It was good .Keep writing.
It was good .Keep writing.
Originally posted by: N_sharmaa
It was good .Keep writing.
Thanx... Will try
Very nice .Liked it.๐๐ผ
Very nice .Liked it.๐๐ผ
Thanx...
Superb os
Thanx
Accha likha hai
Detailing accha laga
Kabh ek doosre ko pyaar hua
Kabh dono ke dil mein feelings chalu hua
Ye sab acche se likha hai
Show mein b kuch aise hi discussion honi chahiye
Accha likha hai
Detailing accha laga
Kabh ek doosre ko pyaar hua
Kabh dono ke dil mein feelings chalu hua
Ye sab acche se likha hai
Show mein b kuch aise hi discussion honi chahiye
Thanks a lot .. ๐๐
Khichdi for passing a time
(Neil niche wait kar raha hai of both sister. They all are going delhi)
Neil: are yaar jaldi karo, kitna time loge dono
Arya: Iam ready neil. Mai kaisi lag rahi hu?
Neil: ekdum princess. Badi madam aur kitna time logi
Arya: heroine apne sasural jane ke liye taiyar ho rahi hai. Time toh lagega na. Sundar jo dikhna hai
Mini: chutanki, bahut bolti ho tum. Are woh to bas kuch extra samaan carry karna tha isliye time lag gaya.
Neil: woh toh dikh raha hai, time samaan carry karne me laga ya kisi aur me. Ab chalo. (Neil whisper to her ear) waise, aaj bahut pretty lag rahi ho.
Mini: shutup. Ab chalo. ( She starts blushing)
Arya: mai corner pe baithungi.
Neil: mai bhi corner pe baithunga.
Mini: ooh ho. Jisko jahan baithna hai baitho. Babes ki mata rani. Aage sabkuch acha ho.. plz plz
(In a car ride, mini holds neil hand)
Neil: mini kya kar rahi ho, arya dekh legi.
Mini: woh so rahi hai. Agar dekhti bhi toh kya. Use sab maloom hai. Shaitan ki nani hai.
(She kept her head on his shoulder)
Neil: but tumne toh bola tha, mini ko impress karna itna asaan nhi hai.
Mini: u... Jao, mujhe tumse baat nhi karni.
Neil: are sorry sorry.. ( he laughs and hug her)
Mini: u better be.
(He kiss on her forehead and they sleep on same posture for rest of the journey)
Originally posted by: Vishal_m.neil
Khichdi for passing a time
(Neil niche wait kar raha hai of both sister. They all are going delhi)
Neil: are yaar jaldi karo, kitna time loge dono
Arya: Iam ready neil. Mai kaisi lag rahi hu?
Neil: ekdum princess. Badi madam aur kitna time logi
Arya: heroine apne sasural jane ke liye taiyar ho rahi hai. Time toh lagega na. Sundar jo dikhna hai
Mini: chutanki, bahut bolti ho tum. Are woh to bas kuch extra samaan carry karna tha isliye time lag gaya.
Neil: woh toh dikh raha hai, time samaan carry karne me laga ya kisi aur me. Ab chalo. (Neil whisper to her ear) waise, aaj bahut pretty lag rahi ho.
Mini: shutup. Ab chalo. ( She starts blushing)
Arya: mai corner pe baithungi.
Neil: mai bhi corner pe baithunga.
Mini: ooh ho. Jisko jahan baithna hai baitho. Babes ki mata rani. Aage sabkuch acha ho.. plz plz
(In a car ride, mini holds neil hand)
Neil: mini kya kar rahi ho, arya dekh legi.
Mini: woh so rahi hai. Agar dekhti bhi toh kya. Use sab maloom hai. Shaitan ki nani hai.
(She kept her head on his shoulder)
Neil: but tumne toh bola tha, mini ko impress karna itna asaan nhi hai.
Mini: u... Jao, mujhe tumse baat nhi karni.
Neil: are sorry sorry.. ( he laughs and hug her)
Mini: u better be.
(He kiss on her forehead and they sleep on same posture for rest of the journey)
It was.....
Lovelyโค๏ธ
It's was good ๐
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