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hi everyone ...this is my first ff on kriyam...pls forgive me people...im really bad at writing...but got this idea wanted 2 share it with you all...its starting frm where saiyyam gets yuvans card for krishna on valentines day...in this story..yuvan is negative...im sry...i dint want it to be like tht...but it was needed 4 this story...again pls pls pls 4give me 4 my mistakes...n ill b a little fast in updating next pat...cos my xams r cuming up...so ill have to complete it b4 tht...
pls pls give me your your feedback...shud i continue this?...n pls 4give 4 my mistakes...this is my first experience...so pls...
CHAPTER 1
The day after krishna confessed her love to yuvan thinking its saiyyam...yuvan felt really bad 4 leaving her n marrying baby...he cursed his fate...he cursed tht wedding day of theirs...now he was sure tht there was nothing between saiyyam and krishna n was happy for the fact that krishna stil luvs him.
Krishna was really tensed...thinking tht she confessed her love to saiyyam...she had a fear of the fact tht he wud reject her...but deep inside her heart she had a hope...
(saiyyam cums to their room...krishna doesnt look at his face...her heart beats increased...she thought he is gonna say the answer...she gripped tightly to her kurta...)
Saiyam- Krishna 2day ill b a little late...its my friends wedding...n luks at her (he wanted her also to come...but he thought tht she wud refuse thts y dint ask her)(krishna just listens to all this silently..)
Saiyyam- and...(he goes near krishna) (krishna gets nervous)
Saiyyam - no need of making food 4 me 2day ...ill eat from there...(n he takes his watch frm the table which was near krishna..)
(krishna felt bad at the fact tht he dint even tell anything abt the matter...she was so angry tht she dint know wat she tld.)
Krishna- saiyyam...its your friends wedding wright...then y r u not taking ur wife along with u...?
(saiyyam was surprised at this question of hers...he looked at her being confused. but he was so happy tht she is ready 2 cum with him...)
(krishna suddenly realised wat she told...n felt a bit awkward)
(suddenly a call came to saiyyam...it was his friends...call...to tell tht the wedding is cancelled because ...bried father died suddenly..)
Saiyyam-v r not going for the wedding (krishna felt very bad ...she thought he doesnt like me going with him...)
saiyyam - brides father died...so wedding is cancelled..
(krishna felt a bit releived...cos her thoughts were wrong)
Saiyyam-but krishna i have to go there.i know tht uncle very well dont know how this hhappened...im leaving..
Krishna-mmm...(cudnt tell anything cos...she was confused at the fact tht he is not saying anything abt tht matter)
after sometime...yuvan makes a card 4 krishna 2 confess his love ...n keeps it in krishnas sofa...thinking tht saiyyam is not here...n he goes..
saiyyam cums back...n goes to their room...n sees the card...
he reads the full card n gets shocked on knowing the fact tht yuvan still luvs krishna...
Saiyyam- why am i feeling bad...i dont love her...even she doesnt love me...but she loved yuvan...i came in between them n spoiled krishnas life 4 my bloody revenge...but does krishna still love yuvan?...
(saiyyam keeps the card in his drawer)
Saiyyam-y did i keep tht card im my drawer?...y i feel like krishna shud not see this...(a lot of questions came up in his mind)
it was dinner time...n all assembled 4 having food...krishna came n sat next to saiyyam...n then yuvan n baby came...saiyyam felt angry seeing yuvan...but he controlled...
yuvan came n sat next to krishna...n started talkin 2 her casually...even she was talking to him...saiyyam was burning in jealousy...
Saiyyam-she never talks with me like this...y am i feeling bad wen these 2 r talking..?(he wanted to stop their talking)
Saiyyam-krishna u know wat happpened to tht brides father...?he started exagurating the whole story n was narrating it to krishna...till their food was over..
(krishna was listening to wat all he was saying cos...she was enjoying his company...n it was the 1st time he was talking to her like that...)
in between yuvaan tried to distract her...but she was only listening 2 saiyyam...
after dinner all go to their respective rooms...
in kriyams bedroom...
both lay down to sleep in bed n sofa...
krishna thinks...2day saiyyam was talking so friendly..with her...is it his other way of saying yes to me...
saiyyam thinks...tht yuvan left her in the last minute of their marriage wright...how can she luv him?...but i forcefully married her n tortured her...how can she luv me...? "LOVE " he suddenly realised wat he thought...he smiled a bit n understood the fact tht...he has fallen...fallen very hard...
he looked at krishna who was sleeping in her sofa...he thought to himself...but do i deserve her...
no...i dont ...but even yuvan doesnt desrve her...he also had hurt her...
( the full night he cudnt sleep...he was looking at krishna...n thinking all their fights his torture n some of their good moments)
Precap-yuvan n saiyyam fights...suhani supports yuvan...saiyyam cums to the room..n throws thing angrily .n starts crying...krishna cums n see this n feels bad 4 saiyyam...
pls pls give me your your feedback...shud i continue this?...n pls 4give 4 my mistakes...this is my first experience...so pls...
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