The Date - #MayRa OS - Page 4

Originally posted by: tasnimrayian

I guess,I am the most late here to read this.

Better late than never!!

Yooo!!❤️

You write perfectly with exotic twists.💔

I really would want you to write the next part from Maya's part.Though Rudra is correct in terms of saving his family,but I wanna parts where he also gets to know the reason behind her action and if not support,at least moralise her actions please

thankyou so much!!😳 

okay the last line..I will write it today and post!🤗

Originally posted by: MISTInew

IT'S wonderful!!! Loved the last Part!!!!🤗👏❤️

Originally posted by: BitterBerry

@bold

That'll probably be a real conflict we'd see once Rudra falls for Maya and at the same time finds about her intentions to hurt his family

Your story is very relatable here 👍🏼

Very intense... Rudra rolled the same dice as Maya. He won, he lost same as Maya..beautiful writing

Wow This was amazing

I was hoping that Rudra will give Maya a life which she craved for but sigh he didn't

But I have a question, is Rishi dead in your story?

its superb . loved it .thnk uuuu 🤗

yaar ye saare acche writer sirf OS kyun likhte hain ....ek looooonnng sa ff kyu ni ?😔