Mehrya's Second Kiss (My One Off Story) Part 3 Updated

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ladies my inner writer is screaming at me and I said why not. I always wished to write on Mehrya but can never because of my love for Handsome. Mehrya kissing...Its something I'll love to see! That I can definitely write on having no problems in writing a story about Handsome with someone whose not me πŸ˜† πŸ˜‰
***I'm writing my own spin on Handsome confessing and proposing to Mahek in the Metro***


In the Metro Train:

Shaurya hurtfully says to Mahek "I'm not arrogant and selfish anymore. Give me one chance to prove it you?" holding her by the arms. Tears escaping her eyes Mahek asks "What will you prove? You need to be a normal person." Pushing away his hands, she starts walking away. Shaurya sadly looks on but holds her hand stopping her from walking any further. He pulls her towards him crashing into his figure wrapping his arms protectively around her. Mahek fights to get out his grip but Shaurya huskily says in her ear stilling her, "Before you walk away from me I want you to remember me by this." His breath grazing the side of her neck send shivers done her back. Closing her eyes, she move her head closer to him to feel the touch of his lips. Shaurya tenderly kisses her neck then nibble her ear. Mahek let out a soft "Shaurya" awaking his desire for more. He remove his arms around her stomach and turn her around to face him. Mahek open her eyes to look at him getting lost in what is in front of her. His features were so soft. She thought how handsome he looks when he smiles. Why doesn't he smile more often? Unconsciously she smile. Shaurya touch her chin lifting her face to look at him.



Looking into each others eyes, the world around them cease to exist. Not only did Mahek see desire for her but love in Shaurya's eyes. She was taken aback by this, her lips slightly parted. Shaurya cup her face rubbing his thumbs up and down her cheeks. They continue to look into each others eyes inching closer and closer as each second pass by. Shaurya rub his nose against Mahek's saying in the sexiest voice " I love you Mahek. I really love you." Shaurya close down the gap between them by possessing her lips. He broke the kiss but continued kissing her jaw. Slowly loosening the grip of the duputta around her neck, his fingers traced her bare skin making her instinctively wrap her arm around his neck, drawing him closer to her. Shaurya mischievously smiled at her gesture, accepting the invitation, he plant small kisses down her neck. Reaching the base of her neck, he plant more kisses there. He started sucking at her neck and in doing so Mahek stirred but he traced his fingers along her back enticing her. Mahek gave into it and ran her fingers playfully in Shaurya's hair. Every now and again he will stop to plant a kiss randomly or rub his cheek against hers. After some time pass and Shaurya thought his mission should be completed now he release her neck to capture her lips once again. This time he kiss her with hunger and passion in wanting to leave her with longing. Pushing her onto a pole in the train he release her lips. Touching them with a smile on his face he says " I always loved those lips". Mahek says "Shaurya please." completely embarrassed she look at the ground. He let out a laugh and grinned. His eyes twinkled as he smile lovingly at her. Both mesmerized by the other.



At this time the train neared the Station. Shaurya fixes her duputta properly in its place and smirk puzzling Mahek. His mission was successful. He ran his fingers down her arms and intertwine their hands together. Mahek look at their hands then at Shaurya. Losing themselves yet again, looking into each others eyes Shaurya asks "Mahek? Please give me a chance to shower my love for you?" He kiss both her hands before releasing them saying with utmost pride and satisfaction "I left you something to remember me by πŸ˜‰" Mahek jaw dropped in shock at his wink then asked what. He says "When you go home remove your duputta in front the mirror and you will see..." "See what Shaurya?" Mahek interjected when he stopped. He resumed "My love bite πŸ˜ƒ" The train finally reached the station and Mahek after realizing her surroundings dazedly walked out the train when the door opened. The Sharma clan with worry painted on their faces shouted for her. Mahek turned around to look inside the train with all the Sharma's having puzzled looks. Shaurya walk into frame. While most of the clan gasped in shock and grimace, Mohit, Sonal and Nehal were happy. Shaurya with a worried look on his face upon seeing Chachi look at Mahek. Chachi first in anger then smile a victorious smile at Shaurya.


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Edit - PS. Not the ideal Mehrya kiss I personally wanted but its good enough to me. I hope you like it... I tried my best to write in the situation I used. Shaurya on a mission. Mahek confused. This was the hardest! I kept on reminding myself to write Shaurya and not Handsome πŸ˜† . To the professional writers I am sorry. I was caught in a web in whether to use past or present tense so I used both. To the rest I apologize in not writing Mehrya kiss in true Melissa style. Believe me you'd love it! πŸ€— But this kiss is bugging me and I had to write something to ease my crazy mind πŸ˜† Criticisms are welcome πŸ˜›. I hope you somewhat enjoyed my short story




Part 2 updated on page 7




Part 3 updated on page 12




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Posted: 8 years ago
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Enjoyed kiss in metro of MehRya 🀣
u wrote well πŸ‘
Shaurya marked her his with his love bites if chachi see this she will faint over there in metro station πŸ˜† but I m sure Mehek won't show it to her 🀣

keep writing 😊

Vinu
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Mel my bacchi u won't believe if I told u tht I was going to ask u to pen a story on MehRya. I was so sure tht u would do full justice to it coz I have read ur posts. U hv an amazing style of writing. Well to be honest, I first thought I would ask u to write something describing Shaurya coz I knew u would go on n on abt it!!!!
But this was cute n beautiful... Loved it. U should write more stories Mel.. We all would love to read them!! So proud of u my dear...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: vimikrao

Enjoyed kiss in metro of MehRya 🀣
u wrote well πŸ‘
Shaurya marked her his with his love bites if chachi see this she will faint over there in metro station πŸ˜† but I m sure Mehek won't show it to her 🀣

keep writing 😊

Vinu


Thank you...πŸ€— my cheeks are starting to get warm again 😳

πŸ˜† She will freak out! 😈 Chachi... 🀣
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: shristi0706

Mel my bacchi u won't believe if I told u tht I was going to ask u to pen a story on MehRya. I was so sure tht u would do full justice to it coz I have read ur posts. U hv an amazing style of writing. Well to be honest, I first thought I would ask u to write something describing Shaurya coz I knew u would go on n on abt it!!!!

But this was cute n beautiful... Loved it. U should write more stories Mel.. We all would love to read them!! So proud of u my dear...



Awww Shristi thank you sooo much!! What you said means a lot to mean πŸ€— I would love to write something on Handsome ☺️ but that's injustice to Mahek... Mehrya is one 😳. If ever a day I get the inspiration to write I will. You ladies already have great stories... I can probably pull off a FF but that will be so hard! Handsome and no me 😭
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It's amazing Melii.. especially the starting. Shaurya in tears.. this is the last thing which i think no one wants 2 see here!!

Keep it up meli.. you did a gr8 job!


N that kiss.. hayye ❀️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: CinderellaGirl

It's amazing Melii.. especially the starting. Shaurya in tears.. this is the last thing which i think no one wants 2 see here!!

Keep it up meli.. you did a gr8 job!


N that kiss.. hayye ❀️


πŸ˜† I want my Handsome to be happy always. Thank you so much Cindy. Glad you enjoyed it. Did you really enjoy the kiss? I tried to do some justice for me in the kiss 😳 I really toned it down 😈 πŸ˜‰πŸ€£
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: melissaR


πŸ˜† I want my Handsome to be happy always. Thank you so much Cindy. Glad you enjoyed it. Did you really enjoy the kiss? I tried to do some justice for me in the kiss 😳 I really toned it down 😈 πŸ˜‰πŸ€£

Yes i loved itπŸ˜‰πŸ˜† You completely did justice yr!😊😊





PS - I'm waiting for ur review on my fun post story!!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: CinderellaGirl

Yes i loved itπŸ˜‰πŸ˜† You completely did justice yr!😊😊





PS - I'm waiting for ur review on my fun post story!!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†


😲 I did justice? Whoa ho! πŸ€— πŸ˜›

Your fun post that you PM about and you said if we Res you'll add us in it? πŸ˜†
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Well done MelπŸ‘

The best effort is one done from the heart, and I know that you have been fighting the urge to write something for a while. I am so glad you finally gave in and treated us all to this😊

I loved it!

And who knows after tomorrow, what you will be aiming to pen πŸ˜†

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