awww Itni tareef sunke yakeen nahi ho raha😆 thank youOriginally posted by: pranurosid
It's okay.. Actually superb.. Not even that, It's great❤️
Just said in Rudy's style..It was awesome dude
But please do give us a happy ending in the next story❤️
me😕😆
Are you serious? I am feeling like you people are trying to motivate me bas. Is it really good kya?🤓
Arey ofcourse it's good. The think that stood out most is that you have written them almost close their true selves. Don't doubt your talent.
And we will motivate you na so we can read more of your amazing one shots. 😆
okay then why are you crying😭
Because they didnt get a happy ending😭💔
But sad endings has a different charm ❤️
oye matlabi😆Originally posted by: alizia_malik
Arey ofcourse it's good. The think that stood out most is that you have written them almost close their true selves. Don't doubt your talent.
And we will motivate you na so we can read more of your amazing one shots. 😆
dont cry puspa..i hate tears🤣Originally posted by: Confused-aatma
Because they didnt get a happy ending😭💔
But sad endings has a different charm ❤️
I so loved the ending. It was so unexpected yet it perfectly suited for the character Rudra is for real 👍🏼Totally loved it ❤️
thank you..i just imagined them in a situation where mayra loves each other yet they cant be one. Because maya motive is to destroy mj causing his family a collateral damaged while ... Rudra is strength of family and wont ever choose his love over his family.Originally posted by: BitterBerry
I so loved the ending. It was so unexpected yet it perfectly suited for the character Rudra is for real 👍🏼Totally loved it ❤️
His action was to stop her and give the taste of her own medicine while clearly warning her that he is there in between her and family and she has to go through him to harm them. So yeah😆
I guess,I am the most late here to read this.
Better late than never!!
Yooo!!❤️
You write perfectly with exotic twists.💔
I really would want you to write the next part from Maya's part.Though Rudra is correct in terms of saving his family,but I wanna parts where he also gets to know the reason behind her action and if not support,at least moralise her actions please
thank you..i just imagined them in a situation where mayra loves each other yet they cant be one. Because maya motive is to destroy mj causing his family a collateral damaged while ... Rudra is strength of family and wont ever choose his love over his family.
His action was to stop her and give the taste of her own medicine while clearly warning her that he is there in between her and family and she has to go through him to harm them. So yeah😆
@bold
That'll probably be a real conflict we'd see once Rudra falls for Maya and at the same time finds about her intentions to hurt his family
Your story is very relatable here 👍🏼
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