Saache pyar ke kuch Kacche daage... AN ARMU THREE SHOT. *Chap 2- Pg3* - Page 3

Originally posted by: SymphonyStar

Super 👏 Zindagi ..You put it well ..especially Mukhiji's feelings 😳 this could be a nice twist ...Cvs should use this Gourani Goutam phone talk. 😊 Mukhiji ke sar pe aasmaan gr jaayega. I coould imagine expresions of Mukhi & Aru...& even liked imagining Aru's cute ice cream messed face 😆 Waiting for next part 😳 .

Originally posted by: violette

Wow! Lovely!

I was avoiding reading "jst another FF" but the title kept luring me..

and now I must say.. was totally worth it..

you are a beautiful writers.. u expressed Mukhi's Moh Moh so nicely..

And he is such soft hearted man.. a girl like Aru will leave such an imprint on his heart that it wud b really heartbreaking for him to see her leave..

Mukhi (in the show) doesn't realize it now.. bt it wud b exactly how you have expressed..

Wonderful.. really loved an TS after such a long time..

eagerly waiting for part 2..

hope it wud b continuation from Mukhi's POV..

Originally posted by: Divi.C

Omg its wonderful

👏 This update is really emotional. Mukhi and his heavy heart is so 😭 .

Originally posted by: malkasub

👏 This update is really emotional. Mukhi and his heavy heart is so 😭 .

Superb piece of writing 👏 . Cant wait for the next update ! When she actually leaves 😭

Why does the title still say 'Part 1'?

Please change it to - "TS - Sachche pyaar ke kuch kachche dhaage -Part 2 - Pg 3 (Updated 12/6)"

This was a beautiful piece of writing. Absolutely loved the way mukhi's feelings were narrated emotionally. poor Mukhi, don't know what's in Aru's mind. Waiting for the last part. Do update soon!

wowww simply beautiful and magical👏😳

That is such a wonderful update..

Again a wonderful chapter.. a bit depressing.. bt well-written..

The gamut of emotions Mukhi is experiencing is amazing.. and you have described them beautifully with correct analogies.. the empty room, bhid-mein-tanha kind of feeling.. the air of despondency.. its all quite heart touching..

Mukhi is really a deep and intense person.. a passionate and sensitive being..

But yaar, cudnt take it more for Mukhi.

I wish Aru cud give him some sort of relief... some little respite... his world is too too sad. The two most depressing things for him are happening at the same time..

I cud see that it was dukhi mukhi day.. 😆

please don't let us shed more tears for Mukhiji when Aru leaves.. make us smile 😆

(as a writer I guess its good to know tht u have tht power over ur readers😆)

I love it. Please update soon.