Saache pyar ke kuch Kacche daage... AN ARMU THREE SHOT. *Chap 2- Pg3*

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Posted: 8 years ago
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👏wowww brilliant and beautiful
basabti chamoo gabar wala part🤣was bang on

please write more really such and asowme OS
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I'm sooo excited to read!!! Will comment the rest after I read :))))
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That was great ❤️
Loved it. Quite relatable to the actual characters. Loved the narration too. Keep it up 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved it ❤️ Loved it so much more because of Mukhi's POV.
100% they are going to show this on the show.

You write so well. Can't wait for the next update!
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Wow! very nice :) can't wait for the next update ..:)
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This was just beautiful, very well written! The narration was amazing, the words expressing Mukhi's thoughts were evoking the emotions as good as a live scene could have evoked. Absolutely loved it!
Can't wait for the next update 😳
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Originally posted by: mannu100

👏wowww brilliant and beautiful

basabti chamoo gabar wala part🤣was bang on

please write more really such and asowme OS


Thank u yar! Glad u had fun reading it! 😃
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Originally posted by: mini19

I'm sooo excited to read!!! Will comment the rest after I read :))))


Haha will be waiting for the full review then... 😃
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Originally posted by: Ishqbaaz

That was great ❤️
Loved it. Quite relatable to the actual characters. Loved the narration too. Keep it up 😳


Thank u! 😳 I'm happy that u could relate it to the actual characters... 😃

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