Mehrya's Second Kiss (My One Off Story) Part 3 Updated - Page 9

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Posted: 8 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Parud7

Hi Melissa darling 😛

I hope u r fine 😊
Kya baat yrr mehrya kissing in rain...I wish something they ll show in show also..but cv's are namune...
I like the team of shaurya who wants to reunite the love birds...
Ohhh so our nehal finds the secret love bite very clever girl 🤣...poor mehak embarrassed.
I like the part where thinks about if she married to shaurya how much he ll love her...thinking about merital bliss 👏
This 2nd part is more enjoyable than first one...I thanked u who consider my request and wrote next one...u r such a darling.
I know I didn't pm u yet but I ll soon..give me some time. Don't be angry haan 😆😆 my sweet heart
Your friend
Harry


Harry my darling...thank you! 😳 glad to know part 2 was more enjoyable for you. I was panicking cause nothing was coming to mind I think Team Shaurya was awesome especially Nehal 😉 she's quick on the ball 😆 If I was in Mahek's shoes I would have pondered on the what if's with Handsome...


No no you take your time with that pm...I'm having trouble myself. I can't seem to make up my mind with what I want to do 😆.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: -Thabassum-

You shud defoniel write more Mel...wud love to read more...

Edited my cumnt ..
Sorry was bit late...😒


Its ok Thabs 🤗 thanks for reading and I'll check your other comment. Aww you all are so sweet in encouraging me to write more... you sure about that? 😉 😆
Edited by melissaR - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: -Thabassum-

Mel...

Dear this is just awsum..I always wanted to see u writing..
This was wonderful to read...the love bite ...☺️
I loved the way how cousins bonded to unite MehRya 😳
Sleeping pills in her tea...😆 , kc deserves it .
Ther rain moments wer totally romantic 😳
I wanted to ask u sumthing , glad while writing this you dint refer shaurya as handsome 😆

Over all to your effort and this OS ...😉





Thank you Thabs 🤗 😳 See I've started writing? 😉 Your wish has come true 😛 Your words mean a lot to me just know that


Omg...you have no idea how hard it is to not write Handsome 🤣 its so natural 😆 But I remember its Mehrya I'm writing on. I have to put my shoes in Mahek's and not be in mines 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#84
Hello my lovelies. Its late at night where I live and I can't sleep so I decided why not finish my story I started the week before last week. I am sorry...I have to work on that timeline but life happens and I was stuck. I tried something. Writing Handsome is so easy. He's a complex guy but we all know all him very well. Mahek on the other hand...I have to assume what she thinks and will do. I hope you all like this chapter. I worked really hard on it given I was stuck on what to write next after some parts.
Happy reading 🤗 and I end this which should have been an one off story with this chapter. Thank you so much for all the support and encouragement. I love you all so much 😳


Part 3

Shaurya pressed the alarm to open the car door and sat inside. Closing his eyes, he leaned back on the head rest saying to himself "Hmm! Mahek Sharma you will be the death of me. I've gone crazy for you." Starting the engine he chuckled "Shaurya you're doomed." Auntie Karuna looking at the time and at the door felt uneasy that Shaurya hasn't reach home as yet. Normally he would call her if anything came up unexpectantly but the last she heard from him was in the morning. As she was about to press call, she heard a car in the drive way. She rushed to the door opening it before Shaurya can. "Shaurie why ha.. Shaurie you're wet!" she exclaim ushering him inside. "Awaara!" "Yes Ma'am?" he answered. "Please clean up after Shaurya when he goes up to his room. The floor is wet." Awaara acknowledge her and started leaving but Shaurya stopped him asking "Awaara can you prepare some hot haldi milk and bring it for me please?" "Yes Sir" and he left. "Come Shaurie let's get you dried up." and Shaurya left with his mother. Auntie Karuna took out fresh clothes and ordered Shaurya to have a shower while she waits for him.


Stepping under the showerhead, Shaurya turned the faucet on and embraced the cascading hot water. As he soaps up he couldn't stop himself from thinking of how ravishing Mahek looked especially with her clothes clinging onto her. It showed off all her curves. When she hugged him tightly her flesh on his radiated enough heat to overcome all the coldness that surrounded them. Shampooing his hair he recalls how she ran her fingers through them and caressed him. How enticing it felt when she did that kissing his cheek at the same time. That passionate kiss! Shaurya will never forget that his Laddoo kissed him with so much love, intensity and passion all in one. It left him wanting more. Shaurya if you continue thinking like this you'd end up having to take a cold shower instead. Truth be told he enjoys Mahek touching him. He loves her softness and tenderness. When she buried herself in him he felt he could have held her in his arms forever protecting her from the harsh world. "Shit! Maa is waiting for me!".


Having showered and changed, he sat down for his mother to dry his hair. Rubbing the towel through his hair she asks "Shaurie where you? I was worried sick." "Sorry Maa. I got caught up with something very important." he place his hand on hers to stop her and gave her a peck on the cheek " Sorry Maa." Auntie Karuna giving him a kiss in return said "Its ok beta. Here drink this." handing him the haldi milk "Awaara brought it while you were in the shower" and she continued drying his hair. "Shaurie?" Incoherently he answered Yes Maa while drinking his milk as she continued "I know you've been going through a lot lately but don't do anything in haste please? I can't bare to you see hurting more than you already are. I just want to tell you to have faith and trust in your and Mahek's love. I know you don't believe in God but once your love is true and pure, Devi Maa will bless you and your love. You will get your Mahek back." she caresses his face while her eyes well up. Shaurya can never bare seeing his mother cry cups her face " Maa I promise I will set everything right and bring your beloved Bahu back." and kisses her forehead. "Shaurie please don't do anything silly. You've done enough. Make amends and apologize but most importantly be sincere. It will take time for you to regain their trust before you can be forgiven but be patient."


Shaurya's hair was dry by now and Auntie Karuna hang his towel in the bathroom. As his mother passes him he held her hand, looking at her lovingly with an angelic smile "Maa its already late. Go to bed. I'm sorry for keeping you up waiting." She smiles seeing how lovely her son looks and says "Before I go beta one more thing. Whatever you plan on doing, think of how it will affect Mahek. You know she puts everyone before herself. Good night Shaurie." Holding on to his mother's hand until her finger tips brushes his, as his hand fall limp, he answer her "Good night Maa." and watches her out the door. Heading towards the kitchen to carry back the glass Auntie Karuna says in her mind Shaurie took that much better than the last time I told him to apologize to the Sharma family. Beta you really are changing. Mahek it is all thanks to you. Shaurya got up, took something out of his draw at the bedside and settled into bed. He hugs their picture thinking of his mother's words.


Mahek with the towel in her hand, looks at Nehal sleeping peacefully and walks to the window. Since the rain stopped falling, a constant breeze has been blowing, keeping away any rain clouds from staying. Mahek towel dries her hair. Every so often passing her fingers through the strands allowing the breeze to air dry them. A cold breeze blows causing her to slightly shiver reminding her of how warm she felt hugging Shaurya in the rain. What happened to me? How can I romance Shaurya like that in the open? I've always handled him when he behaves like that.Then how did I lose my control? Mahek couldn't stop herself from feeling bad nor could have helped how she felt being with Shaurya in that way either. Was she letting how society will see her and think of her overrule her feelings for Shaurya when he never cared what others think of their love? She stops drying her hair. Feeling the breeze on her face, Mahek closes her eyes vividly reliving the sensations she felt caressing Shaurya. She felt empowered and confident. But what will Shaurya think of me? He even asked what I was doing? Without thinking Mahek went for her phone and dial Shaurya. Realizing what she just did she tried ending the call but it was too late. Shaurya had already answered the call. What do I say to him?


Suddenly Shaurya's phone rings. He checks the caller ID and chuckles. Talking to Mahek in the picture he says "Can't stop romancing with me huh Ms Sharma?" and picks the call. Mahek on the other side bites her lip and plays with her hair, trying to figure out what to say to him. Nehal shifts on the bed and Mahek quickly ran to the window not wanting to disturb her. Shaurya carefully places their picture back in the draw and walks to his balcony. A soft cool breeze envelops Mahek and then Shaurya as though connecting her to him while unknowningly they both were looking at the same beautiful bright star that caught their attention in the night sky. Mahek tried gathering herself to say something while Shaurya on the other end smiles understanding her shyness. Appreciating him waiting for her she finally gets the courage to speak "Sorry." "Since when lovers need to say sorry to express their love for each other Mahek?" She looks down "I..I.." was all she managed. " Do you need me to come over to help you?" he teases. "Shut up Shaurya!" she scolded making an angry face. He says "You look so hot when you're angry. I wish I can be there in person! " and sends a kiss through the phone. Mahek looks around wondering if "No I don't have any hidden cameras. Yet!" he laughs hysterically at his own joke. Mahek's jaw dropped momentarily and her cheeks flushed red in colour. Shaurya flashes a sweet smile knowing she's blushing and Mahek blushes even more knowing how lovely he must be looking with a sweet smile on his face.


"Shaurya?" in the sweetest voice. "hmm?" he answered huskily. Mahek swallowed and asks "Do you think of me differently?" He was puzzled. Why is she asking him such a question? Throughout all the things they've been through he'd expect her of all people to know that by now he knows she is nothing like those women who tries to be a part of his life. Yet he had to reassure her. His features softening he says " Mahek you are nothing like those women who throw themselves at me everyday. You love me and care for me and I love you and no one else. I love that you were not shy tonight in showing me how you really feel for me and what affect I have on you as you have on me." Nodding as though he can see, she was happy with his answer. "Now did you dry your hair?" "I was..." now it was his turn to order her. "Go dry your hair. I don't want you catching a cold unless you want me to come take care of you?" Mahek rolls her eyes no different to Nehal scowling. "Then have the same hot haldi milk you made me drink" she smiles hearing that, as he continues "and go to bed. But first I want you to stay on the line until I fall asleep. Please?" Mahek giggled making him chuckle. "Sure" she answered. Mahek stayed on the phone until Shaurya fell asleep bidding him good night and saying I love you before hanging up. She finished drying her hair in the bathroom, drank her haldi milk and went to bed thinking of the day she had with Shaurya.



The End.

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Edited by melissaR - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#85
Awww Mel this is was the sweetest ... you know the best part of writing a story is you can command where you end it ...
And choosing to end here you have left it at such a beautiful turn
If I can say ... I saw a huge growth in your writing in just the three chapters you did
You should practise your craft more ..
Write more Mel .. you have one reader eagerly awaiting
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Mel, loved this part.
this tured out like one of those sweet little stories you read on a rainy day, dreaming.

Keep writing lovie.🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: tibs09

Awww Mel this is was the sweetest ... you know the best part of writing a story is you can command where you end it ...
And choosing to end here you have left it at such a beautiful turn
If I can say ... I saw a huge growth in your writing in just the three chapters you did
You should practise your craft more ..
Write more Mel .. you have one reader eagerly awaiting


Thank you so much Tibs 🤗 😳 what you said...means so much! You have no idea 😳 I tried my best. I'm happy to know I have you 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: simran_singh_24

Mel, loved this part.
this tured out like one of those sweet little stories you read on a rainy day, dreaming.

Keep writing lovie.🤗



Simmi thank you. That is so sweet 😳


@Mehryan thank you my dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
#89
Hiee Mel.. 😊
Read all the 3 parts..
U have written it so beautifully..
Loved it.. 😳
Keep writing dear.. ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey mel very sweet and full of innocence. Loved it.but kiss ka chappy mein itna sweet romance hye jaan le lega 👏

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