Humne chaha tumhe pagalon ki tarah SamAina SS

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Humne chaha tumhe pagalon ki tarah..I loved you dottily..Part 1

 

 I dedicate this SS to my sweet friend Kavithadevi5 who wants me to write the Ali-Riya track from my old FF Golden flies on Sameer Naina.So this is the remake of Ali-Riya track in 'Golden flies' with a few changes.

 

A new teacher named Priya joined the school.
Priya was walking on the corridor.

"Excuse me".

She turned back hearing it.She saw a man with glasses.

PRIYA:Yes..?

He:You are the new teacher.Right?

PRIYA:Yes.For maths.

He:Good.Our school needed a good maths teacher like you.

She smiled.

He:I am Kishore from the biology department.

PRIYA:O!Nice to meet you Sir.

She shook his hands.

He:You seem to be very soft.But i don't know whether the students will be sweet with you.

PRIYA:Why?
He:Because they are very notorious.But since you are too sweet i think they will be sweet with you,
She just smiled.
He:Anyways all the best.
PRIYA:Thank you Sir.

He:Donโ€™t call me Sir as we are colleagues.Call me Kishore.

He walked away with a mischievous smile.Raunak was watching this with anger.He walked towards her.
Raunak:Good morning Ma'am.Welcome to our school.
PRIYA:Good morning and thank you for the welcome.
Raunak:Ma'am...you are being fooled on the first day itself.That was not the physics Sir Kishore.

PRIYA:What?

Raunak:Kishore Sir is old.That guy is Pandit.He is the funniest of the Glittering stars.
PRIYA:Glittering stars?
Raunak:Yes,the notorious gang of our school.Be careful Ma'am.


Priya was shocked.Priya turned back.
He saw Pandit smirking at her removing his glasses.Priya was stunned.

She thought:How can a student fool a teacher like this?What generation is this?
Priya entered the class.
Everyone wished her.

PRIYA:Hi students...I am your new Maths teacher.

Raunak whispered:So hot!

Priya's eyes fell on Pandit.She stared at him.
PRIYA:Stand up Pandit.
Pandit stood up.
Raunak giggled.He said in his mind:Pandit will be taken to the Principal's  room now.
PANDIT:I am sorry Ma'am.I did'nt mean to hurt you.
PRIYA:You prankster!
Slowly she smiled.
Pandit and Raunak were shocked about her reaction.
PANDIT:Means...you are not angry with me?
PRIYA:No.This is normal among the school students of this generation.

PANDIT was relieved.

PRIYA:But don't repeat this.
PANDIT:No Ma'am...

Raunak got irritated.
PRIYA:So you are a Glittering star?
PANDIT:Yes Ma'am.
PRIYA:Where are the other Glittering stars?
PANDIT turned back and looked at a girl who as lying down on the bench.
PRIYA:Who is sleeping during the class hours?

Suddenly that girl got up.

She:I am sorry Ma'am.Usually Maths hours are boring.So i go to sleep even before the Maths teacher comes.

Everybody laughed.
PRIYA:What nonsense!I won't let you sleep during my class.Because i assure you that my class will be interesting.
She:Ok...i will try one class.If it's not interesting i will go back to sleep.
PRIYA:Listening to your talk i doubt whether you are a Glittering star.
She:Yes...I am the Glittering star Preeti.
PRIYA:Ok..
The boy who was sitting next to Preeti whispered to her:Preeti..i told you not to sleep now.
PREETI:Hey...if you advise me too much I will go to permament sleep.Then don't complain that you can't concentrate due to my snoring.
Everybody laughed.
PRIYA:By the way who are you?
He:I am Manoj Ma'am.
PREETI:He is the most boring Glittering star.He  always spends time in the library.We call him Munna.
PRIYA:Then how did you become a Glittering star?I mean all other Glittering stars are pranksters.Right?Then how come decent guy become a Glittering star?
Manoj:I don't know how we became friends.We are best buddies.

Priya smiled.
Suddenly she heard some voice.
"May we come in Ma'am?".
Priya turned back.They were Swati and Sameer.
PRIYA:You guys don't have a watch?Don't you know that you can't be late to the class?
Sameer:We are just 15 minutes late Ma'am.

Swati:Yes.Usually we are one hour late.

PRIYA:What?One hour late?How are you saying that so casually?You don't know the value of discipline?

Swati did not care.
Swati:By the way you are Priya Ma'am.Right?We heard from the peon that a new Maths teacher is coming.That's why we came early today.

Priya was irritated.
PRIYA:Why did you guys become late?Tell me.
Swati:The whole night we were partying.So we could'nt sleep.So we woke up late.
PRIYA:Partying at pubs?You guys are only in the school.Still going to pubs?
Swati:We are in school.But we are not kids.We will turn 18 in a few months.School life is going to get over.Right?
PRIYA:Are you guys Glittering stars?
They smiled:Yes Ma'am.

Priya:Seeing your attitude I guessed so.
They introduced themselves individually.
PRIYA:Well...this is the first class.So i am forgiving.But tomorrow onwards you guys have to come on time.
Swati murmured:If we come late, you won't let us enter the class?Then we are happy.We can go out and enjoy.

Sameer whispered to her:But tomorrow onwards I will come early.

Swati:Why?



Sameer: I donโ€™t want to bunk classes anymore.I want to study well and somehow pass the school exams and join the college.A job is a necessity for me.I am not from a rich family like you all.Because of our priest only i got admission here.You all know that.

Swati nodded.

PRIYA:You all go to your seats.
They walked towards their seats.

 Priya started the class.

Preeti: Ma'am...you have defeated a Glittering star like me.I have decided to stop sleeping during the maths hour.Because your class is very interesting.
Priya smiled.

She continued her class.All were engrossed in her class.

 

 

 

A new student entered the school compound.She smiled.
Raunak went towards her:You are the new student?Right?
She:Yes.I am Naina,the daughter of the City Commissioner.

Raunak:I am Raunak.Nice to meet you.Let us be friends.

 

NAINA:After some days i will decide if it was nice meeting you or not.Till then i am ready to mingle with you..to test your friendship.
Raunak:Sure.Come...i will take you to the class.
He took Naina to the class room.
Preeti:Are you the new admission?
NAINA:Yes.
Pandit:But why did you join the school late?I mean only a few more months are there to complete schooling.
NAINA:Who are you to question me?
They did'nt expect Naina's sudden outburst.
All the Glittering stars stood together:We are Glittering stars.
Raunak:They are the notorious students of our class.
Naina gave a sarcastic smile:No one can be as notorious as me.
Preeti:Why?Are you a criminal who escaped from the jail?
Naina got angry:How can you talk to me like this?


Swati:Don't shout...
PANDIT:Why did you join our school in the mid year?
NAINA asked them with a smirk:Do you all want to know that?



PANDIT:Ya...sure.

She took a compass from her pencil box and pointed it at Pandit.
NAINA:One of my former classmates teased me for not drawing the circle properly with the compass. So in order to prove that i can also draw circles nicely with the compass i drew a circle on his face.
So i was given TC.So i joined this school.
They were shocked.

Raunak was nervous.

He said to himself:I did a blunder by making friends with this violent mad girl.


Naina stared at Pandit:Do you want to see how i draw circle on the face?
Pandit was scared:No please....
Sameer snatched the compass from her hand.
He was very angry:How dare you try to hurt our friend?
NAINA:I am Naina.I will do whatever i feel like.
SAMEER:You can't do whatever you feel like when Glittering stars are here.


Naina got irritated.
PANDIT whispered in Manoj's ears:What kind of a girl is this?
Manoj:Guess she is an alien creature.

Swati:She is only a cat.We can manage her easily.
Sameer:Exactly.Cats can be handled easily by Glittering stars.

 NAINA:I will show you who I am.

Naina was burning with anger.

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Posted: 8 months ago
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The bonding between Priya and her students was nice. Sameer and Swati deciding to come to class on time was a right decision. Naina got angry on people questioning her for joining school late. Were they ragging her that she reacted that way? Was Naina sarcastic on answering that she drew a circle on someone's face?

Samaina introduction began with Nok Jhok. Waiting for the next part.

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Posted: 8 months ago
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Loved it dear ๐Ÿ˜

Awesome update ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon ๐Ÿค—

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Posted: 8 months ago
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Part 1


Such an Interesting Start 

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Posted: 8 months ago
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Part 1

Lovely update... well written

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Posted: 7 months ago
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Thanku Kavitha,taahir,khwaishfan,Goldie Abrol.



Humne chaha tumhe pagalon ki tarah..I loved you dottily..Part 2

 

 



Raunak and Naina were sitting in the canteen.
RAUNAK:We can't defeat Glittering stars.
NAINA:For you it's impossible.But for me it's easy.I have managed the worst students easily.
Raunak thought:Because you are the worst student.No one can be worse than you.
NAINA:By the way did you feel that making friends with me was blunder seeing my encounter with the Glittering stars?
Raunak lied:No.
NAINA:Even if you think like that i don't have any problem.Because if you try to break your so-called friendship with me i will cut you into pieces.
Raunak got scared.Naina laughed.
NAINA:That Sameer....he shouted at me..and that gang.....I will not leave them.
RAUNAK:It's not easy to defeat them.And Sameer is very strong.

 NAINA:I will hurt the other Glittering stars.So that Sameer  will be upset as he loves his friends a lot.

 Raunak smirked.

Raunak:You are a genuis Naina.

Naina:Tell me something which I don't know.

Raunak thought:How arrogant she is!

 

 

 
Naina complained to the Principal that the Sameer tried to hug her as a part of ragging.
Everybody was shocked especially Priya.
Sameer was shattered.
Pandit:Believe us Priya Ma'am.Glittering stars are naughty.But not cheap.And Sameer is the most decent guy of our gang.He dreams only about standing on his own feet and taking care of his family.Unlike us he does'nt even look at girls.
Preeti:He is not at all flirty.
Sameer:I have not done anything like that.Please believe me.
Priya:You all don't need to give any explaination.I trust you all.I know that Glittering stars can never cross the border.

Sushma:Yes..we trust you Sameer.

They all were relieved.
Naina:They are lying Ma'am.Sameer tried to....
Sameer:Enough Naina.I never expected you to stoop so low.

Sushama and Priya became upset with the current scenario.
The principal Sushama:Naina...it's definitely your misunderstanding.We all know Sameer very well.If you had said this about others we would have believed you.But about Sameer...
If you make it an issue it will harm only your reputation Naina.Because you are are accusing an innocent boy unnecessarily.

Naina was irritated.
Everybody went out of the office room except Naina and Priya.
NAINA:Sushama Ma'am...you were unfair to me.
Su:Naina,you are my friend's daughter.That's why I gave you admission here even after knowing your character.But please don't spoil innocent students' lives.
Naina was irritated:I am leaving you only because you are my mom's friend.Otherwise....
She left the room.

Priya was shocked to see how Naina talked to Sushma.

Priya:How can she talk like this to you Ma'am?

Sushama:She does'nt even value or respect the Principal.She is a complete brat.We can't expect anything else from her.

Priya became dull.




Naina went back to the class room.The Glittering stars surrounded her.
Pandit:You can't escape easily after hurting our friend Sameer.
Swati:Hurting one of the Glittering stars means hurting the whole gang.
Preeti:We can't tolerate such cruel mischievous activities.


Manoj:Being a girl how could you defame an innocent boy and accuse him of doing something dirty like this?


Swati:This was too much.Poor Sameer.Good that all the teachers and the Principal trusted Sameer.Otherwise...


PANDIT:Unbearable creature.Shame on you.I have never seen a rotten girl like you.



Naina was fuming with anger.

Pandit:Sameer...anyways she has complained that you tried to hug her.Then why don't you hug her in real?
Naina was shocked.
Sameer looked at Pandit in disbelief.
Pandit:Come on Sameer.All our gang mates are with you.Come on.
Shed all the inhibitions and go ahead Sameer.
Sameer looked at Naina.He moved towards Naina.
Naina got scared.
NAINA:Don't come near me.I will shout.
Preeti:You can't shout.We will close your mouth.
Preeti closed her mouth with her hand. Swati held her hands from behind.
Sameer went very close to her.Naina was very scared.

Edited by jasminerahul - 7 months ago
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Posted: 7 months ago
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It seems that Naina is negative here and Raunak is afraid of her. Sad that Naina falsely accused Sameer of hugging her. It is also shocking that Naina backanswered Sushma. Glittering Stars surrounded Naina and telling Sameer to huh Naina reminded me of Aamir Khan coming forward to kiss Madhuri in the boxing ring. Waiting to see whether Sameer will really hug her.

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Posted: 7 months ago
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Thanks a lot.Are you talking about Dil?



Originally posted by: kavitha_r

It seems that Naina is negative here and Raunak is afraid of her. Sad that Naina falsely accused Sameer of hugging her. It is also shocking that Naina backanswered Sushma. Glittering Stars surrounded Naina and telling Sameer to huh Naina reminded me of Aamir Khan coming forward to kiss Madhuri in the boxing ring. Waiting to see whether Sameer will really hug her.

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Posted: 7 months ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Thanks a lot.Are you talking about Dil?



No, I said it reminded me of one of the scenes in DIL movie.

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Posted: 7 months ago
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Yes.that's what i asked you.



Originally posted by: kavitha_r

No, I said it reminded me of one of the scenes in DIL movie.