Mehrya's Second Kiss (My One Off Story) Part 3 Updated - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: melissaR


Thank you!! I was hoping you'd recommend something and you did! 🤗 I wont understand but I'll still watch 😆 He played Zaroon Junaid? Junaid is a cricketer I love too 😳 😆 too many loves!


You convinced me to write a Part 2 Harry. The others gave me the confidence but you convinced me to actually give it shot. Sham sealed the deal 😳 thank you all once again! 🤗

Thank u dear Melissa for considering me the reason of second shot. Mjhe intezaar rhega 😛
I wish u ll write more in future...and ur office work load ll reduce soon 😛
Love u dear and update soon
Harry
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I like him 😳😳

Ohh sham di I didn't notice ur comment sorry
So u like fawad.
Do u saw his famous serial " zindagi gulzar hai"??
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi mellisaa
Waiting the next part 😃
Please update 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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***** A special thanks to all those who encouraged me and gave me the confidence to continue with a second part. Sham you inspired me to write a particular part I hope you enjoy it. I was at a serious writers block for the past week and more. I really pushed myself to write this to get over this currect Chachi track. Hope you enjoy it. Happy reading 🤗 *****


PS - I forgot how tall Mahek is and I had to go through pics of Mehrya hugging 😆 I can leave a certain part as is cause when Mahek hugged Handsome for saving her from the truck men...the logistics work out perfectly 😉



Part 2


Sonal asks Mohit "You think Shaurya was successful?" "Successful doing what?" Sonal and Mohit froze in their places only to be joined by Nehal on the bed. Sighing in relief Sonal answer "Shaurya and Mahek were alone in the train. I hope he told her how much he loves her." Mohit shakes his head in agreement. "Even I was thinking the same. Before I could even ask Di she scold me and chased me out the room saying she wants to be alone for some time. That's why I'm here." Nehal says pouting sadly."Let me call Jiju he'll tell me." "Nehal!" "Please. You both want to know too so don't stop me" and Nehal grabs her phone back from Mohit. She dials Shaurya and puts the phone on speaker. Shaurya smiles seeing the name on the screen and answers the call. "Jiju did you tell Di you love her?" Nehal asks impatiently waiting for his answer. "Yes I did" "And?" "And I left her thinking of me." Shaurya stated matter of factly. "Jiju did you do something?" Nehal asks teasingly. Shaurya burst into laughter making them all smile. "No wonder Di doesn't want me around" Nehal teases jokingly none the wiser. Shaurya then asks "What Mahek is doing?" Complaining she says "I don't know. Di scolded me and chased me out the room." Shaurya chuckled. "Did Chachi scold her?" "No Chachi just looked at her angrily at the station but never said anything." "Ok bye Nehal." "Bye Jiju..." Shaurya hangs up and smiles mischievously.



Mahek in her room stands by the window and recalls her time with Shaurya. A light wind touches her skin as she thinks of her moments with him at the pooja. How Shaurya was feeding the people, how he playfully held her hand with Chachi being right there, how he kissed it. Mahek raise her hand looking at the spot Shaurya kissed and places her hand by her heart. She closes her eyes reminiscing his confession. A tear escape recalling him saying I love you. Remembering their second kiss unconsciously she smiles. Her eyes immediately open recalling Shaurya saying he has given her a love bite. She runs in front the mirror but turn her head away and close her eyes, afraid of what she will see. She slowly removes her duputta around her neck letting it fall on the floor. As Mahek opens her eyes to look at herself in the mirror suddenly her door opens and Chachi calls out to her. Mahek panics and fumbles to pick up her duputta off the floor. Chachi with a tray of food suspiciously looks at Mahek. Mahek conscious of Chachi seeing the love bite fixes her hair to cover her neck. Chachi asks "What were you doing?" Mahek hesistantly says " I..I.. was..getting ready to bathe." Chachi not quite believing her says " Well before you do have this." holding up the tray " you didn't get to eat today being busy cooking for the pooja." "Yes Chachi." Mahek takes the tray from her and rests it on the bed giving Chachi a force smile and thanking her. As Chachi walks out the room Mahek closes the door behind her and locks it.



Saying to herself Mahek Chachi would have surely kill you today if she only saw. why didn't I lock the door? Shaking her heard she walk back over to the mirror. With a deep breathe she remove her duputta. The love bite was purple in colour. She touched it thinking of all the kisses Shaurya planted on her before giving her it. Saying out loud Shaurya look at the size of this. I'm sure you'll boast of how much you love me comparing it to the size as she scowls but I love you too rubbing her finger over it. Mahek ate and took a bathe. She sat on the bed hugging a pillow thinking of all the memories she had with Shaurya. Thinking of how her life could have been now if she and Shaurya were married. She smiles thinking of how much he would have trouble her then how much he would have flirted. She turn crimson thinking of his touch. Shaurya we've had a lot of enmity between us but we've had good memories too. Even thought you faked it then we were happy. I can see you are changing. You are changing for me but this fight between you and Chachi...what its doing to me... she sobs quietly.



Its evening time and Shaurya calls Nehal asking her what everyone is doing. Nehal tells him. He tells her he wants to meet Mahek tonight but he needs her help. Shaurya tells Nehal when Mahek makes tea for everyone to spike Chachi's with sleeping pills but Nehal tells him that Sonal makes tea for everyone now. "Even better my team is in control." They both laugh. He tells her to call Sonal and Mohit whilst he's on the phone with her. He tells them his plan and Mohit, Sonal and Nehal share high fives with each other. Sonal makes tea for everyone and distribute them. When she reaches by Chachi, Nehal pour the crush sleeping pills in the tea, mixes it and leaves. Sonal knocks on the door and Chachi comes to take her tea and drinks it. After some time passes Chachi falls asleep and Team Shaurya makes their rounds to check on the family. Seeing Chachi sleeping and everyone else busy in their own worlds, time for phase 2 to be initiated. Nehal tells PD to keep an eye on everyone as they want to take Mahek to meet Shaurya. PD asks about Kanta but Nehal assures her that Chachi is handled. Mohit goes to Mahek and asks her to help get something for Sonal as he got inspired by Shaurya earlier on. Mahek couldn't help but laugh and went along with Mohit.



Walking in the lane the breeze started picking up tossling leaves around them. Mohit says "Seems like a storm is coming." Mahek says "Let's hurry up before it gets worse." Mohit agrees and hustles her. Mohit takes some money out his pocket and opens his hand to let it fly away with the breeze "Oh no my money! Mahek you wait here" and he rushes off behind it. Shaurya hiding in a side lane pulls Mahek to him covering her mouth from screaming. She bites his hand to release her mouth. "This wasn't the love bite I was expecting in return" he retort cheekily. "Shaurya what are you doing here?" she asked angrily. " I came to see how my love bite is now in person." he winks at her caressing her cheek with one hand and gripping her firmer around the waist with the other. Mahek stills as his touch melts her anger and her eyes softens looking at him questionly. Shaurya moves her duputta to look at it and grins. Sonal and Nehal meet Mohit and they spy on them. Sonal says "Come on let's leave the lovebirds. The plan was successful but we have to keep an eye on the rest." pulling them."Wait!" Nehal shouted in a whisper. "Di has a love bite." "Where!" they both ask. Nehal points and says winking "Jiju...you really left her thinking about you". "Ok ok let's go before Mahek catches us." Sonal holds them by the arm and they walk back home.




"See how much I love you?" Shaurya boasts. "I knew you'd say that." Mahek says annoyed. "So you did look at the mirror as the first thing reaching home?" he teased. "Shut up!" Mahek hits him on his chest "ouch!" "Sorry!" she exclaim lovingly. He touches her face shaking his head as no seeing her eyes welling up. "Please don't cry Mahek. I can bare a lot more pain, a thousand times more than this for you. Please? I made you cry enough for me." He releases her from his hold, cupping her face with both of his hands, Shaurya kisses each of her eyes. A chilly breeze blows and Shaurya hugs her to keep her warm. Mahek hugs him back rubbing her face on him then settled it on his chest. Shaurya heart started racing with her flesh touching his bare chest. Listening to his heart beats, Mahek smiles kissing his chest and tighten her grip around him. The breeze started blowing stronger and stronger then tiny rain drops started falling. "Shaurya you should go before its starts raining heavier you probably parked your car far." "I'm not going anywhere." "Stop being so stubborn. Please go?" Mahek says still hugging him. From a drizzle, it started raining. Shaurya lifts his head up towards the sky and close his eyes, letting the rain quench his skin. Mahek releases herself saying "Shaurya we'll both get sick if we don't leave now." Bowing down and opening his eyes to look at Mahek, he says "This is Bhagwan blessing us." "Enough of this nonsense. I'm going." Mahek starts walking away but Shaurya stops her holding her hand.



Shaurya pulls her on to him, both of them completely drenched by the heavy rain now. Mahek's clothes hugged her body. The rain drops running down her face, her neck unto her chest. Shaurya instantly remembered the sight of her during Karva Chauth. His eyes got dark. Back then he managed to control his attraction as she was a mere stranger but now...she's his lover. Mahek at first was put off by his change in body language. She can see the burning desire in his eyes. Yet the darkness that is present in his eyes doesn't scare her but rather draw her to him, like a moth drawn to a flame. She touches his face, caressing it, running her fingers through his scruffy beard. Shaurya wraps his arms around her waist not taking his eyes off her. Mahek runs her hands down to his chest feeling his heart beats. Shaurya huskily says "You always love to get touchy touchy with me." Mahek couldn't help herself. Shaurya looks sexy with the droplets running down his skin, his wet clothes emphasising his physique. She runs her hands up his chest, tip toeing and wrap her arms around his neck pulling him into her for a hug. Shaurya was taken aback by having her so close to him like that, he asks alarmly "Mahek what are you doing?" knowing the consequences of such a gesture. She gently caress where his head wound was and kisses his cheek. Shaurya leans down to touch her forehead with his , both closing their eyes and hugging each other tighter as the rain continues to fall and the wind blows. Mahek moves her head away and looks at him, Shaurya asking what with a nodd, Mahek smiles and emotionally says " I love you Shaurya. I love you." kissing him passionately on the lips. Shaurya wanted to dominate but chose to enjoy her affection. Afterall Mahek is kissing him! Feeling shy of what she just did, she hid her face under his neck. Chuckling Shaurya says "Come on let me walk you back home."



Shaurya and Mahek walk back to her home with their hands intertwine, silently recalling all what happened previously. Reaching in front the door, they both stop and turn to face one another. "Shaurya let Awara make hot turmeric milk before you go to bed." "Always so concern for me." Shaurya replies touching her cheek with his hand. "Yes I'll let Awara make it for me. Now go inside before they think I kidnap you." Shaurya laughs. Mahek gasp "Chachi!" "Don't worry about Hitler Chachi. I took care of her. She won't be troubling us until she wakes up tomorrow morning." "Huh? Shaur..." he cuts her off by placing his finger on her lips. "Good night Mahek" and kisses her love bite. He gently knocks on the door in a code. Mahek looks at him questionly and he answers "My team is looking out for me 😉" . Mohit opens the door and Shaurya gently pushes her inside and waves her good bye with the most breathe taking smile and a twinkle in his eye. Mahek heart skipped 10 beats by how ravishing Shaurya looked and all she managed was a half wave. Shaurya laughed seeing her reaction and grin ear to ear. Rain no longer falling, Shaurya walks back to his car thinking of how bold Mahek was to kiss him. Mohit locks up and goes off to bed. Mahek slowly and quietly walks to her room. As she passes PD, quietly under the cover PD asks "Laddoo did you have rain romance with Hero?" Completely embarrass she ran away to her room. Mahek quickly closed the bedroom door and Nehal threw the cover off of her saying "Mission accomplished 😉." Mahek says "I can't believe you all helped him! What did you do to Chachi?" "Please Di like if you studied her while romancing each other." Nehal was right, Chachi didn't cross her mind for even a second. Nehal continued "Did Jiju give you another gift on the other side in the rain?" Mahek shouts "Nehal!" and throws the nearest thing she can find at her. Nehal laughs and says "You better change into something quickly before you get the cold. In fact don't. Jiju will come and take care of you." laughing hysterically this time as Mahek makes angry face at her.


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Part 3

Edited by melissaR - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Mel...
Dear this is just awsum..I always wanted to see u writing..
This was wonderful to read...the love bite ...☺️
I loved the way how cousins bonded to unite MehRya 😳
Sleeping pills in her tea...😆 , kc deserves it .
Ther rain moments wer totally romantic 😳
I wanted to ask u sumthing , glad while writing this you dint refer shaurya as handsome 😆

Over all to your effort and this OS ...😉



Edited by -Thabassum- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Mel this was so sweet and absolutely great ... loved loved reading it ...
You should write more
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful writing .got goosebums we are just imagining but u got out in to your writing keep giving this fantasy.its so beautiful to read about their romance.as if it is real.keep going gal.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: tibs09

Mel this was so sweet and absolutely great ... loved loved reading it ...
You should write more



It was...? Tibs thank you! 🤗 that means so much to me 😳 I'm so happy you love it. I'm so nervous!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: 24SONIgal

Beautiful writing .got goosebums we are just imagining but u got out in to your writing keep giving this fantasy.its so beautiful to read about their romance.as if it is real.keep going gal.



Thank you! 🤗 Your words are so touching...I love Handsome...I wanted to write so much more but it would have been me rather than Mahek 😆. Its tempting to start a FF on my own. I have a plot already but I don't know...I'm in two minds.


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Res...Meli ..It's 1 Am almost..
Morningi will start my day with this FF ... Thanks for pm sweetie🤗

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