Tum kaise mohabbat karte ho? Update pg.7

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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey guyz, this is my first fan fic! im rlly nervous 😳 but if u ppl dont like jst tell me!!!

Main Characters

Sujal Garewal:(Played by Rajeev Khandelwal)

Kashish Sinha:Played by the one and only Aamna Shariff

Piyush Raheja:Played by Rohit Bakshi
Tell me if i shuld continue!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Piyush Raheja: (Played By Rohit Bakshi)
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Posted: 17 years ago
its cool no need to be nervous 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
Thnk 4 replying!!Im less nervous now 😳
The rest of the charcters r the same jst so u no.(Oh and im starting from 19 dec episode okay, plz dont get mad!)

At Garewals:
After Sujal told Kashish to get out, Kashish is outside on 'The Road' and she realisez she forgot her mobile in Sujals room.But she's to depressed to go back into that house
Sujal goes to his room, and Kashish's phone rings Sujal picks up
P=Person
P: Hello Miss.Kashish, this is Dr.Singh speaking(sry i cant write in hindi!im really bad at it and im scared none will understand!!)
s=Sujal
S:............
Dr: I have some good news for you, unfortunately i could not bring u ure check up reports, but i decided that id better tell u that Your Pregnant!!
Sujal is shocked and hangs up the phone
he find Veena
S: Mama have u seen Kashish?
V: No why?And sujal tells her evrything like when he kicked Kashish outts the house and the phone call
And she is also shocked and she tell evryone in the house to start looking for Kashish.
After a few day no one has been able to find her, and evryone gave up on looking for her.
Sujal is really depressed, he doesnt eat and doesnt talk to anyone, but jst locks himself in his room and cries!
to be continued.
sry, i no its really short update but my mom is calling me.
Plz tell me if i shuld continue!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Nice Fanfic...😃
Keep reading mine plzz!! 😃
iloveroses95 thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
Aww thanks guyz (oh and Flygirls ive been meaning to ask u, is Maine Dil Tujhko Diya finished?Ihope not)
Ill update tomorrow as soon as possible
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey guyz, i no i said ill update tomorrow but i was bored so heres the update!

Recap:Sujal finds out that Kashish is pregnant but cant find her anywhere.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~5 years later~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Woman:Sujal! Hurry up or you'll be late for work!

Sujal:Im coming mama don't worry!
We see a man walking into the dining room AND its none other than our darling Rajeev or Sujal Garewal!!

Sujal:Mama, u no im usually late for work, so why the hurry?

Veena:Forgot didn't u?Today is your meeting with Mr.Roshan!

Sujal:Dammit!i totally forgot about that, thanks mama

Veena: no prob now goo ull b late!
And Sujal leaves

On the way to his office, his sees a boy and a girl playing in the field with a ball.Sujal gets out of the car and walks upto them.

Sujal:Does your mom know that u 2 r out here all by ureselves?

Girl:Yeah, we always play here, and besides we always tell her before coming here!

Sujal:R u 2 twins?

Boy:Yup but my Di is 5 mins older than me and i still have to call her Di, its not fair!

Sujal:What r ure names?

Girl:My name is Gayatri and this is my annoying brother Vikram
Sujal:What is your moms name?

Gayatri:Our mumma's name is....

Other girl:Gayatri!Vikram, your mom is calling u to have lunch!
Vikram:Oh man we have to go, mumma hates it when we r late
and they run off
(oh and just so u no the kids parents rnt poor, they r rich ok?)
Sorry i put alot of the kids wit sujal, but i think i made it a little obvious whose kids these r!
i have to go Bye but ill update either tomorrow or later!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey guyz im back, and this update im gonna make a little longer.

Recap:Sujal is walking again, and he meets 2 kids on the way to the office.
kd=kids m=mom

Kd:Mumma!!!!!
and they run up and hug her (btw u can see the moms face)

M:u guyz came that fast?i thought you guyz werent hungry when i asked u guyz if u wanted breakfast!

Gayatri:Mumma, we are really really sorry and really really hungry!

Vikram:Ya mumma!

M:Ok come and eat.

In the middle of eating, the doorbell rang

M:Uff! Who could that be?Ramu Kaka!Could u open the door?
p=Piyush

P:kashish!(now u can see her face)
k=kashish

K:Arey!Piyush, u were supposed to come tomorrow night!So wat r u doing here?

P:the usual, got homesick, was missing ure homemade food, and was missing the kids u no

K:Ok ok i get it, now come and u can have my homemade food once again!

P:yah!!come u 2 little devils!

Then they eat and evrything

K:Come on u uyz, u have to take ure nap!

Kds:No Way mumma, We r not sleepy!!!!!!

K:Help plz Piyush!

P:Kids, listen to ure mom

K:thanks a lot!
After a lot of chasing and running around, they twins finally go to sleep and Kashish is tired.She decides totake a nap as well cuz she is so tired.
*dreamworld*(lol i luv those words)
Sujal:GET OUT OF MY LIFE!!!!!
Kashish:I have just one question sujal, if u were in my place wat would u do?
Sujal:I would have left u a long time ago
*Back To Reality*
Kashish:No!

Piyush was reading the newspaper and he runs to kashish

P:wats wrong Kashish, r u hurt

K(breathing hard):No,im fine, i jst had a bad dream thats all
and she goes back to sleep
To Be continued

Sorry guyz i have to go, but ill update soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
I only got one reply 😭

Recap:Kashish had a dream about the time Sujal kicked her out of the house, she is also married to Piyush

Kashish and the twins go to a doctor's Check-up.
R=Recaptionist

K:Hello, i have an appointment for my children and myself with Dr.Singh.

R:Yes, Mrs.Kashish Raheja, he is in a operation theatre right now, please sit down until he comes.

K:thank You

Sujal just happens to be there and looks at Kashish when he hears the name 'Kashish Raheja'

Vikram:Mumma, i want candy!

Gayatri:Me too mumma!

K:Ok, go and get some,its down the hall ok?

Then She stands up and points there.When the kids go,Sujal walks upto her a pulls her close

S:Kashish.....

Kashish is shocked to see Sujal(Sujal didnt notice the kids lol)
S:U have no idea how much i've missed u Kashish, after u left i wouldnt eat anything at all and i locked my self in my room all day.

K:Su-Sujal.......

S:but now that u r back, evryone will be happy to see you.Mama,Dad,Rishi,Mehek evryone!

K:Mr.Garewal,in case u havn't noticed im married

Before Sujal could ask to whom, Vakram came screaming "MUMMA!!!"

K:Vikram, what happened and why r u crying?

Vikram:Mumma, Di wont buy me Kinder Surprise!She only bought herself some chocolate!

Kashish looks at Sujal and says"Vikram,Tell Gayatri that Mumma is telling her to buy u chocolate ok?

Vikram:Ok. and he leaves

S:Thats my kid....Gayatri and Vikram are my kids, right Kashish?

K:Yes, they r ure kids, but u have no right to call them ure kids.U werent even there when they were born!

S:Because u left the house!

K:And who told me to?Who screamed at me and told me to get out of their life?Who said that my love was all a lie?U Mr.Garewal u!

Just then her phone rang.
K:hello?

P:Hello Darling!How r u, u no i was feeling very bored, so i decided to call u!Oh did u get the doctor reports yet?

K:no we have come to the hospital to get them.


P:ok call me when u get them okay?

K:ok bye

P:bye

S:Who was that?

K:My husband,Mr.Garewal u please stay away from my family, maybe u shuld stay away from me mostly because im Manhoose(srry i dont no how to spell it) rememeber?
and she walks off.

Recept:Mrs.Raheja, Dr.Singh will c u and ure children now

K:Thank You. and she and the twins go into the doctors office.

Later

Doctor:Congratulations Mrs.Raheja, you are pregnant!

And Sujal hears all this!!!

to be continued
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Posted: 17 years ago
great!loved the story line keep it up.