AvNeil FF: A MILLIONAIRE'S FIRST LOVE #Thread 2(Upto Chap 46)

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Avneill

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Posted: 7 years ago

#151

Very nice

Keep it up dear

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Shaiksafia

@Shaiksafia

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Posted: 7 years ago

#152

beautiful valentines day gift such a cute chapter 👏👏 neela ma is the coolest MIL and mother i love her 😊 this chapter made me realize how much i miss neela ma in the show 😭

but i am soo glad we have such amazing ff writers who are keeping her alive

loads of love

safia

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vaish_patel

@vaish_patel

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Posted: 7 years ago

#153

Love love loving the camaraderie between Neela and Neil - really missing NeNe onscreen now! Neil has won over everyone close to Avni, it's so cute! Neil is so cute! Such a gentleman! Neela is unhappy with the lack of action between them but I am loving the slow burn! Cannot wait for the next chapter! Please make it soon! 😳

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Kanika

@ITV_lover

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Posted: 7 years ago

#154

Hey Riya,

Very well written love the way you express all the small small emotion through your words... It just shows how expressive you are... keep writing stories like this..

Please do update so

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Redrose1208

@Redrose1208

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Posted: 7 years ago

#155

Are waahh... Iss baar bolne ka mauka hi nhi mila jaldi update ke liye...har baar aise hi update diya karo... 🤗

And the update was so damn cute... Nd this is wat i hv been telling for the last 4-5 updates now i think...

Neil ka dimaag single track pe chalta hai... Bechaare sharma ji..unko toh jaise bhool hi gaya hai neil... Baju mein baithi avni ke liye sochra hai ki vo usko miss karri hogi... Pagal ladka... 😆

N neela ma... Just wow... Kitna interest hai...neil aur neela na saheliya ban gaye hai... Saari details chahiye... Hehehehe

Neil ka airlines project... Jaldi lao yaar usko... And neil is shoo sweet... Dadaji ka sapna poora karra hai vo...

And i loved the part jidhar neil ne avni ko bola ki ek dusre se kuch bhi puchne ke liye formality ki jaroorat nhi hai... 😳

Overall i loved it yaar... Neil is becoming cute day by day... 😳

There's one line i love... Actually a expression on neil... That is his owlishly blinking eyes and open mouth... Hahahaha... 😆

And now u have put urself in a problem... And that is mentioning that the next update is dhamakedar...now i will be hounding u fr an update...get ready... 😉

And here i start...

Plz update next soon... 😛

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WhtinAname

@WhtsinAname

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Posted: 7 years ago

#156

Y doesn't dis chapter hv a title??

Neil really thought Avni ws missing him?😆.

He ws talking abt Avni's old house owner, am I ryt? I guess you will let us knw abt it later.

I wish Neela would hv teased dem a lil more.It ws fun.

Waiting fr d nxt update.

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Zara_Imam

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Posted: 7 years ago

#157

Yah 🥳valentines day ka yeh sabse cutest gift tha Ri😳

Haye Neil is so in love with Avni that he thought that shez missing him...bichara Sharmaji ko toh bhul hi gaya😆

Neil is so dedicated and wo apne dadaji ka airline wala dream project pura kar raha hai... Avni is right he's redefining the word PERFECT

Aww that little gesture by Neil was so cute. No wonder he has carved his own place in Avni's heart... Our girl has also started taking care of his perfect son in law reputation😳

I loved the saas-damad bond... though Neela didn't tease them much

Aww I can imagine that expression...owlish blink wala. Aur kitna cute banega yeh ladka...hayee mera dil☺️

Neelama jaisi MIL nahi milegi🤣 bichari ke armano mein pani pher gaya🥱 2 months mein bhi unke bacche tubelight hi rahe😆 Aww how I wish she could see their relationship developing every day every moment😳

Btw I loved ur poem in the last chapter. I would be grateful if u could include them in ur next update😳

Eagerly waiting for the next Ri

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Ekta

@HaymurS

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Posted: 7 years ago

#158

Osum update

Neil is such a charming guy here ..u cant help but fall in love with him

So airplane project is his grandfather dream...thats very deep... As avni said ... U cant help but respect him...

Loved neela neil banter

Now will it be an inside joke between neel n neela?

Hehe yes neela maa even we wanted them to. Kiss n take their relationship to atleast base 1🤣

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Wingsoflove_2

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Posted: 7 years ago

#159

Wow

Its so cute ri. Loved it. Blue munda ko resist karsakte. Mr.perfect bante jaarahi hai.😎

Apne grandfather ke dream ko apne dream banali. Meri resect neil peaur badgai.

Yeh avni abi bhi best friend hi bolre. Meri aur neil ki dil ke armaan aanshu mein behgai.🥺

But banda bohath cool. Bohath patience hai usmein. Yesi banda kaha milega.

Ur update made me sad. I miss my neelama. Hanikarak cvs maardi itni achi ma ko.😭

Iam glad she's here. I will take my dose here from u.😳

Mr.sharma😡 har vaqt yeh aadmi phone kyu karta hai? I hate it.

Blue munda thought avni was missing him. I was like😕 eh banda pyaar mein paagal hogai. When he's here in her room then y she would miss him?😆

Thank god,avni messaged neelama. Varna yeh banda guit mode pe chala jaata. Sacha mard hai voh.😎

I always love this jai veeru jodi. NeNe scenes were always pure bliss to watch.

Yesi jodi kaha milega. Neelama want them to take their relationship atleast stage one,kiss☺️🤣

Batao ri yesi mom in law kaha milega?😳

Both r hilarious. 😆 kya avni Ko pata chalega iss baaremein?😆

Continue soon ri, awesome update.

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#160

Like Avni says sirf single track mind hai iska . Like seriously will Avni tease him that she was missing him 😆 But I can't blame him . As soon as he gets up Avni throws a bouncer . But sach mei iska single track dimag hai !

So this was his dadu ka sapna . Then definitely it's more than close to his heart . How can anyone not respect him . This guy is a perfect mix of charming looks , caring gesture and sorted personality . His very persona will make you fall weak on knees . I'm very eager for the day Avni realises her feelings .

I just loved his monologues I always enjoy this mind talks . Avni has started reading him . He can definitely fly high in sky without any doubt.

Wow Avni messaged Neela .

How I miss Neela. This banter reminded me of the condo scene where Neil-neela discuss about Avni's feelings for him . Neela is definitely new age MIL who Neil or anyone can never find even if he searches state by state . She was sad that their relationship is in level zero 😆 Did she realky expect something to happen given our mighty Avni's speed. Neela doesn't feel embarrassed to inquire of what happened in their bedroom 😆 If every guy gets such a saas then why will he even think of going back to his home . Even I was little taken back when she shared her disappointment. Neela will be good even with Neil😆 .Sometimes I feel he is more of Neela's son than Swetha's . Now will she share with Avni .

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