AdiYa- Four Shot- || That Night || Part 3 on page 6(13-04-18)

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#Fiction2
(I lose count of fictions otherwise)😛

My second story on the couple!
Hope you all like it, as you loved the first.
Yet again an alternative universe take!


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AdiYa- Three Shot- || That Night ||




Part 1: The Day Of The Accident

He kissed his wife a goodbye as she left for work. She was dressed more prettier than usual. She had a party at her office of course. He waved his hand she blew him a flying kiss. Shutting the door, he locked it and got back to the room.

He looked around, the room was in a mess. His wife's dresses all over the bed. She couldn't seem to decide one. He shook his head, she was definitely worse than him at making choices.

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"Yash!!" She knocked at the bathroom's door for the third time.

"Yash I'm getting late!" She spoke irritated. She and her husband always made it a point to leave together to reach their workplaces respectively. They would drive her to office, and then he would leave for his. Something they had done very religiously after their wedding. When the arranged marriage had turned to a friendship, to a beautiful bond of love even they din't know.

"Yash! 5 minutes otherwise I m leaving!" She finally declared with a bang and walked out of the room, purposefully tapping her feet louder, so that he could make out she was gone.

She folded his arms as he walked out of their home, hurriedly. "Sorry Jaan! "

She looked away. He frowned and quickly got to her side and kissed her cheek. "SORRY!"

"You know I don't like getting late!" She looked at him grumpily.

"I understand there is a party, and that you are the boss, but that doesn't mean you take an entire extra half an hour to get ready!" She added.

"Sorry! Let's move now!" He quickly got in the driver's seat. She rolled her eyes and got in. The car pulled away.

- - - -

She stared at him, as he lay lifeless. Tears rolling down her cheeks. Eyes bloodshot. The people around were moving around the room in a hustle.

There opposite to her sat another man, his manner reflecting hers. He was more angry. His clenched muscles fisted fingers, and stiff body language gave away his anger.

"Mrs. Yash , Mr. Aaditya." The two looked up as the constable called their names respectively.

"This way please, certain formalities have to be taken care of!" The constable showed them into a room.

The head in charge, looked up at the two. "I understand, the shock the two of you are in, it's not that every day we do not get such cases. We do. But, this one is different. More than your loss, the truth is also bitter. Anyways, are you two convinced it was just an accident? We are still searching for the car that hit them, but honestly we have no clue. No witness, No evidence. Just dead bodies. Quite honestly I haven't seen a case such as this. It's well strange, two people in one accident. A little hard to digest for me. What do you think?"

"People get what they deserve! Do you believe that one is punished as they have to be no matter what!?" Spoke Aditya, looking up at the officer.

The officer met his eyes. "I understand your anger makes you say it."

She shot him a glare and chose to not comment.

Their respective spouses were found dead on the road, their hands intertwined. They worked under the same firm. The police suspected it was a case if rash driving, but also the immediate reports said that the two were drunk. It had been a stormy rainy night. Even if their would have been any evidences they would have been wiped away. They had died the last night. It had already been close to eight hours.

"Maybe a truck hit them!" Suggested the constable standing aside in the room. The room was silent, it was still drizzling outside, the silence was occasionally broken by soft screams of the sky, the soft thunders

"Is there anything or can I leave?" She asked pushing the form towards the officer.

"We will transport the body. You can leave Mrs. Yash!"

She closed her eyes being addressed like that. "It's Zoya, Sir. Zoya."

The officer looked up at her tight lipped and nodded.

He got up after roughly pushing the form as well. "Send her to her family, I have nothing to do with this woman anymore."

The officer sighed. The case was indeed a twisted one.

The two walked out at the same time. His hand brushed hers. She diverted her attention to the touch. She looked at his hand. He dint care, he walked out.

Soon she followed his trail.

The officer looked thoughtfully. There was something that din't fit. He couldn't understand what.

- - -

The night was cold, the rain was unstoppable and the sky loud. The officer was driving, silently on his patrol. He pulled his car to a halt, when he saw a car at a distance. How could people stop their car on such nights, on a road where speeding and rash driving was popular event? Sighing he parked his car a little aside and got off his vehicle with a black umbrella in hand. In the dark of the night he walked towards the car. Only when he was close to the car did he make out something fishy. He rolled his eyes and got still closer. He was in no mood to intrude upon someone's privacy this night. The couple was kissing seated in the front seats of the car. He turned to make his back, when something made him turn back. He faintly stressed his mind, it din't require much effort. He knew he had seen that face before. Haan, yes, the case he was linked with that happened a year back! The case he would not so easily forget. He titled his head to see the woman the man was now smiling at. He was beyond shocked it was the other woman linked in the case! The one who had lost her husband. Thinking for a minute, he walked back. He had to revisit the case. He always had a hunch, the case was not what if seemed!

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I love cliffhanger ends! 😛Leaves the reader to ponder a little longer and draw out the possibilities by stepping into the world the writer creates.
Awaiting your responses. What do you think about this? ⭐️
Suggestion, feedback, and views are most welcome!
Shall post the second part tomorrow!
Until then tell me what you think! Waiting!😃😳

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Part 2- Questions Unanswered!

Five days had passed. The officer sat restlessly tapping his pen on his desk, has he waited for a file to come.

Two people in an accident, the same night, the same place, the same spot. Working in the same company. Drunk in the same night. Killed together. Hands intertwined! Couldn't be digested.

The file arrived via a constable. He quickly flipped the pages. A smile crept up his face! His eyes shone. He had been right! It wasn't an accident, it was a murder!

He picked up the file and made his way out. He knew where to go. He drove all the way to the man's house. He was in for a shock. No one lived there anymore. He made a few calls, met a few neighbours and had his new address at his disposal. He drove to the said place.

He walked to the entrance, pushing open the gate he went ahead. The house was dark. No one seemed home. He sighed disappointed. He then caught glimpse of few lights behind the house. He quietly made his way to the source of the light. The entire back lawn had been decorated with lights. It din't look like a place less than one described in fairy tales. His eyes rested on the man on his knees.

"I love you Zoya. Will you be mine forever and more?"

Zoya looked rather nervous. "Aditya..."

"The past is past...let it be...we deserve better don't we?" He spoke.

"I ...am scared Aditya, I can't ...I...!" She had tears in her eyes.

" I promise, to never be a Yash in your life, you will never have tears except the happy ones in your eyes. I can't help...you cry when you are happy as well!"

She smiled amidst her tears. She sat on her knees before him. " I will. And I promise, I will never ..." She inched forward and caressed his heart. " break you!" He smiled his eyes moist.

She the her arms around his neck, crying over his shoulder. He protectively wrapped his arms around her.

Two broken souls had found solace in each other, had found true companions in each other.

The officer finally made his entry applauding the scene. The two were soon on their feet. They were beyond shocked.

"I must say, a perfect movie proposal!" He said with mockery evident in his voice.

" I am eager to know how did you to plan it? I know the rest!"

Zoya tensed up and looked at Aditya. He at once wrapped his arm around her.

"What do you mean?"

"Let's skip the obvious Aditya! You know it and so do I! I need answers to what I don't know!"

"I don't understand what you speak off!" Spoke Aditya in a confident voice.

"The two of you are murderees'. You killed them both!" The officer spat.

"Your accusations are baseless!" Aditya replied nonchalantly.

The officer waved the file in hand. "I have proof!"

"Where were you two on the night if the accident? Both of you were at home weren't you? Your sim locations right? Were the proof? But, how is it that Mr. Aaditya you dint attend a single call that night? Surprisingly, Mrs.Yas...oops Zoya, you dint pick up your calls as well!? You are a doctor aren't you, and you very religiously attend to your emergency calls. But that night you din't."

"I was asleep!" Spoke Zoya hesitantly. The officer smiled, "but you called your husband that night!"

"Yes. I did. Then I slept again!" She said gulping, her fingers playing with the edge of her dupatta.

"Strange. Your husband wasn't home and you were sleeping peacefully, then you woke up called him, he dint pick up and you slept again without any worry. And as far as my research tells me you generally pick your 'emergency' calls up even when you are asleep!"

"Mr. Khanna, you are trying to accuse us with what we deeply regret."

"You both don't!" He spat.

"It was all planned. Mr.Aditya you never really visit your neighbors but that night you, did. Making an excuse of asking them if they had milk, cause you couldn't sleep without a glass of milk! Zoya's watchman watched her enter the house. But there is no guard at the back exit and surprisingly a week ago the CCTV at the back gate had been damaged. How no one knew! And no effort to repair was made! The two of you were present at the accident spot, you saw them die! Are you two heartless?" The officer looked at them disgustedly.

"No I din't!" Shouted Zoya. "Aditya looked at her startled.

The officer smiled and stood between the two. " But he did, din't he. " he spoke pointing his thumb backward. "He is the worst man isn't he, he saw his wife die in front of his won eyes, he killed her din't he!" The officer's voice screamed.

"No he dint!" Screamed Zoya, tears trickling down her eyes. "He dint kill her , he was ...!" She saw him nodding a no, indicating her to tell nothing.

She wiped her tears and looked away quickly.

"Enough Mr. Khanna! You have no right to talk to her that way!" He gave the man a deadly stare.


"He was hurt! Isn't that what you had to say? "He looked at Zoya. "He was wounded on the hand. How? While he was leaving his old house through the back window of his room?" He swiftly turned to Aditya noticing the change in his body language. His guess had hit the bull's eye. His recent visit to Aditya's old house had only revealed the window at the back of his house with the pipe running down beside it. Also the breif converstaion with he neighbor to ask about Aditya's whereabouts had been the key to find that Aditya had been to his neighbor's place that night. The neighbor remembered well as that was the one of the total three times Aditya had been to his neighbor's place. Too bad Aditya should have been a more frequent neighbor, it would have saved his plan.

Aditya met the taller man's eyes. He walked and stood beside Zoya. " We have no time to listen to your baseless talks that make no sense. "

"Why?" The inspector asked.

Zoya looked at him and then turned to Aditya. His hold on her shoulders grew more protective.

"Excuse us! You know the way out I assume." He spoke and started walking to the door opening to the rear part of the house.

"You put their hands together, why did you do that?" The last question that still bothered the officer.

The two turned and looked at him. "Forget it officer, we have forgotten it too! Let's not dig up the graves of something that leaves is unhappy!" He spoke. He held her hand and walked in.

The questions remained with officer for ever more!

Why did they put the hands of the two together? Did they have a part to play in the murder or was it just an accident?

He remembered the words he had said that day,

"People get what they deserve! Do you believe that one is punished as they have to be no matter what!?"

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P.S
Please don't throw tomatoes at me for leaving it there! Anyone got the entire thing? Read from the start to the end you should get somewhere close.
Would love to read what you felt/think of this story.
Hope this story was liked!
Waiting to read your POVs!!!!⭐️


Part 3- page 6
Edited by Khidki - 7 years ago
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Thanks!
What do you think about it!?
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Originally posted by: Khidki


Thanks!
What do you think about it!?

I like the way you portrayed the angry emotions of Adi
I want to read next part soon.
The cliffhanger is make me anxious to know what will happen next
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Originally posted by: mijanur

I like the way you portrayed the angry emotions of Adi
I want to read next part soon.
The cliffhanger is make me anxious to know what will happen next

Thanks! Anger is one emotion I have been told by others as well that I portray well!
Hope you like it when it's up!😳
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Ooohh that's so damn interesting. I got a prompt right here! If it doesn't turn out the way I think it will, I'll write my prompt!
What say? My first story here inspired by this lovely piece!!

Edit: I'm not telling what I think this is going to be, I'll tell you tomorrow after I read the next part😉
Edited by SanyaEterna - 7 years ago
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Annika.. 🤗 This is beautiful.. I'm so happy that you're writing on AdiYa.. Cliffhangers are the worst thing.. One year has passed of that accident and waiting to know what exactly happened in this one year.. Continue soonish..
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Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

Ooohh that's so damn interesting. I got a prompt right here! If it doesn't turn out the way I think it will, I'll write my prompt!

What say? My first story here inspired by this lovely piece!!

Edit: I'm not telling what I think this is going to be, I'll tell you tomorrow after I read the next part😉


Strangely from a few days I be been thinking in this direction only😆

Okay😆Okay...will wait until evening for that
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Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Annika.. 🤗 This is beautiful.. I'm so happy that you're writing on AdiYa.. Cliffhangers are the worst thing.. One year has passed of that accident and waiting to know what exactly happened in this one year.. Continue soonish..


Hi dear!
Nice to see you here as well!
Seems like half the IB forum is here😆
Thank you.
What do you think?😆
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Thanks😳

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