Mineil confession scene.
(Mini and neil returns home from the restaurant.Neil mini ko thanx bolna chahta tha for supporting him. He was lost in her thaught suddenly, she says)
Mini: ok. Neil good night.... (Neil chauk jata hai,, )
Neil: haan!!..... mini please 1 minute ke liye mere room me aao. Kaam hai.
Mini: Itne raat me kya kaam hai neil, mujhe nhi aana.
Neil: Aao toh, tum bhi na bahut ziddi ho.
(Neil open his cupboard and usme se apni mother ki golden chain nikalta hai. Different from that heart shape locket )
Neil: Mini, yeh meri mother ki chain hai. Mere dil ke sabse close. Yeh mai tumhe dena chahta hu.
(mini was shocked. )
Mini: But, mujhe q neil.
Neil: Kyunki tum nhi jaanti, tum mere liye kya ho. You are very special for me. Iss relation ko kya naam du I don't know, but yeh joh aaj tumne mere liye kiya. Bas uska hi chota sa gift.
(Neil mini ko chain pehnata hai. Mini was very happy. )
Mini: Thanks neil.
(She looks at mirror with chain and starts to blush.)
(Neil apne pillow se letter nikalkar mini ko deta hai. )
Mini: Neil yeh kya hai.
Neil: Yeh maine delhi se aane ke baad likha tha for you. Isme mera sab confession hai, which is very important for you to know.
(He hand over the letter to her and she starts to read it.)
(After reading the letter she was very happy inside the heart as her love was not one sided. Neil also loves her a lot. She was crying.)
Neil: You are crying mini. What happen. Please say something.
Mini: Kya bolu neil? Haan!!.... Tumhe bahut shouk hai na mujhe hurt karne ka. Itne dino tak mai soch soch kar mare ja rahi thi, kya meri feeling one sided hai, kya neil mujhe sach me chahta hai. Agar chahta hai toh confess q nhi karta. Mai confess karne ka try karti hu toh piche q hat jata hai. Kya yeh sirf friendship hi hai. Yeh sab sochkar mai andar se ghut rahi thi neil.
Neil: mai darta tha yaar. Darta tha ki tum mere past ko kaise carry karogi. 5 saal se mai patiala me hu. Mini, loneliness ya toh insaan ko practical banati hai ya emotional. Parents ke jaane ke baad mai akela tha. I was desparate for love nd i fall for isha. But usne mujhe sirf dokha diya. Meri khudki beti ko mujhse alag kar diya. Mai tut chuka tha mini andar se. Patiala aane ke baad maine apne andar ke emotions ko maar diya. Ab mujhe sirf practical life jeena tha. Kaam ko hi apni duniya bna li. Perfection, professionalism, dedication, this all are i demanded from work.
Mini: Practical. Really. But you know, What i can see, you are more emotional than practical.
Neil: Jab maine tumhe first time dekha tha. Pta nahi kaise, my emotions become heavier than my practicality. Tumhara nervous hona during interview, woh face pe innocence, cute si smile, hair ko theek karna, fake ghussa, this all started to attract me for you. But i tried to control my feeling mini. But arya, pta nhi kaise i started to see my daughter in her. Ek alag sa attachment ho gaya usse. Uska hasna, ruthna, zid karna, uski innocent si baate, aisa laga mini jaise meri beti yeh sab kar rahi ho. Beti ka bachpan toh maine miss kar diya, but arya ke saath apni attachment mai nhi khona chahta tha. At that moment, my emotions started to play with practicality. Uski wishes puri karna, uske liye tumse ladna, andar se ek alag si khushi milne lagi thi mujhe. Fir bhi ek akelapan tha mini life me. As if mujhe zindagi ko aage badane kisi partner ki talash ho. Jo mere liye dusro se lade. Mere problem ko apni problem samjhkar handle kare.
(She was listening this all very carefully and then hold his hand)
Mini: Fir,
Neil: Mujhe paiso ki requirement thi to pay my rent. Tumne mere liye cash arrange kia jabki tumhe khud paiso ki jarurt thi. Then, party me kaise ek ladki ki ijjat tumne bachai thi without caring ki usse restaurant ko nuksaan ho sakta hai. Fir apni maami se jaghadkar mujhe apna kirayedar bnana without caring of society. Uske baad mere liye room sajana. Itna sab mere liye kisi ne nhi kiya tha mini. Your golden nature, badass and caring attitude, this forcibly fall me to your love. Arya aur tumhari fight hui thi. I could see, you desparately wanted her to be with you. Afterall wahi toh tumhari family thi, tumne uski parvarish ke liye khudke career ko sacrifice kar diya. Akele me tumhara rona. Bahar sab theek hai dikhana, apni problem ko khud tak rakhna. I could sense ki tumhe bhi koi chaiye, jo tumhara pain share kare, tumhe motivate kare. Tumhe samjhe, tumhe sahara de. Kahe tumse ki haa mini, mai hu tumhare saath don't worry. So i started to be with you mini. Initially as a friend i tried to treat you. Make you feel happy. But yahi friendship pyar me kab badal gayi. Pta hi nhi chala.
Mini: Mai bhi toh tumhe pasand karne lag gayi thi neil. Dadu, biji aur naeem bi, jo mere khudki family hai, unhone meri problem nhi suni. But tumhne mujhe samjha. Meri saari problem suni without judging me. Mai jab tut chuki thi tab tumne mujhe sambhala tha. Chahte toh situation ka advantage le sakte the. But tumne aisa nahi kiya. Yeh tumhari achai show karti hai neil. Agar tab bhagwan bhi aake mujhse kehte ki yeh ladka tumhare liye sahi nhi hai. Tab mai unse bhi lad jaati. I tried many time to convey my feeling, but tum piche hat jaate the. Tab mujhe feel hota tha, as if my love is one sided aur tum mujhe bas apna dost maante ho.
Neil: Mai piche isliye hota tha because my past was bitter which you may not be very comfortable to be with it. Darta tha, pyar paane ke chakkar me kahi dost na loose kar du. Jab tumne mujhse promise maanga, at that time, i decided to give my life a second chance. Delhi jaake isha se saare rishte todna chahta tha. Delhi se mai jab return aaya, tab maine tumhare andar ek tadap dekhi. Tadap jo chahti thi ki mujhse lipat jao aur kabhi khudse alag na jane du. I could sense you there mini jab accident ki news sunkar tum andar se ro rahi thi. Usi waqt mai tumhe apne past aur apni feelings btana chahta tha. Tumhe toe ring dena mera indirect confession hi tha. Tab bhi mai btana chahta tha, but khatri aa gaya. Fir arya ne mujhse kaha ki letter se apni baat bol do. Par woh letter bhi gum hokar naeem bi ke paas chala gaya. Mujhe lga tumne woh letter padke mujhe second chance diya hai. I was so happy mini to start my new life with you. 5 saal me pehli baar maine holi kheli. But tumne woh letter nhi pada tha. Tab mai tumhe delhi lekar gaya, taaki tum mera past dekh sako. Waha se aake mujhe laga that i lost you. Mai tumse baate clear karna chahta tha but naeem bi wants me to go away from your life for your betterment. So, i decided to resign from patiala babes. But you from own, meri story sunne chali aayi and finally you understand my pain.
Mini: Who is Naeem bi to take a decision of my life neil. Yes, delhi se return aake mai tut chuki thi. Kyunki maine expect nhi kiya tha that you have a wife and daughter. Mujhe aisa laga that you cheated me. But You never cheated me. As tumne toh kabhi confess kiya tha hi nhi toh kaisa cheat. Tumhara past janne ke baad i understand your problem. Your emotional state. You deserved a second chance neil. Hum tumhare haq ke liye ladenge. Tumhari ladai ab hamari ladai hai. And we will won.
(They hug each other.)
Neil: Thank you mini meri life me aane ke liye. Mujhe samjhne ke liye aur mera saath dene ke liye. Uss din tumne promise maanga tha na ki kabhi nhi jaoge mujhe chodke. I promise mini, that i will be there forever for you. Mai tumpar ek aanch bhi nhi aane dunga. Jo bhi tumhara sapna hoga, mai us har sapne ko pura karunga. Kabhi tumhe hurt nhi karunga. I promise. I love you mini.. i love you so much.
Mini: I love you too neil. Don't worry. Ek bar yeh case khatam ho jaye. Tab hum apni ek choti si duniya basayenge. Hamari pyari si duniya.
Neil: Haa... Ab mere saath mini madam hai toh mujhe kisi se darne ki jarurat bhi nhi hai. Afterall karate aate hai madam ko.
Mini: Bas haa ab, bahut hui taarif. Chalo so jao ab. Kal restaurant jana hai ya nhi. Sleep.. good night.
Neil: Goofy girl... Good night
(She goes to her room)
[ I know it's bit dramatic, lengthy and boring. But this is my first ever story writing. So, please bear it. 🙏🙏]
comment:
p_commentcount