Hazaaron Khwahishein Aisi (3) New Ch - 170 - Page 7

very nice update

So much happened in these 4 updates...first time jasleen showed up. She seems to be workaholic and career oriented. Tasha named her son as maan.
Loved sudeep and maans talk. most of it reflected its his pain...and as a biased mg fan i assumed all his pain had been for geet.
Is this the reason he let her go?
I felt for geet she is the one suffering here the most while mister is busy mastering callousness...poor girl.
Who she collided with???
1.     Ayush must have not aware of the address.
2. Maan
3.      Or its dev?
thanks for the pm
please continue soonEdited by latecomer - 6 years ago

I'm going to keep writing love letters to your Geet I swear.

Nice One
Must be maan i guess

Dear Geet,

Originally posted by: Veil

Dear Geet,

Hi from the other side. I wish you would be able to get this message somehow. I get the melancholy you face and I hope you could dissipate some of it.

The girl your husband once loved, the girl you were once curious about isn't happy either. His mere name still affects her. Little things like Bangles remind her of him. How strange no, the memories will plague you so much and they will come from anywhere and how many things that seemed very normal now have to be avoided.

I remember I once got really excited when an old Hindi folk song was mashed up with an English rap and made me friend listen. She refused to listen to it because that song held importance to her in the past.

I didn't understand then. Now I do.

Geet, I don't blame you. I don't blame you for seeking him out, I don't blame you to run away. Your this feeling sorry for self is what the most relatable with you. But Geet when something is really close to your eyes, you can't see it. And you are unable to see something right before your eyes.

I might be in the minority but the last scene reminded me of the epic DDLJ scene.

I wish it is Maan not because I'm romantic. You have had Ayush pursue the reason for your sadness. It didn't matter to you. I wish there would be one small gesture thrown at you so that you will see that it will matter to you. I wish it's Maan because he's long due overdue for a gesture to show he cares.

The dilemma in Geet is so evident. One can truly feel what she is going through. On one hand she doesnot want to paint Maan in a bad light, on the other hand she thinks his happiness is in her going away, again she wants her parents to understand what is going on in her heart as we all do.Edited by mystique_girl - 6 years ago

im literary crying
her emotion pain too much
somehow in heart she longing for maan
want him
but his unaffected behaviour Killing her inside
will he understand her meaning of letter
who came ?

Just read all the 4 parts... and I have to say i'm speechless for the first time.

Its a very unconventional and complicated love story. Your writing style is very unique and hits home in a lot of ways. I feel the Geet here depicts the emotions of a lot of girls in todays time who have ambitions to study and succeed and due to tough competition and entrance exams is not able to. She signifies the young independent woman who has not been brought up as a homemaker by her parents and is as stubborn as boys in her ways. In todays time there is not difference between boys and girls and she stands for that and her ground by not seeking any help from her husband.

The story has a very realistic track of main characters having a history of being with someone... whether it was close friend or lover, doesn't matter. Remember the times when girls were not allowed to go to school or meet boys? Well, all that has changed today and as a result we do create close connections with opposite sex that comes to bite us later when we either can't forget them or compare them to our life partner.

The story has a beauty and underlying current that's hard to explain and comment on. All we can hope is this relation that they are running away from brings them together in some way and the journey is captivating and beautiful at the same time. At the end of the day, we all want a balance... a happy balance.

Waiting for the attraction to build up further despite their current stance.

I'm sure its not Maan she colided with.Edited by TaranaGeet - 6 years ago

On one of the coment I read there is teaser... i can't seem to find it. Where is it?

This is like a bhool bhulaiya