Kriyyam SS- Ok Jaanu!! (Last part updated page 8)

Hey everyone!! I wanted to write something on Kriyyam since looong..But couldn't write due to my exams..But now, as I'm having a leisure time, I'm gonna type my ideas..Here I go wid my first SS on Kriyyam..Here's d prologue...

A boy n a gurl were sitting on a bench in a garden. The boy took d gurl's hand in his. His fingers were caressing her knuckles. D gurl was looking at him wid her doe eyes.

Boy: I think it's high time now.. Mujhe to yahi decision sahi lagta h..Main tumhara decision jaanna chahta hu..(I think dis decision is right..I want to know your decision..)

Gurl: r u sure?? I mean, agar hum ye sab handle nhi kr paye to..(I mean, wat if we couldn't handle all dis..)

Boy: don't worry..

Gurl: no..Sirf kehne se nhi hota..Apne careers bhi to handle krne honge..Decision lene se pehle humein do baar sochna chahiye..Ye bohot bada decision h..Isse hamari lives change ho sakti h..Be practical..( we shud think twice before taking d decision..Coz it's a very big decision..It can change our lives..)

Boy: u trust me??

D gurl nods in yes. Boy smiles.

Boy: to hum sab handle kr lenge..(then we'll handle everything..)

Gurl: sath mein..(together)

D boy smiles wider. He gets up. D gurl too gets up.

Boy: so let's start from today..Ok jaanu??

Gurl: ok jaanu!! [Smiles wide]

They leave from there hand in hand.

So how was it?? Wat decision do u think they're talking abt??  I know it was filmy, so is d title n so m I😆😆!! But it's not gonna be like d movie Ok Jaanu..I haven't even seen d movie till now..So r u looking forward to it..N I'm not a regular person, but will try to post twice a week..So plzz be patient!!

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Part 3- Page 4

Part 4- Page 5

Part 5- Page 6

Part 6 (last part)- Page 8

Thanx Faeeqa..I write filmy..U read filmy..Filmistaan!! Lol😆😆 I'll post d first episode dis week, for sure..

Thanx shiney..Btw, is shaz your real name??

Thanx for your comment dear..N both Aarti n Anjali r my names..

Thanx dear..Will post dis week..

Hi everyone..I want to tell u all something..I've decided dat if u all want, I'll make it of only 5 parts..I'll keep d story short..I got very less comments..Maybe bcz most of u found it uninteresting n boring..It's ok..I'll keep it short n end it within April..Thanx to all those who commented..N metaphor who atleast liked it.. Special Thanx to khushi, who helped n supported me d most..

Krishna is getting down s stairs of a building. She's on a call. "Ya Saiyyam, I'm coming" said Krishna. "Make it fast Krish" spoke Saiyyam. "Arey, abhi abhi office se nikli hu. Thoda time to lagega na (jst now I've left from office, it'll take sometime atleast). Have pateince", complained Krishna. 

She reached a garden n saw Saiyyam waiting for her. "Happy anniversary babyyy!!" She squealed in happiness as she hugged him. He too said "happy anniversary" while he kissed her cheek. Both of them cut a cake n fed each other.

 They sat on a bench close to each other, holding hands. Saiyyam was smiling more than he usually does. Krishna noticed dat. "Wat happened?? Ye oh-I'm-so-happy wali smile kis liye (wat is dis oh-I'm-so-happy smile for)??" He replied "main kuch soch rha tha (I was thinking something)" "wat??" He held her hand in his hand n said "Krish, it's been three years since we're together. So.." "So??" asked Krishna. "So I was thinking dat..We shud move in together.." Krishna was bit surprised by Saiyyam's sudden proposal of a live-in relationship. She said "don't u think ye thoda jaldi h (don't u think it's a bit early)??" Saiyyam'sfingers caressed her knuckles n he replied "I think it's high time now.. Mujhe to yahi decision sahi lagta h..Main tumhara decision jaanna chahta hu..(I think dis decision is right..I want to know your decision..)" "but  r u sure?? I mean, agar hum ye sab handle nhi kr paye to..(I mean, wat if we couldn't handle all dis..) said Krish looking tensed. "don't worry" said Saiyyam trying not to make her tensed. "no..Sirf kehne see nhi hota..Apne careers bhi to handle krne honge..Decision lene se pehle humein do baar sochna chahiye..Ye bohot bad decision h..Isse hamari lives change ho sakti h..Be practical..( we shud think twice before taking d decision..Coz it's a very big decision..It can change our lives..)" said Krishna trying to make Saiyyam understand dat jst being excited does not work. He shud know abt d effects a live-in relationship will hv on both of their lives. But Saiyyam was totally aware of wat he was saying. He softly asked her "u trust me??" She nodded in a yes. Saiyyam smiled at her n said " to hum sab handle kr lenge..(then we'll handle everything..)" Krish was convinced now, n she added to Saiyyam's statement "sath mein..(together)"

 She asked him a bit excitedly "so when will we start searching for..Humara ghar (our house)" laying emphasis on hamara (our). Saiyyam got up from d bench n asked her "so let's start from today..Ok jaanu??" Krish smiled n said "ok jaanu" "but, before dat..Mera gift kahan h (where's my gift)??" Krish, being playful, said "I'm not in mood. Gift kal..Thik h (gift tomorrow..Ok)" 

Saiyyam pulled her close h held her waist. Krish smirked at him saying "arey, jaanu getting naughty!!" "Sab tumhari wajah se, mujhe jo chahiye wo dedo ( all bcz of u, give me wat I want)" said Saiyyam giving her a naughty smirk. Krish said "u're hopeless Saiyyam!!" Saiyyam said "now get used to my demands..Bcz we're moving in together, so ab se..hum tum ek kamre mein band ho, aur chabi kho jaye (from now..U n me in a room n d keys get lost)". He winks at her n moves his face closer to hers.

 Krishna's hands move from Saiyyam's shoulders to his hair. His rough lips met her glossy ones. He pulled her more closer through her waist while her fingers roamed in his curly hair. He could taste her lipgloss. She pulled out when she was out of breathe. He placed a soft kiss on her nose n both of them left for their places.

PRECAP- finding a house..

I know it wasn't dat interesting, but I tried my best..Next episode will be posted dis week only..Plzz comment if u liked it