Just saw the update and read it completely. But need to go out with mommy. So, will post my detailed comment shortly. Please wait for me patiently sonu.
Just back and post dinner comment as under:
Truly beautiful scene. Very nicely described. Geet and maan's happiness as amu out of danger. Maan wants his baby to call him papa. The way he was yelling at the doctor proved his fatherly feelings. But he himself along with his mishty was like a baby. Their faces pressed cutely against the glass window was so adorable. Looking at them even the nurse struggled to stifle her giggles as the doctor glared at her.
Doctor was right that amu will need more time to recover completely. Maaneet will need to handle him quite patiently. But he is so smart at this young age. Even being a baby, he wants assurance that his parents will tell him everything properly. How sweetly he threatened maan and geet to promise him in writing. Maan telling his bachcha that they will move in a new big house having many rooms. Amu was confused how maan will live in the small cottage. Geet was showering her husband and son, two babies at once with her love.
But now maan and geet will have to answer dadi maa. However, i don' think she will mind. In fact having a daughter-in-law like geet and great grandchild like amu, she will be really happy. Even dev would be pleased for his brother. Maaneet will be together with their baby and happy carefree life.
So many years passed but none of them forgot those touches, the lovely cold evenings and each other's craving for love. Of course, the first thing that brought them together was the locket. The cold metal and crystal touch was deeply etched in maan's memories. He and geet never forgot each other. Specially geet as she was quietly carrying the symbol of their pure, untainted love inside her.
Looking forward to next update. Hope to see everything sorted out finally. Lovely story and really gripping concept. Please continue soon, dear.
Edited by turbulence - 7 years ago
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