The Date - #MayRa OS - Page 2

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

this was such an amazing os! superbly written!

thankyou so much🤗

Originally posted by: Nikki_srk

This is wonderful...

Loved reading it.

thankyou so much🤗

Originally posted by: Guneet80

Oh no! Damn I was so hooked like he was proposing her but it was game 😭

But I guess, Rudra answered Maya in her own language.

I loved how you portrayed suppressed feelings in both of them specially Maya responding to Rudra's touch

I hope you write one sexy piece after this! It's janta's demand. 😆

Anyway thank you for writing this, I completely loved it. ❤️

actually i thought to write how Rudra is in dilemma between love and family. His love will hury his family. He wants to stop her but he knows she wont and so he did this to fail her plan.

Originally posted by: Armu4eva

Wow so beautifully tragic🥺

Loved it. Your so creative🤗

thankyou..i really hope you are telling the truth..it's quite wierd you know to hear compliments😆

Originally posted by: Confused-aatma

So beautiful 😭❤️

okay then why are you crying😭

Originally posted by: katheriene

Superb os👏

The ending was tragic😭

Loved this os

sorry

Originally posted by: kuhelidebbarma

Brilliant yaar..

The ending😭

Please keep we more🤗

i will try🤗

Originally posted by: alizia_malik

Tiara! You hidden Rockstar😉

Another amazing one shot. I was so so into the moment and then it was the game. You playing with us huh? But so beautifully written. I just loved it. Keep them coming

me😕😆

Are you serious? I am feeling like you people are trying to motivate me bas. Is it really good kya?🤓

Originally posted by: MusicOfTheHeart

Sad ending😭 But nicely written. Both voiced out their feelings but then cover up ! Yeh dono sach mai kabhi nahi samjenge😒

rudy and maya are paheli

Originally posted by: pranurosid

It's okay.. Actually superb.. Not even that, It's great❤️

Just said in Rudy's style..It was awesome dude

But please do give us a happy ending in the next story❤️

awww Itni tareef sunke yakeen nahi ho raha😆 thank you