Mineil-os-Love confession ----(updated on pg 5) - Page 2

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Posted: 4 years ago

It was good .Keep writing.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: N_sharmaa

It was good .Keep writing.

Thanx... Will try

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Very nice .Liked it.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

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Very nice .Liked it.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

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Accha likha hai

Detailing accha laga 


Kabh ek doosre ko pyaar hua 

Kabh dono ke dil mein feelings chalu hua 

Ye sab acche se likha hai


Show mein b kuch aise hi discussion honi chahiye

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: zalima

Accha likha hai

Detailing accha laga 


Kabh ek doosre ko pyaar hua 

Kabh dono ke dil mein feelings chalu hua 

Ye sab acche se likha hai


Show mein b kuch aise hi discussion honi chahiye

Thanks a lot .. ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™

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Posted: 4 years ago

Khichdi for passing a time 


(Neil niche wait kar raha hai of both sister. They all are going delhi)


Neil: are yaar jaldi karo, kitna time loge dono


Arya: Iam ready neil. Mai kaisi lag rahi hu?


Neil: ekdum princess. Badi madam aur kitna time logi


Arya: heroine apne sasural jane ke liye taiyar ho rahi hai. Time toh lagega na. Sundar jo dikhna hai


Mini: chutanki, bahut bolti ho tum. Are woh to bas kuch extra samaan carry karna tha isliye time lag gaya.


Neil: woh toh dikh raha hai, time samaan carry karne me laga ya kisi aur me. Ab chalo. (Neil whisper to her ear) waise, aaj bahut pretty lag rahi ho.


Mini: shutup. Ab chalo. ( She starts blushing)


Arya: mai corner pe baithungi.


Neil: mai bhi corner pe baithunga.


Mini: ooh ho. Jisko jahan baithna hai baitho. Babes ki mata rani. Aage sabkuch acha ho.. plz plz


(In a car ride, mini holds neil hand)


Neil: mini kya kar rahi ho, arya dekh legi.


Mini: woh so rahi hai. Agar dekhti bhi toh kya. Use sab maloom hai. Shaitan ki nani hai.

(She kept her head on his shoulder)


Neil: but tumne toh bola tha, mini ko impress karna itna asaan nhi hai.


Mini: u... Jao, mujhe tumse baat nhi karni.


Neil: are sorry sorry.. ( he laughs and hug her)


Mini: u better be. 

(He kiss on her forehead and they sleep on same posture for rest of the journey)

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Vishal_m.neil

Khichdi for passing a time 


(Neil niche wait kar raha hai of both sister. They all are going delhi)


Neil: are yaar jaldi karo, kitna time loge dono


Arya: Iam ready neil. Mai kaisi lag rahi hu?


Neil: ekdum princess. Badi madam aur kitna time logi


Arya: heroine apne sasural jane ke liye taiyar ho rahi hai. Time toh lagega na. Sundar jo dikhna hai


Mini: chutanki, bahut bolti ho tum. Are woh to bas kuch extra samaan carry karna tha isliye time lag gaya.


Neil: woh toh dikh raha hai, time samaan carry karne me laga ya kisi aur me. Ab chalo. (Neil whisper to her ear) waise, aaj bahut pretty lag rahi ho.


Mini: shutup. Ab chalo. ( She starts blushing)


Arya: mai corner pe baithungi.


Neil: mai bhi corner pe baithunga.


Mini: ooh ho. Jisko jahan baithna hai baitho. Babes ki mata rani. Aage sabkuch acha ho.. plz plz


(In a car ride, mini holds neil hand)


Neil: mini kya kar rahi ho, arya dekh legi.


Mini: woh so rahi hai. Agar dekhti bhi toh kya. Use sab maloom hai. Shaitan ki nani hai.

(She kept her head on his shoulder)


Neil: but tumne toh bola tha, mini ko impress karna itna asaan nhi hai.


Mini: u... Jao, mujhe tumse baat nhi karni.


Neil: are sorry sorry.. ( he laughs and hug her)


Mini: u better be. 

(He kiss on her forehead and they sleep on same posture for rest of the journey)

It was.....

Lovelyโค๏ธ

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Posted: 4 years ago

It's was good ๐Ÿ˜†