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thankyou❤Originally posted by: GrilledCheese
this was such an amazing os! superbly written!
thankyou❤Originally posted by: GrilledCheese
this was such an amazing os! superbly written!
thankyou so much🤗Originally posted by: GrilledCheese
this was such an amazing os! superbly written!
actually i thought to write how Rudra is in dilemma between love and family. His love will hury his family. He wants to stop her but he knows she wont and so he did this to fail her plan.Originally posted by: Guneet80
Oh no! Damn I was so hooked like he was proposing her but it was game 😭
But I guess, Rudra answered Maya in her own language.
I loved how you portrayed suppressed feelings in both of them specially Maya responding to Rudra's touch
I hope you write one sexy piece after this! It's janta's demand. 😆
Anyway thank you for writing this, I completely loved it. ❤️
thankyou..i really hope you are telling the truth..it's quite wierd you know to hear compliments😆
i will try🤗
me😕😆Originally posted by: alizia_malik
Tiara! You hidden Rockstar😉
Another amazing one shot. I was so so into the moment and then it was the game. You playing with us huh? But so beautifully written. I just loved it. Keep them coming
Are you serious? I am feeling like you people are trying to motivate me bas. Is it really good kya?🤓
rudy and maya are paheliOriginally posted by: MusicOfTheHeart
Sad ending😭 But nicely written. Both voiced out their feelings but then cover up ! Yeh dono sach mai kabhi nahi samjenge😒
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