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Posted: 6 years ago
The Alpha male Cowered and towered
Had his way on whom his love was showered
A teen that had fallen from grace dropped out of college and on the verge of death
Had hoped and wished he'd done the figure of the father that was dead
Cool and calculated the Silver fox had waited
Till the tidings of marriage flashed in his radar
Packed and resolute in Bangalore he had landed
Met to girl and took her under his wings
Every detail and flaw was read and noted
Every effort to taunt and test him was extended
She was won over by Senior Narangs mails and gestures
He went to her dad and called it truce
Reminded the man in each other rested the couple's peace
Earned him the claimant would arrive and sure enough he did
Calculated moves and several visits later the cat slipped out
And Ashvin he was livid
Scurried to Ullal and news had shattered that dad and daughter
Sullenly he returned,refusing to pack off the books as he was told
She perfected the art of mincing dicing chopping and cleaning
Focussed on it as if there were her purpose for living
Silver star fishes and insults made their way to her heart
Her skin list its colour and flow that set her apart
To Bangalore she arrived with friends went to pick the books she had left behind
His broken bones raised her worry ,she stayed as requested and reluctantly went
Her state of missing the new love in her life was visible to the seeing
When he recovered at the back door he landed
Tendered apology and hoped he'd be forgiven
Disappointed he returned till a morning bell indicated visitors at his door
A pleasant surprise awaited him with escorts
Unrelenting he was in letting her go and marked her as his wife
His mother arrived and a sister and grand dad
A semblance of home returned to his house
His attraction for her was visible to the old man who beamed with pride that went unnoticed
The couple went to Ullal with Leela in tow
There was a thaw and she left as his wife ,her parental home
Jayadev who gloated thinking he was too good for her was left stunned when the truth was told
Things moved to a state where thetowel was thrown with it the announcement that he was on his own
Mission accomplished is what the man of the moment felt
Disaster has struck is what the mother lamented
The couple now crave for time and space to discover each other to chart the course of where their life was headed together
With bated breath the readers wait for the ebb and flow and treasure each wave throws  
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Posted: 6 years ago
Mama Bear


Its OK for you to hate my decisions Dadu. Ive hated myself a lot so I know the feeling" Ashvin said thoughtfully

Dadu was a little taken aback. He didnt expect confessions from Ashvin. He wanted Ashvin to be rebellious it would make his job so much easier and guilt free
"You have to support not only yourself but also Ms Shanbag all on your... umm.. not sure how"

"I invested wisely" Ashvin stopped and exhaled audibly "I know... I havent done too many wise things... I did invest my bonus the last 6ish years"

"You bought this house, houses dont pay themselves you know?"

"He doesnt need any money I could write him a check for this whole building" Mandira hated the grilling she was sad for her son


"Ruk jao puttar" Dadu said calmly


"No... houses dont pay themselves but they produce money"  "I have an apartment in Yelahanka that brings almost as much as I would need for this home's payment"


"How do you pay that apartment's instalment?"


"Umm.. I had money" he sat down weakly


"From where, I dont think Cuisine Craft pays you in crores"


"Umm... I dropped out of Law School I had enough to buy two apartments... Dad.." he swallowed painfully

Sharanbir was speechless, Vishwas was one entity that drove the whole room to tears. He was impressed with his grandson. He will never reveal it
But it was wise... he was surprised Ashvin had inadvertently gone down the same path of the family's legacy business... real estate


"Papaji let him be tonight..." Mandira wept softly


"Isko kadi kuch nahi kaha hai maine" Sharanbir cleared his throat gruffly


"I wont argue" Ashvin said getting up, his eyes red and moist

"He is doing so many things, so many different things" Sharanbir said


"He is not hurting anybody na Papaji"


"Wo tey kara hoya isne" he said firmly waving a finger

The girls came out

Trisha now dressed in a dark green mesh dress with embroidery at the bottom, with long ruffled sleeves.

Leela  "Ma I gave this one to her... its too long for me"


"Ms Shanbag" Sharanbir smiled warmly


"You came early" Trisha pointed


"You havent lived long enough, you already talk like him? He would always tell me I came late, when I would visit when he was little" Sharanbir pointed to Ashvin

"He loved his Dadu... loves him" Mandira corrected herself

"Now he cant wait to see me leave" Sharanbir spoke unmindful of Mandira

"Thats not true. I dont mind you at all" Ashvin said expressionless

"To khaane khaate hain chalo... I made your favorite chholey bhature beta"  Mandira jumped up and went into the kitchen

Trisha hesitated over what to take on

"I can make no?" she offered Mandira softly

"You dont know cooking" Mandira reminded

"I only have to make round? roti type no?" she asked nervously


"Not round... oblong" Mandira said haughtily

"Oh? What is that?"

"Oval shaped" "We can eat round ones one day" Ashvin shot his mother down

Trisha deftly deep fried a bunch... Mandira fried inbetween scooping out the rice the raita and the subzis in bowls
Trisha found one reddening as it bobbed in the oil


"Umm... Aun... Mrs Narang" she called out

Mandira turned in shock as if she wanted to be addressed as "Mom"


"Nobody calls me Mrs Narang" she said "In this house" she said.. not exactly approving Trisha 
to use the word "Mamma" "Mom" or "Ma" but at the same time conveying that HATES the Mrs Narang

"I guess I should use Aunty" Trisha nodded knowingly

At dinner..

The girls giggled and were generally messing around with food, serving each other giant scoops...

"Aaj to kam haso... he needs some peace" Mandira scolded

"Ma.. quit harassing them" Ashvin reprimanded his mother

"Nahi... aaj to"

"Aashooo supporting me?" Leela smiled gleefully and piled another scoop of paneer on to Trisha's plate

"No I am supporting Trisha actually, I dont want her to get run over" Ashvin smirked

"sHE IS NOT A BABY... I AM" Leela was miffed

"You sure are acting like one"

Leela picked up two bhaturas and put it on Ashvin's plate

"Thanks" he nodded calmly  "Want one?" he asked his wife


"I ate two" she mumbled painfully


"You are a rice girl Ms Shanbag?" Sharanbir asked

She nodded relieved

"We cant eat rice everyday" Mandira told Sharanbir

"she shud have the freedom to eat what she wants." Ranbir said

Trisha smiled at him with gratitude


"rachit prefers rice too" he said

Mandira had had it by that point with her FIL

"Papajeee... tuannu ek ore... (should I tell you one more time to back off from my son?) umm.. can we all enjoy dinner please?" she said looking directly at him


"Aaho beta" he nodded surprised at mama bear's attack

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Posted: 6 years ago
Attagirl Mama Mandira !!! 
Long due and overdue from her side...needed to take dadu a notch or two down. And he seems like a broken record as far as anything about Ashvin is concerned. Much as he shows pride ( internally !! ) at his grandson's wise investments, he is unable to move away or forward from his one track litany with Ashvin !!

It is now Trisha's turn to assert herself as Ashvin's wife with Dadu and clearly tell him that he cannot pair her up with Rachit or  Chirag and her rightful place is alongside Ashvin as that is where she wants to be !
Gunning for her to take a stance..hope she does it soon !!
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Posted: 6 years ago
Vani, I loved your idea of Trisha making it clear to Daddu that she is Ashwin's wife 😉
Daddu should stop interfering in Ashwin's life. The Guy has proved enough to people around. 

Ashwin take your wife and go to someplace and spend some time exclusively with her. 
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Posted: 6 years ago
Aaho beta" he nodded surprised at mama bear's attack"

He doesnt need any money I could write him a check for this whole building" Mandira hated the grilling she was sad for her son

Bang on mandira!!!!!!
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Posted: 6 years ago
Well dadu is getting blow after blow this visit
First it's ashwin and then Mandira
Ashwin was expected but I loved how Mandira took her son's side..
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Posted: 6 years ago
The old pop is wielding a double edged sword here. His grilling got Ashwin to reveal some of his smart acumen with his business skills which had his dadu give him a left handed compliment by saying my grandson is capable of doing various things but Dadu has to surely stop being anal about Rachit. Don't understand his obsession with him even after he has watched stuff that's happening between his Ms.shanbag and his grandson these days .

Old pop has been in a position to pontificate in a way having a wood over Mandira and Ashwin only because they allowed him to. No doubt Ashwin is saying no enough is enough but I would like for Ashwin to stop saying I know I have done enough mistakes or I hate myself for what I did because he has apologized enough no of times more than one could care to count. Because the more times you do that you give power to people like dadu to pontify his job. Ashvin has to stop putting himself down. And If dadu is saying he hasn't said anything to hurt Ashwin till now then the same thing he said wagging his finger at Ashvin saying woh tey Kara Hoya isne applies to dadu himself as well cos dadu is guilty of causing some hurt himself.

It's done now , ashvin has redeemed himself and his wife seems to be fine with her husband and his father in law seems to have come to terms with his daughter's life . You know what Ashvin should announce like he did the other day right at this moment sitting eating that he is going on a honeymoon with his wife. Mandira needs to pack her bags to Delhi, lee and dadu as well at least for a little time now. Give the couple that space!!! I agree with pritee . Yep!! Enough now!!!
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Posted: 6 years ago
Now that we know Ashwin doesn't have Financial cconcern I was thinking why can't he pursue his LL.B. And simultaneously work in some law firm and Trisha can also pitch in and teach along with her Ph.D.
Both have chance to build their life on their own.
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: PriteeMisra

Now that we know Ashwin doesn't have Financial cconcern I was thinking why can't he pursue his LL.B. And simultaneously work in some law firm and Trisha can also pitch in and teach along with her Ph.D.
Both have chance to build their life on their own.

Lovely plea and your personal experience speaks i know.😉
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Posted: 6 years ago
Mandira's view point

Fine and Unemployed

"You were fine last night!!!"
"I am fine NOW" he chuckled and shook his head
"Fine and unemployed"

"Its not about the inheritance... he will think you are a quitter... you know... just like... law school" she sobbed


Poor Mandira torn between love for her son and his desire to wiggle out of his daddu's web. Even though inheritance is in her mind, she wants daddu's acceptance.  How much will Ashwin and daddu push her ? We have to wait and watch.  


"I know... I know... I am hoping the girls comes back home soon so we can go out"
"Girls? Trisha and Leela?"
Mandira realized she had typed a plural"

Slow change in her mind in accepting Trisha ... She has a good heart but still trying to make sense of Ashwin's choice.

Loving Custody
"Aapne kuch kaha Ashvin ko?" Mandira asked a baffled Trisha that evening
"You do know he quit his job today?" Mandira asked sadly

"I did not know" Trisha was astonished  "But why?"

... and muttered to herself walking away  "Whats even normal anymore"


She suspects her DIL for any influence over Ashwin's decisions.  She is zapped and is trying to make sense of the new normal and/or wondering if any normal exist in her son's life.

Mama Bear
"Papaji let him be tonight..." Mandira wept softly

"Isko kadi kuch nahi kaha hai maine" Sharanbir cleared his throat gruffly
"He is not hurting anybody na Papaji"

She goes full on trying to protect Ashwin from daddu's stinging words. 

"Umm... Aun... Mrs Narang" she called out
Mandira turned in shock as if she wanted to be addressed as "Mom"
"Nobody calls me Mrs Narang" she said "In this house" she said.. not exactly approving Trisha 
to use the word "Mamma" "Mom" or "Ma" but at the same time conveying that HATES the Mrs Narang
"I guess I should use Aunty" Trisha nodded knowingly

She is shifting in accepting Trisha and she expects her to be accepted as well. Mom is probably what she wants .. but at this point in time, Aunty will be acceptable as a family member than keeping her as an outsider. 

"rachit prefers rice too" he said

Mandira had had it by that point with her FIL

"Papajeee... tuannu ek ore... (should I tell you one more time to back off from my son?) umm.. can we all enjoy dinner please?" she said looking directly at him

Trying to assert her family habits, she gets pushed by her FIL who shoves Rachit infront of Ashwin.  Mama bear growls hard ... She is done taking it from anyone (including her FIL).

Nisha summarizes perfectly Mandira's love for her son - inheritance can come later, but she need his peace and happiness, his choice of wife to be his.

Daddu lost Ashwin long back, Lee is not happy with the way he treats her brother, now Mandira is all set to push back - My two cents to Daddu - back off ! Him trying to befriend and any brainwashing of Trisha is not going to work. 

Even though I was a little apprehensive about her character initially, Nisha has built it very nicely - so close to reality.

Lovely lovely updates Nisha !!!! 👏


Edited by jaschick - 6 years ago