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Originally posted by: MishBirStruck

Wow Ruhi, this was amazing đŸ¤—

Relationships of this time, very modern thoughts and loved the total communication part đŸ‘you nailed it dear đŸ¤—

It was beautiful đŸ¤—

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thanks dear and i m gald u liked it...

i have different takes on relationships so i put them the best possible way i can... 

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thanks dear and i m gald u liked it...

i have different takes on relationships so i put them the best possible way i can... 

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😐 for the late reply I thought I had responded sorry

👍 really enjoyed reading this because it show that you really need to communicate with each other and not show attitude because that does not help in keeping a health relationship.

The story is telling when to 👂 take actions, be quiet, just go with the flow.

It takes a life time before you full understand each other and even then you are learning everyday.

thank you for writing this really 😉 


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Originally posted by: screen22

😐 for the late reply I thought I had responded sorry

👍 really enjoyed reading this because it show that you really need to communicate with each other and not show attitude because that does not help in keeping a health relationship.

The story is telling when to 👂 take actions, be quiet, just go with the flow.

It takes a life time before you full understand each other and even then you are learning everyday.

thank you for writing this really 😉 


dear dont be sorry...

gald u liked and yes i agree communicating is important between the couple...

in my opinion we learn new things everyday and esply in couples as person the journey is started and they have to go trough all challanges that come in their way...

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THE SILENT LOVE STORY...


DEDICATED TO PIYA SINGH (meri pyari piya)


A/N: There will be romance, no fun talks but only conflicts of a girl who dont want accept her husband as he is younger to her.


This part has 7020 words and i tried maximum to edit couldnt make less than this... so the update is really long, please bear with me.


This is a story of Mishbir, where Mishti is elder to Abir than 4 years and they are married and it’s an arranged marriage…

 

Mishti’s age is 30 and Abir is 26. Mishti’s parents want a good life partner for her and they liked Abir profile as it really suits Mishti.


Abir’s family is modern they believe in persons and their values than these norms and when they see Mishti and spoke to her in personal,they liked her and they want Mishti as their DIL.

 

Abir’s parents say to him that they like a girl for him but she is elder than you 4 years, ask him does this age gap matter to him? He says NO, then he ask about her personality and their opinion about her, they said what they feel and they say they make good pair. Abir says I will say my decision only after talking with her.

 

Mishti’s parents meet Abir ,they feel very content and they know their daughter will be happy with him and asks Abir not to inform Mishtia bout the age difference between because she will reject just based on age gap and don’t even see any good qualities in you. He agrees to them and they allow him to meet Mishti.

 

When Mishti meets Abir, he says directly to her that their age gap is 4 years and she is elder to him, she without even talking says NO ,he says both their families don’t have any issues in this and even I don’t have any issue.


 she says but I have and its been not a minute you entered my room and we didn’t even spoke a word about us, then how can you say its not a problem for you.


 He makes her sit, I saw your photos, my parents said what they feel about you and now I seen you in person, that’s enough for me to say a YES.It’s an arranged marriage right? Only we see the qualities and in one or two meeting we decide we want to be this person or not? So I like you and your qualities mainly questioning a stranger or should I say a groom, whom came to see you and talk to you about your likes and dislikes but you are questioning him instead of impressing him.


She says I wont impress anyone to be with me, they have to accept me the way I am and I cant even accept you then why the hell on earth you think I will impress you.


 He say, see this quality of you makes me more to see a good life partner in you.


 she says this can never happen, I didn’t left my brother in this case then how will I leave you?

 

Abir asks what? She says did u see this pic, he is my cousin Kunal, our bond is like more than own siblings and everyone know breaking us is next to impossible but he married a girl who is a year elder to him, that too a love marriage, from the time , I didn’t spoke a word with him nor I attended his wedding.


 He comes here with his wife and we come face to face in social gatherings but I never spoke to him, he tried a lot to convince me but I didn’t and I broke the bond with him.


He says I can see that, she asks how? He says there are 10 photos on your wall and each and every photo you are beside or should I say he is beside you like a protective brother, but only photo which has his wife, you are not with him and both of your body language says you both had a big fight but just took photo for your family. This show what you are? The girl who keeps family first than her emotions and even I like Kunal, he stood for his love against you whom he loves to the core but he never made you rule his heart with your influence.

 

Abir says, I cant convince you in this matter but I am saying YES to our families. She says you cant do that, he says what right you have on me to say this, as you don’t to want to marry a boy who is younger is your opinion and I want to marry a girl who is beautiful and sensible, is my opinion and there is no reason for me to reject you, so I can keep my opinion in front of them. she says this marriage will never happen but he says it will.

 

After a month , both Mishbir are married and everyone knows that Mishti wont accept Abir as husband but Abir convinced everyone that she will accept him very soon. Even families know they are best for each other but Mishti cant see their relationship or them as she is façade by age difference.

 

Mishbir use to live separately and their parents want to this, as giving them this space only makes them to understand and grow in relation. They both live in separate rooms but Abir made a point to have breakfast and dinner with her, he use to help in house chores but she always say him not to impress her with this, he clearly said to her that we are married and there is no need to impress you and I am doing this because I like to do, I am not going over board to help you nor I am not doing the things which I never did before, so don’t give importance to yourself.


Mishti's thoughts:

She is hurt by his words,as he is taunting her, she know this day will come and that’s the reasons she never wanted to get married to a guy younger than her. If she married a guy whois elder to her can never say like this.


Abir's thoughts: 

Abir use to do his work and help her in house chores but constant ramblings from her made him to taunt her but he is happy in a way, as its affecting her, not in a positive way but his words are affecting her so he moved a step forward in their relation.

 

After marriage Mishti is not talking terms with her parents but her parents use to call her daily, she just use to show what she is doing and then disconnects. So Abir is talking to them every day but their parents are guilty as he don’t deserve this from their daughter but he asks what if I am your son and she is your DIL will you think in same manner? They say NO and he says then please support me.

 

One day Abir came late from his work, this didn’t go well with her, as its been 2 months of their marriage but never Abir came late, but today he is and she is bit worried but don’t want to show it. She just said I completed all the work you can have food and sleep. He just nods to her but when he knows she didn’t ate food, he cant ask her directly so he says he already done with dinner and moves to his room. She shows her anger on vessels and goes to her room.

 

She is hungry but she didn’t have food as she is missing him, but she cant accept it, she cant sleep due to hunger but her anger is taking toll, she gave up finally and ate. 


He kept his room door slight open to know whether she has her food or not, when he got to know she has taken her food, he waited for some time and had his food. He is loving this feeling from her but he knows this will never make sense in her that she is habituated to have meals with him and she is concerned for his well being too.

 

After a couple of days, he has to go for a off site trip, so he asked her to go to her mom’s place, but she say NO, I want to be alone and its just matter of 2 days and I am elder than you , I can manage.


 He says why you are always behind our age difference, she just says it’s a fact, he says if it’s a fact then see other facts too. 

She asks which facts? He says your parents love you a lot but you are torturing them without their mistake and Kunal who loves you more, you are punishing him, cant you see the love of him for her or cant you see the beauty of their relationship which is beyond your so called “age factor”.

 

She gets irritated this time and says you  don’t behave like husband and don’t try to teach me, he is my bother and they are my parents I know what I am doing.


He says fine but ask some one to stay here or go to my mom and dad but don’t stay alone. I know you don’t take our marriage as marriage and you wont consider as your husband but for me you are my wife and your safety is important. So decide what you want? 


She says I will go to your mom and dad’s place. He says fine I will drop you there and then I will go to off site, don’t think I want to escort you or anything, I want to meet them before leaving.

 

Abir is busy with his office work in off site but he use to call his parents and ask about her and he said them to make sure she has her meals as she didn’t habit of taking without him. Their parents smiles and tease him but they are happy to see this change in her.

 

These two days even Abir’s parents made silent efforts to make Mishti see Abir as a husband and not to think of age difference, Mishti stayed in Abir’s room and she is just observing each and everything in the room and noticing Abir’s likes but can never admit.


Abir’s mom wantedly makes Mishti to check Abir’s things and how he treasure everything either it may be fashionable or a simple things, if he likes it, he will keep them.  She just want Mishti to see what Abir as a person is? she is slowly succeeding in it by seeing Mishti’s interest in Abir’s choices.

 

Abir called their parents and says he is coming to take Mishti but his mom says to have dinner with them. Mishti and Abir’s mom prepare dinner and while making dinner his mom is very particular about making all Abir’s favourite dishes, as she knows her son well.


Mishti notices, she never prepared his favourite food nor asked him what he want to eat and but she also thinks that he never complained ,when his mother explains how he love these dishes and he can eat them 3 times a day.


When Mishbir are about to leave, they see Ketu arriving and she hugs Abir and keeps on talking with him, Mishti just sees them and don’t know how to react? 


By seeing Mishti’s confusion Abir’s mom says she is Ketu, Abir’s best friend and if they are together they don’t notice anyone. I think you better go to your room and sleep, their talk will take atleast 4 hours to complete.

Mishti nods and goes to their room, she is just watching the clock but actually she is waiting for Abir to return, but he is nowhere seen ,as his mom said after 4 hours he came to room and when she hears his steps she pretends to be sleep but Abir knows Mishti very well and understood that’s she is pretending but he don’t want to say anything and slept.

 

Next morning Mishti is first to wake up and joins Abir’s mom in kitchen and she asks about Abir? Mishti says he is sleeping but his mom says,he will come here in 10 min and prepares Ketu’s favourite breakfast before she wakes up.

Mishti says may be today they wont wake up this early as they slept very late at night but Abir’s mom says what ever time they may sleep but they will have their breakfast on time and its their break fast time, they are a bit health conscious and OCD too. 


Mishti asks OCD? She says YES, Abir don’t like his things to get replaced and he is very particular about their places and direction of keeping them too. Mishti just listens to her but making notes in her mind about Abir’s habits which are really new to her.

 

As Abir’s mom said, he joins them in 10 min but in sulking mode, his mom understands that something in his room is misplaced he kept quiet as he see Mishti but when she is out of kitchen he asks her mom, why did she replace things in his room in a little louder voice which Mishti hears and comes to him , she says she did it and its her fault so he can show angry on her but he says its ok but never do next time and completes his cooking.

 

Ketu and Abir enjoys having breakfast and as usual when they both are together, they wont give a ounce of importance to others, this is really irritating Mishti and she cant even do anything nor understanding anything about her feelings towards him.

 

After breakfast when Mishbir are about to leave , Abir says to Ketu that she should join them for dinner, she says you no need to say it,when we are together our breakfast and dinners are reserved only for both of us.

 

Abir drops Mishti at home and leaves for his work. Mishti took an off from work and she is just thinking of Abir and his closeness with Ketu, she is not feeling good about them but she cant name her feelings, so she kept a stop to her feelings and thinking only about his OCD’s and his likes for food and other things.

 

Abir as usual come on his regular time and says Mishti that he will cook food today as Ketu’s likes his handmade food, Mishti says as your wish and if you want any help say me but he says nothing, I will manage myself and starts cooking.

 Mishti keenly observes him and his way of working, its looking like a professional chef working in kitchen, he is very good at everything and even she is flattered by his skills.


Soon ketu joins for dinner and they talk each and every damn topic but they have their limits and never cross the line, but she is feeling ackward in sitting there so she excuses herself, they both continue their talks and they both clean everything.

 

Abir asks Ketu to stay but she says she will join him for breakfast and leaves form there. Abir’s and Ketu’s routine is going and mishti is feeling left unwanted, its not that Abir gave attention to her but she enjoyed doing meals and work with him but after Ketu is picture there is no scope for her to do anything with Abir. So she is feeling irritated with abir or if she clearly say she is irritated with herself but she wont accept it.

 

It’s a night before Ketu return, Abir made Ketu to stay with him that night and Ketu is not any stranger so she knows equation of Misbir,ketu and Abir spoke a lot that night and their giggles are audible to her till early in the morning, but she kept quiet.

 

Abir’s room door is slightly open and she saw Abir and Ketu sleeping on same bed, they had a safe distance and no one can take them wrong but she couldn’t tolerate what she is seeing, you may call it jealousy or love or any other feeling she couldn’t see her husband sleeping with some one on his bed, it literally left her offended, she left home  to calm herself . she just put a note for Abir.

 

She came from her work place and she is very irritated as they have to bring their husband for office party.

 

When Abir is back he observed her and knows something is bothering her but he kept quiet, suddenly his phone rings and its Kuhu, Mishti was shocked to see Kuhu on name on Abir’s phone as she is Kunal’s wife and how they both know each other.

 

Abir answers call and talks to her very sweetly and when Kuhu says they are coming to their place for some work he happily asks them to come and stay at their place but after call he bites his tongue and says sorry to Mishti and says the matter, she says if you said YES to them then why to ask me again, he says I said yes but I need your opinion as this home belongs to US not only me, she says I never had problem with Kuhu, I only had problem with Kunal and how come you are talking terms with them, he says from our marriage I was talking to Kunal because I like him and suddenly one day Kuhu attended the call from that time we became good friends and talk to each other. 


She says ok say them to come and ask them exact time and day about their arrival, I will make guest room ready. 


He says ok and he gets another call, its from his parents, they inform him they are coming to stay with them for couple of  days,he says fine and says this to Mishti.


 Mishti says I hope the dates shouldn’t clash, he asks why? She asks are you gone mad or dumb? If both will come same dates then where we both will sleep? He says sorry I didn’t think of it.


 He says I will call kunal to confirm dates, after the call he says sadly they are coming on same date, but before Mishti could say anything Abir says I will ask kuku to be at your parents place but Mishti says its ok let them come, we will share a room. 


Abir asks are you sure? She says yes, only if you don’t have any problem, he says if you don’t have any problem then why will I have? She asks whether he will shift to her room or she should shift to his, he says you shift to my room, she says okay and warns him of her habits of not being particular about her things and she can misplace his things too. He says I will adjust but If I get angry please don’t take me wrong as I cant control sometimes, she says ok.


She shifts her things to his room and see everything arranged perfectly and she even notice empty place too, but she just keep her things in suitcase, when Abir see her messy clothes he asks why she didn’t kept them inside? She says you arranged perfectly and I am not good at this, I don’t want spoil yours, he says you can keep in empty space, as i kept that for you, she asks for me? He says YES and one or the other day you will accept us, so I kepti t for you. Abir asks can he help her in arranging, she says yes and they both arrange her clothes.

 

As they were tired, they slept in Abir room only. When he wake up, he see her on the bed and thinks after 2 months at least one dream of his came true. He don’t want to disturb her so he just goes and get ready for office. Mishti too wakes up and understand she is in Abir room, she understand she left the room and she too gets ready for office. She thinks she has a long day today, she has to do breakfast and then go to work, after that she has to welcome her in laws and kuku.

 

Abir calls her for break fast, she sees he did everything and even prepared some things for evening so that it will be easily for her, she thanks him but he says no need to. They leave for office and come back before they arrive.

 

Mishbir welcomes kuku and Abir’s parents, they asks them to get fresh up and join dinner, when they are having dinner, Kunal asks Kuhu to pass some thing as he cant ask Mishti, so knowing their equation she does what he says and Mishti also talks to kuhu nicely as she never had a problem with her, abir’s parents left to their room by leaving these 4 as it was plan by Abir’s parents only to make Mishti realise her feelings for Abir, as they spoke to ketu a few days back and she said her presence affected Mishti but she can never realise until she understands Abir.


 when they 4 sat Abir wanted to mend mishnal relation so he wantedly choose their favourite movies,but Mishti says she wants to watch her favourite movie ,even Kunal says he wants to watch his favourite but they get into argument, Mishti even fights with Kunal to take remote from him and says I am your elder sister, listen tome, Kunal in return says I am younger brother so you have make my wishes full filled, she says NO and watches her fav movie but kunal takes remote, keep his fav movie, mishti even man handles kunal but he wins finally, Abir is seeing them like a mute spectator, his Mishti his wife who is very calm and composed fighting for a TV remote with her brother, she leaves the place when she seethe way Abir stares at her, she goes to their room and she tries to sleep but she couldn’t as she shown her angry avatar infront of Abir , she thinks she did 2 mistakes, one is talking and fighting with kunal like previously and her angry avatar infront of Abir. She curses herself for mishap and sleeps by a frown on her face. Abir sees her frown and enjoys it, as its first time he seensomething in her and smiles. Kunal asks reason for his smile he says I use to see Mishti sleeping calmly but today she has a frown, kunal asks did u check on her daily, he says yes, I love her man, so I have to take care of her and check on her that she is comfortable or not, kunal says I never thought someone will defeat  mishti in having patience but you beat her, she don’t even like you but you love her so much.


Abir says love is different for person to person, I know she don’t like me but she never shown her anger of my parents and I know why I married her.

Abir says good night to them and moves to his room, Kuhu asks Kunal did our plan work, he says NO but I got another idea, where we will play compatibility test and then decide what to plan for them.

 

Next day Abir and Mishti goes for their work places and kuku and Abir’s parents discus next plan. when they return in evening they see Abir’s parents fight and Mishti asks why they are fighting, Abir’s mom says your  father didn’t remember my birthday date, Mishti says it’s a small issue mom why you are getting angry , you ask some other papa will definitely answer correctly, kunal says why only we boys should give the test, even you guys should give, Mishti says we are ready and looks at Kuhu and her mom, they also we are ready.

 

Kunal says, this test show how compatible and how much they love their partner. Mishbir see at each other but they doing this for Abir’s parents.

 

Abir prepares questions for his mom and dad, Mishti prepares for kuku, kunal prepares for Mishbir.

Mishbir check the questions and think definitely they will loose but they gave it a try,

Mishbir questions,

1)     What is the date when they first saw each other?

2)     What is the color of their outfits in their frist meet?

3)     What is each other’s b’day?

4)     What is weird habit of each other ?

5)     What they didn’t like in each other?

6)     What are the ideal qualities they want in their partner?

Mishbir gives their sheets to kunal, where he say you got 80% correct answers , not bad. Abir says yeah that’s true but Mishti says, in couple there should be 100% compatibility

Kuhu says, in couple it will be 100% only if they work for it and for that they have to stay with each other for years, it cant get in few months or few compatibility test or any other. They can be fun but cant judge person based on that, by seeing question I know where kunal can go wrong and my guess was right even kunal says the same thing about kuhu.

 

Abir’s parents says life depends upon on the positive things, if you get 100% then that will be great but if you see 10% or 20% less then you are seeing negative things leaving positivity, so our experience says life only depends and can move on only with positivity.

 

Everyone move to their rooms, Abir says thanks to Mishti,she asks why? He says I don’t know you can remember our first meeting date,color of my outfit and my birthday, you even known my OCD too, I never thought you will observe me. She says if someone could have said before I met you about our age difference then I would have never noticed all these, he asks her to stop this age difference topic, she says this is the problem I said you and now you don’t want to see the problem? He says I know age difference is the problem but that doesn’t make me wrong or you right. She says that will make, at one point or other I can say I am elder than you and you have to listen or I am experienced than you as my age is more than you then situations will get worst and I never wanted that in my relationship.

 

He finally looses his control and says , difference of opinion can be happen at any point of life, if I was elder than you but cant take right decision then I will and should listen to you, maturity and experience doesn’t come with age, they come with circumstance and incidents we go trough in life. Don’t keep age difference and see everything between us, if you really think you are sensible, mature then see me without my age and the judge that I can be a ideal partner or not? Can you do that? She doesn’t give him any answer, he says I know it. Better we sleep now.

 

They both couldn’t sleep due to their conversation, Abir is thinking,he hurt his Mishti and he shouldn’t have spoken to her like that, Mishti is thinking about his words of seeing him as a person and not thinking about his age. 


They sleep with these thoughts in mind but Mishti wakes up suddenly when she feels Abir’s hand on her, she see abir, who is very disturbed,she knows its about some bad dream making Abir like this and she wakes him but he jerks her hand and say NO in loud voice, Mishti carefully handles him and wakes him again, this time he opens his eyes and see Mishti, she hands him water and asks did you see any bad dream, he says yes, she asks do you want share with me? He says no and says thanks to her, I am fine you can sleep now.

She says ok and just closes her eyes but she kept an ear on Abir and also checks on him either he is sleeping or not, but only she can see he is ok and sleep is deprived from him. She checks him time to time and he sleeps slowly which make her sleep too.

 

Next morning kuku get into a discussion, kunal chides with their age gap, kuhu asks not to bring age gap and chide her but he says every couple has some thing special to tease each other and age gap is one for us and there are more too, she lightly slaps kunal and says don’t get naughty in the morning, he says you are my wife I can get what ever I want with you, kuhu asks him to behave as we are in someone’s house , he says fine and stops his advances towards her. Mishbir see them but behaves like they didn’t see anything.

Abir asks kuku how they managed their age difference, kuhu says its just 1 year and that never bothered kunal but it bother me but he said nothing matters to him as he loves me. Kunal never bought that difference between us but I tried to behave and do works like 3 -4 younger to him and kunal didnt like it. He clearly said me to be like what I am, age is just a number that definitely don’t show your personality nor your behaviour, there are no norms to behave according to your age. I love the person who are you and expect to be like that only.


Abir asks who is mature in their relation. Kuhu says maturity doesn’t make relationship perfect, we have to act upon situations and judge them to use maturity or simple ways to solve them. In our relation kunal is more mature but kunal says more than my maturity her simple decisions work for us.

 

Mishti listens all this from kitchen. Abir comes to Mishti and says sorry as he was angry on her previous night without her fault but she says its ok and there is no need to be sorry but he says haq jatane se phele puchna chahiye (I love this line from our show and translation for this, we have to ask other person before showing or asking right on them)


She asks him did he sleep well? He says yeah and thanks for taking care of me, she smiles and ask him if he want to share his dream? He says NO and he helps in kitchen.


They hear door bell ring, Mishti says I will go and check but kuhu says I will check and collect the parcel, kuhu says same thing to Mishti to which Mishti replies to open it. Kuhu does as Mishti says and opens it. Kuhu finds a evening gown and shows it to Mishti and asks when did she order this and on what purpose?


Mishti says for my office annual party but now I don’t want to go so its better I return it, kuhu says as they are here and her in laws so that the reason, Mishti says no that’s not the reason, I just don’t want to go,Abir’s parents to join and says you should go and asks when is the party, she says after a couple of days, but I don’t want to go and leaves from there.

 

Abir’s mom asks kuhu to talk with her, kuhu goes to Mishti and asks to share actual reason if she thinks her as friend, MIshti says you know very well I was never angry on you nor grudges against you, I am just angry on kunal. Kuhu tries to defend kunal but Mishti says I know him better,kuhu again asks about office party , Mishti says I have to go with abir andthat is mandatory, I never went with Abir to any social occasions , as it’s a office party you know what will be atmosphere and what will happen , kuhu says I know but did you ask him either he is interested to come with you or not?Mishti says NO as I don’t want to with him.

 

Abir listens them and comes to Mishti, he says if you don’t have problem then I don’t mind coming with you, Mishti says I don’t want to go,Abir asks her to think again and leaves. Mishbir day goes as usual.

 

Mishbir come to their room to sleep but after some time Abir again sees same dreams and gets disturbed, Mishti notices him again and handles him like previous day and checks on him time to time.


Next morning after break fast , kuku and Abir’s parents leave , Mishti asks Abir about his dream but Abir says its not important, he says some work disturbance so he is getting that same dream, Mishti asks him to share but he says what will I get if I share my dream with you? Mishti says this is not any game or any deal to get something, Abir says I know but I am sharing something with you, I know we are legally husband and wife but we don’t share a relation to at least discuss what is bothering us so if u get something then I can think of sharing with you.

 

Mishti agrees and says what ever you ask for? Abir says are you sure? Mihsti says yes, abir says I want to attend your office party. Mishti says fine and asks him to share his dream but he says after party, Mishti says this is not fair.


 Abir says if I say my dream now there is no guarantee that  you will take me to party so its due and I will definitely share it with you after party, Mishti agrees and they leave for their work.


Mishti comes to Abir’s room for sleeping, Abir asks do you really want sleep here? Mishti asks why he asking that question as she is sleeping in this room from last couple of days, Abir says ,yes I know we are sleeping together from last couple of days because of my parents and kuku are there but now they left and you can sleep in your room , Mishti says I forgot and says sorry, she is about to leave but he says she can sleep here but she says NO, he says what If I get same dream again and who will take care of me?She says you can take care of yourself, Abir wants her to be with him but cant even do anything, he says fine and she leaves.

 

Mishti moves to her room and unable to sleep , she is just thinking of Abir and his dream and what will happen if Abir sees same dream again, how will he take care of himself, she face palms herself, for not listening to Abir . She goes to Abir room and sleeps beside him. Abir again sees the same dream, Mishti takes care of him but today its different thing, Abir is not even in his senses, she slowly makes him drink water.


When he wakes up in morning, Abir feels her hand and this is the first the physical contact happened (till now they never touched each other in any manner) he is happy by having her touch on his body and Mishti is not sleeping but she is half sitting posItion and he understands Mishti took care of him. After seeing Mishti’s sleeping position he can understand she will have some pains so he decides to cook for both of them. She see him all ready and asks him to take rest as he is not well but he says I am perfectly fine but I troubled you, I am sorry for that. She says its fine but asks him to share the dream but he says promise after the party and its tonight right, she nods in ayes, he says if possible take a off you have to relax as you had a long and sleepless night, she says ok and he says I prepared breakfast you just have it.

 

They both leave for party, Mishbir behave according to situation and they didn’t put any effort to behave like a couple in front of others.

Its time for dance and Mishti is not comfortable in dancing with him , he understand that so they made excuses but finally they had to dance as all their escaping attempts gone into drain. They are on dance floor and maintained safe distance but now they have to hold each other, Abir said I will do something but Mishti says its ok, Abir asks can I touch you? She nods in a yes and its the fisrt time both in their senses touching each other,Mishti and Abir enjoys these moments with each other, for Abir it’s a happy moment , but for Mishti she cant process anything she just knows one thing that she is comfortable with Abir’s touch, closeness and gaze. As a woman she knows about a man gaze and can understand what is his intention in that but with Abir it is different and she felt good. Mishti’s friends complimented their pair and their adorable height difference, they openly said to her that you look very younger to him and he looks elder, if we don’t know your age gap, then no one will say you are elder and he is younger. 


Mishbir leave for home and she immediately asks him about his dream, he finally gives up and says its about you leaving me. I know you don’t like me but I like you and I see an ideal life partner in you, so I never want you to leave me and go. Its not attraction or infactuation ,any zidd to be with you, I seen many girls who just tries to impress me either in work or in any match making session but you said you don’t want impress your partner and I feel the same, so I never wanted to miss you , I believe in expressing yourself to your partner than impressing, even you believe the same,so I got a person whom I like, its first attraction when I saw your pic, then I liked you ,why my parents said they like you and finally loved your boldness and your opinion on not impressing your life partner.


She don’t know what to say or what to react and just moves to her room, he says I know it, you definitely move away from me if say this to you.

Msihti calls kunal , he seeing mishti number at odd time he asks is everything okay? she says yes and I need to talk to you, he asks what?She says the conversation between them and kunal says how much you torture him. Mishti gets offeneded by his words but he says I know you have felt bad but today let me talk and you listen, he is a good man and had each and every quality you want in partner or should I say more than you need , he every night checks on just to ensure you are sleeping peacefully or not, you made distance from your parents just because they married you to him but every parent need a good partner for their daughter and if they see the person in Abir then its not their fault, for god sake think of Abir as a person not as a boy who is younger than 4 years and with out hearing her he disconnects.

 

Kunal calls Abir and says the discussion between them ,Abir immediately comes to Mishti and says sorry to her, she asks for what? Just because of him, she has to listen from kunal and he even spoke to you in rudely,so I am sorry. She says he no need to and I just should really work on what both you said, I have to see you as a person and shut my mind regarding age. He says are you sure of it, she says yes I am and I have to confess something to you.

He asks her to go ahead, she says I felt bad seeing you and ketu , I felt unwanted for first time and seeing her on your bed it hurt me a lot,I am not saying I am doubting you but I couldn’t tolerate , even today when my friends praised you I can see them ,eyeing at you and I really felt like snapping them and there is one more thing, I really felt good when we danced together.

 

Abir says did you ever worked upon you, she asks why? He says just answer me , she says no and he comes to her and says, “wife and husband relation has expectation, jealousy and right” on each other, I am seeing all of those in you, if you really want to give chance to us then come to our room.

 

Mishti thinks about everything and then he just remembers Abir’s face while he is having that dream and his touch on her, only these two thing she keeps in her mind and moves to their room and sleeps beside Abir.

Abir says I am happy, she says it doesn’t mean I gave you all rights of husband, he says I know it and I want to take the way you and if you don’t mind rest your hand on me so that I can sleep peacefully and I can say bye to my dream. She smiles at him and he says I have to mark this date, my wife first time smiled at me, that too a genuine one. She holds him and sleeps. They a start new phase of their life with accepting their relationship and building it.

Edited by ruhi19 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

I loved it!  It's something different....🤗 Thank you!

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Posted: 4 years ago

This is so good Ruhi! â¤ď¸ I love how you are keeping all your stories very realistic. I'm able to understand the thought process of both the characters. Though I didn't agree with Mishti's initial approach, I get where she is coming from. Everyone have their own concerns. For me, age doesn't really matter if there is love. 


And I like how you incorporated Kunal in the story. It helped portray the contrast perfectly. Keep writing more Ruhi. I'm waiting for the next story now! đŸ˜ƒ


P.S.: It's funny to imagine Rhea as elder than Shah. She has such a baby face. đŸ˜†

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nicely written

The flow of the story was continues and understood.

How two people have to understand each other when it is arranged marriage is very hard, you are learning everyday, excepting the changes is up to you, understanding each other is down to each person, Abir already excepted her whole heartedly so time was the question, when, patient’s play’s a big part and communication is big key factor in all of this.

🥳applaud you from the bottom of my 💓