The Date - #MayRa OS - Page 3

Originally posted by: Tiaraa

me😕😆

Are you serious? I am feeling like you people are trying to motivate me bas. Is it really good kya?🤓

Arey ofcourse it's good. The think that stood out most is that you have written them almost close their true selves. Don't doubt your talent.

And we will motivate you na so we can read more of your amazing one shots. 😆

Originally posted by: Tiaraa

okay then why are you crying😭

Because they didnt get a happy ending😭💔

But sad endings has a different charm ❤️

Originally posted by: alizia_malik

Arey ofcourse it's good. The think that stood out most is that you have written them almost close their true selves. Don't doubt your talent.

And we will motivate you na so we can read more of your amazing one shots. 😆

Originally posted by: Confused-aatma

Because they didnt get a happy ending😭💔

But sad endings has a different charm ❤️

I so loved the ending. It was so unexpected yet it perfectly suited for the character Rudra is for real 👍🏼Totally loved it ❤️

Originally posted by: BitterBerry

I so loved the ending. It was so unexpected yet it perfectly suited for the character Rudra is for real 👍🏼Totally loved it ❤️

His action was to stop her and give the taste of her own medicine while clearly warning her that he is there in between her and family and she has to go through him to harm them. So yeah😆

I guess,I am the most late here to read this.

Better late than never!!

Yooo!!❤️

You write perfectly with exotic twists.💔

I really would want you to write the next part from Maya's part.Though Rudra is correct in terms of saving his family,but I wanna parts where he also gets to know the reason behind her action and if not support,at least moralise her actions please

IT'S wonderful!!! Loved the last Part!!!!🤗👏❤️

Originally posted by: Tiaraa

thank you..i just imagined them in a situation where mayra loves each other yet they cant be one. Because maya motive is to destroy mj causing his family a collateral damaged while ... Rudra is strength of family and wont ever choose his love over his family.

His action was to stop her and give the taste of her own medicine while clearly warning her that he is there in between her and family and she has to go through him to harm them. So yeah😆

@bold

That'll probably be a real conflict we'd see once Rudra falls for Maya and at the same time finds about her intentions to hurt his family

Your story is very relatable here 👍🏼

Originally posted by: tasnimrayian

I guess,I am the most late here to read this.

Better late than never!!

Yooo!!❤️

You write perfectly with exotic twists.💔

I really would want you to write the next part from Maya's part.Though Rudra is correct in terms of saving his family,but I wanna parts where he also gets to know the reason behind her action and if not support,at least moralise her actions please

thankyou so much!!😳

okay the last line..I will write it today and post!🤗