" The Last Love" , part 10, 7/4/23, pg 23 - Page 16

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Part 9

"Pyar ho gaya" Maan said sceptically

Dev bro ki jo halat hai….he took a pause to rein in his anger. "Meri family ki jo halat , tumhe dikhta nahi"

"Bolo geet?"

She has closed her eyes but tears were cascading down her cheeks. He wanted her to look him in the eye. He shook her.

Bolo Geet? Tumhe nahi dikhta meri kya halat hai" his voice was shaking. He had been crying too "Maine toh pyar bhi nahi kiya" He said 8n broken voice.

"Nahi Maan maine bhi pyar nahi kiya…mujhe pyar ho gaya Maan" She replied helplessness visible on face.

She had been crying bitterly sitting by his foot. There were some onlookers gathering. He held her hand trying to make her stand on her feet. "Dekho iss pyar ne Tamasha banana suru bhi kar diya" He dragged her along with him to some secluded area where he could put some in her and rescue his Geet from his malicious disease.

He didn't want Geet to go through all the pain his brother was going through. He don't want Geet to attempt suicide. No no no he can't think on that line. Not even in dreams..he shook his head.

Her one hand was in the hand of Maan who has been dragging her to somewhere and with other she was continuously trying to wipe her tears.

What Maan would do when he will get to know that I love him? A shiver ran down her spine. She definitely can't confess her love for him. She won't tell him his name. She resolved.

To be continued soon....

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Part 9

Interesting Update

Maan feels been in love only brings on problems

as Dev has only experienced sadness and pain

now Geet cannot tell Maan she is in love with him

what will happen now ?

Thanks for the update. Oh dear, he really is against love but does he expect everyone else not to fall in love. Would love to see a jealous Maan wondering who Geet has fallen in love with.

Part 9

Intense update.... nicely written

Maan's reaction was expected

for Maan, love only gives pain

feeling for Geet

she is unable to tell him that she loves him

update soon

maan seriously needs to stop relating love with whatever happenedwith his brother ,

he thinks he is helpibg geet but he is only destroy ing her hope..poor geet ...she is in for some heartbreak though she knew it already...cont sooooon please :)

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Poor soul Geet can't even tell him that she loves him.

Well even isn't to be blamed.. Even he is suffering.. Seeing his family going through such situation just due to love..

It has left a great impact on him.. A terrible one at that...