Mortal Promises - Maaneet FF MG Maan Geet!#T1*|[T6 opened] - Page 14

Originally posted by: Roopaamrutha

Amazing update dear... 

OMG loved it to the core... 

Maan is still angry on geet and he is drunk because of geet...

He assumed Sam as geet and hugged her...  Poor Sam she is thinking that maan loves her...   Ufff kabab mein haddi... But even though feeling sad for her...  Hope she doesn't become evil...  geet confessing and you stopped at the main point... Ufff 😡😕 jaldi update Karo waiting. .  And next one geet moans???  Is it dream or real???  Lol real hona  chahiye dream Nahin plzzz jaldi update Karo... Waitinggghhh 😉😉

Hey sweety, i was waiting for your reply hehe, 
It's dream or real to know that you gotta read the next update. Agar readers ke response acche aai toh aaj raat ko hi update karungi nahi toh kaal 😉
Next update is very erotic so... Thoda wait toh banta hain! Precap se kaam chalao philhaal ke liye!

Originally posted by: vrinda22

will read n cmnt later

Thanks a lot 😊 waiting for your feedback dear. 

Originally posted by: Khushibloom

Again beautiful part 😊
So maan was not in his senses whenever he and sam were together.
Who was stalking geet 😲
Geet kya yaar jab maan so raha hai tab itna guts hai , uske jaagne par aisi himmat kaha gayab ho jaati hai 😉
Chalo finally she pulled him in her room and hugged him.
How would maan react now.

Hey khushi how are you? Thank you so much for your beautiful comment. Yeah actually he was hallucinating geet but that was sameera in reality. 
Geet ke guts thode badh gaye hain, maan ki halat dekh ke thoda line pe aai hain, isiliye toh usko apne kamre mein leke gai na? 😆😉

Edited by Iptida - 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Iptida

Hey sweety, i was waiting for your reply hehe, 
It's dream or real to know that you gotta read the next update. Agar readers ke response acche aai toh aaj raat ko hi update karungi nahi toh kaal 😉
Next update is very erotic so... Thoda wait toh banta hain! Precap se kaam chalao philhaal ke liye!


Thanks a lot 😊 waiting for your feedback dear. 

Edited by Roopaamrutha - 6 years ago

Awesome updates ..

maan is in angry mood daadi observing him and he

Hope so it's geet with maan not Sam..

sorry 4 late likes n comments! Part 8 - lovely update! well written! Maan upset! Dadi n his mom worried! Dadi senses something wrong btwn Maaneet! Geet tries 2 help Maan n he refuses! Last part - was that Sam or Geet?

chap 9 - spectacular update! excellently written! Maan drunk! he mistook Sam 4 Geet! Oh no Sam loves Maan n assumes he loves her too! 😡 Geet helps Maan! she kisses Maan while he is asleep! she is so bold! Maan awakens n ignores her! Geet wants Maan 2 hold her n gets closer 2 him! he is confused n she explains that she was wrong! she wants him 2 do as he pleases! Is update soon 

Updating chapter 10. 
Thank you all for all the likes and comments. Writing is such a hard job i got to taste while writing this chapter. It may seem easy to read but writing erotic stuff is damn hard.
Your responses gather courage within me to unfold the story so do leave your comments. Add me in your buddy list for pm. 

Warning :This chapter is very bold and contains pretty mature stuff so beware  before you proceed as i already stated in my first post that this story is going to be passionate so...☺️  

thanks 4 the note...will be waiting 

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