Samaina SS- Hum Aapke Hai Kaun Part 5 p.77 closing Note p82 - Page 52

Please don't reduce the chapters for this...

Why such sudden decision?




Edited by Richa0305 - 5 years ago

Awww it is so emotional
How do you write such beautiful dialogues and from where you get ideas while explaining their love and emotions there are so many beautiful lines my most fav are : the thousand open wounds she could fill with one kiss and last paragraph.
Naina thinking about her sameer and moments soent with him their daily routine is so cute
Sameer has always lost his loved ones sb sy phly dad then us ki mother phr nanu and yes naina too sharad k time p though naina is now with him and everything thing has changed but that fear that pain that feeling of loneliness haunts him he has seen naina moving forward in life when he became baba actually sameer trust naina but not his fate he needs naina love her time her affection 24x7 he can't imagine of living a single moment without her all he has is naina and all he needs is naina
You are so expert in writing their romantic encounters each time you explain their kiss with different emotions and level of detail you are amazing and very talented writer dear may God bless you :)
And yes please don't stop writing i am HUGE HUGE HUGE fan of yours:)

Passiinate update as usual jaise pehle ki thi saari.  You incrrase out expectations ine afyer another... he needs to touch her to feel her at ecery nano sec of his kyf and truly they are made for eCh other she is ready to fulfikk his desire to keep hum cakm to make him trust comoletly that she us just gis no ther person can cm between them..thier chemistry is at abother level when writers like you word tgen. Ur nazariya tiwards thier as a couple take them to some other level...keep on going dear.dont be upset so times uts diificult to gv reaponse spontNeously due to one or otherreason...no one do it in purpose 

Originally posted by: suhaaana

Thanks for updating..

It was something in between the fine line of argument leading to a well balanced introception of Sameer''s feelings..

Thank you for reading and commenting! I am glad you liked that because Sameer's feelings are so complex I didn't want them to feel too simplistic neither too complication so its good to know it was well-balanced.

I really like how Naina could tell that past is something which will take time to erase for Sameer..

Sameer was kind of demanding Naina to know his POV too and she did that..

Thats the beauty of their relationship.They understand each other so well and know whats needed and when its needed. They can do anything for each other because of that emotional tether. 

Whatever was there between Kartik and Sunaina , it is affecting samaina 

Though Sameer is kind of disturbed but I am sure his confusion will definitely be resolved.

He is scared , relationships he had in past had resulted in his heart break , and now he is only having Naina , I can understand him very well for not liking Kartik..

Waise bhi ladkon Ko jaldi samjh aate h intentions of other guys if his girl  is eyed eyed upon.. maybe Sameer knew too.. 

I just hope there would be a confrontation with Kartik too.. 

Will be waiting for new parts 

Much love 

Suhana

Originally posted by: IamIbe

NOTE: Due to the dwindling and rather upsetting response to this story, I have decided to keep it a short one. And if the response dwindles further I will shorten the no of chapters from 15 to possibly 7 or 8. That's all for now dears! 

Hey pls update this...be positive n think about those who like ur work

Hello All!  Edited by IamIbe - 5 years ago

Originally posted by: IamIbe

Hello All! 

I know how my loyal readers must be feeling but its also important that people leave reviews. I do love writing but the updates I put here take a lot out of my time and effort. I constantly rework the first draft to give my readers the best and its extremely saddening when your readers don't even bother to leave one word for your hard work. Responses are important to me and I am not asking you all to praise me here but to provide genuine feedback about what stood out to you, what you liked, what you want to see ahead. It keeps me motivated to continue writing despite the time crunch in my personal life. 

And this is something my loyal readers give me so I have decided for their sake I will see this story through, give it the updates it needs to resolve the premise I set out. But I do not promise to continue on IF. That will be decided based on the response I get in the future. Again my loyal readers need not worry because they will be the only ones to receive the link to the alternate platform. Kindly be patient for the next update as I am going on a trip starting next week but will try my best. 

Bundles of love, 

Sims