Maan ko impress karna chaahe addaon se…bimbo type bhi....and wo boring salad khaane wali

Maan is getting bored with her chatter par kya kare

Sarr hila raha hai aur idhar udhar dekh raha hai

Nazar padti hai Geet pe...jo akeli restaurant mein baith mazze se fondue aur chocolate brownie khaa rahai hai

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#59

He thought he could one up her. But she showed him she is no less. She gives it all back.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Part 2

Whoa so Geet is actually a doctor...? Now that explains the terms of talking she's using. She's a badass for sure but not heartless. And Maan 🤣what a typical way of waking up after an accident yeh main kahan hon.... It's unusual for me to see Maan like that its always been Geet in that situation but I like this swap. And I must say that your doing a great job on the dialogues especially when Maan is going to faint... 😆khud marr raha hai, phir bhi dhamki de raha hai that's a good one.... 🤣and Geet is a smart one to hide the legal papers where Maan couldn't find.... And their bantering like kids lekin mujhe ek doubt hai ki yeh dono jagda karahi hai ya phir romance.... 😛kyun ki dekhne jayi indono ki words jagde wale lekin body language se aise nahi lagta.... 😉. Maans last words before going out of the room and Geet's childish mimics are really cute... And yeah I'm really excited to see how it goes with the revenge thing..... 😁. And thanks for the pm Di

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