" The Last Love" , part 10, 7/4/23, pg 23 - Page 17

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Posted: 2 years ago

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very painful update

geet can see maan wants to protect her from pain come with love

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Posted: 2 years ago

Nice part

Can’t wait to see what maan do now

Update next part soon

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Posted: 2 years ago

Hi... still hoping for an update

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Posted: 2 years ago

Part 10


"Mom please woh mar jayegi"


Maan heard his brother imploring voice.When he entered, Dev had been sitting by Sudha's feet holding her leg, his head resting on her lap. He was devastated, his voice wavering.


Sudha was crying too, sitting on the sofa, her one hand over Dev's head and the other on hand rest.


Door was ajar. Both didn't realise Maan 's arrival.


Mom " it was Maan. He came sat by his mother forgetting all about Geet. The choice she made. His pain. He thought if given the choice between her love and her best friend she would choose him, her best friend and he would rescue her from the clutches of this disease called love. Her betrayal. He forgot all about her. Now all he could see was his weeping mother and his devastated brother.


"Why are you crying?"


It was then Dev realised Maan had come. He looked up to seek his support. His eyes were puffy due to incessant crying like he had been weeping for hours.


Maan glowered at him hard before focusing on his mother again. Had it been another condition he would have snuggled him like he did before every time Dev mourned his love.


Maan has had enough when Dev is determined to ruin his life, he has no energy to save them but he would not let these lovers affect his loved ones anymore, be it Geet or his brother. They certainly don't deserve mercy.


"Please mom tell me" Maan implored, his eyes were watery too.


"They are marrying her….Sudha didn't look at him. "Her brother called to inform us and threatened us to kill Dev if he went there"


Woh mar jayegi Dev repeated "please mummy let me go" he held Sudha 's hand requesting.



"Toh mar jaye Maan" spewed


"Dare you say that again Maan" Dev roared.


"That b*** kal Marti hai toh mare" Maan said it deliberately.


His eyes were spitting fire, he rose and punched Maan hard.


"How dare you call names to Nayantara?


Rage filled him and it was beyond control. He grabbed Dev's collar and punched till he had no energy left and dragged him to a nearby room and locked him.



Sudha was taken aback. She could not believe what just happened before her eyes. She sat there unmoved until Maan came and shut the door loudly.

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Posted: 2 years ago

Thank you for the update


Part 10

sad that cos of what happened to Dev, Maan does not believe in love

what happened to Dev was unfortunate

but does not mean love cannot be beautiful

alas Maan is determined to rescue Geet and Dev from the disease called Love

so Nayantara is getting married against her will

Dev is indeed shattered

Nayantara's bro threatened to kill Dev if he goes there

alas Dev is concerned about Nayantara

Maan's outburst was expected

Gosh Dev and Maan physically fight

now Dev is unconscious

their mom was shocked


update soon

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Posted: 2 years ago

Part 10


Sad and Painful Update


Dev is so devastated and worst now that naintara is getting married

Uff Maan actually beat Dev and locked him in a room

I guess Maan is hoping his beating brings Dev back to the real world

either he fight for his love or let her marry the boy her family has chosen for her

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Posted: 2 years ago

painful update

seeing dev's condition maan lost his trust in love n hate this feeling n emotions related it

maan beat dev when he is thinking about nayantara's safety shocking sudh his mother

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Posted: 2 years ago

any chance of an update?

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will appreciate an update

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Posted: 2 years ago

Please try and update

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