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Posted: 8 years ago
😭... sad...
..beautifully penned...
egarly waiting for next part...


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Posted: 8 years ago

Part 31_

10.30 AM Caf_

Sharavan waiting for Suman...

Sumo, come sit

Kyo bulaya hai...

Tumne kaha tha ke jab tumhe baat karni ho to coffee par bula lena

Hmmm, bolo kya baat hai..

Kuch poochna hai... tumse ... mere dost banogi ...

Sharavan ... tumne galat sawal se galat time par shuruaat kari hai..

Nahi yahi sahi sawal hai ...aur time ab mere pass hai nahi ... Mere dost banogi for life time ...

Do I have option?

Not for seven days ... you promised right

Okay deal

Sumo Tulips...

You know naa I don't like tulips anymore ...

No ! You still like Tulips ... don't associate it with bad incident and abhi maine time machine se time set kia hai ... so today is the day I asked you to come to meet me...

Hmmm

Sumo, do you know why I asked you to come to meet me...

No

To tell you that... I love you... Sumo check ...touch here .. God my heart is beating like seventeen year old Sharavan (winking at her)

Sharavan ...

Okay baby... sorry ( on his knees ) Sumo I love you ...

Sharavan everyone is watching ... get up

Nope answer ... main aaise hee baitha rahoonga

Yes ... Yes

Sunai nahi pada ...

YES

Yey ...( hugging her) ... Sumo I have girlfriend from today onwards ..

Suman_ ( ye pagal ho gaya hai)... Sharavan control

Why Sumo ... kitne dino baad mili ho ... control nahi ho raha.. .. coffee

Haan

(After coffee )

Sumo pay for coffee

Why, last time I paid ..

I don't have money... dosti main etna chala hai

But I don't have money ...

no you have ... check it's in one black wallet

That's your wallete

Nope tumhare pass hai to tumhara hai ... now pay ... we have to go somewhere

(in wallet very old picture of young Sharavan and Sumo looked straight in teary eyes of Suman)

This one ... Sharavan you stole it from my scrapbook ... cheat I thought I missed it somewhere ... ye fate ke pic hai naa ...

(very serious tone) Yes Sumo this is picture of our fate ... (again playful voice) and madam aapne bola that " aaj main bahut khush hoon ... you can take anything you want from my collection" ... Ab yaad aaya ... bas maine bataya nahi kee maine kya lia ... its not cleating dumbo...

You are dumb ... Chashmish

Chalo ...

Bike ... Sharavan this is bike ... we are riding bike ... it's raining

Sweetheart ... subah weather report dekh lee the ... ab baitho ... Duff ... cross leg baith ... behanji and wear glasses nahi to abhi deaf ho blind bhe ho jaogi... opps tum to already mere pyar main andhi ho ... hai naa

Shutup .. ouch ye break kyo maara ...

Girlfriend ho ... Etna bhe nahi samjhati ... ha ha ha ha and hold me tight nahi to gir jaogi ..

Suman_ ( you are making my dream come true ... but I don't know what to do ... just for today .. I am your girlfriend... Just for today)

She leaned on his back hugging him from behind and he cried in rain... with huge smile on lips.

Note _ rain rain come again and again 😉

Edited by Wiccamaya - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
*Yay* 😎 Me first!!
*Reserved*

*Edited*

I read this thrice... and then again.
I am spellbound yaar. Like literally! 😳

This wonderful amalgamation of present happiness and omnious future tidings was haunting.
Nimik would have nailed it. ❤️

Shravan's 'Time toh ab mere paas nahi hai' was heartbreaking.
And that proposal was damn cute. ⭐️ Could imagine him being all stubborn to make her accept and Suman doubting his sanity.

Awiee! What bliss! Their bickering is back. And she calls him Chashmish!! ⭐️

He is recreating history.

And that last image with his teary smile and Sumo leaning on his back simply stays in my mind!!

Lovely update. 😃

P.S. I have a request. PM karti hu. 😉
Edited by pearl.white - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow 👏
But I feel like shravan ye din apni zindagi ke aakhri din samajh kar jee rha ho
Like kal ho na ho jee le aaj zindagi
And then sumo nhi to shravan nhi like...
It is so pain full
And dialogue waqt hi to nhi hai ( mera bhi rone ko man kar rha h)
Awww 😭
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Amisha.r

Wow 👏
But I feel like shravan ye din apni zindagi ke aakhri din samajh kar jee rha ho
Like kal ho na ho jee le aaj zindagi
And then sumo nhi to shravan nhi like...
It is so pain full
And dialogue waqt hi to nhi hai ( mera bhi rone ko man kar rha h)
Awww 😭


waqt hi to nahi hai... 🥱 Thanks for comment 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Read chapters 29-31 in one go. They were enjoyable. I hope Shravan doesn't have anymore nightmares. Continue soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
amazing update
absolutely brilliant
continue soon
superb
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Posted: 8 years ago
Poor souls and beautiful update
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Posted: 8 years ago
Very emotional scene
Shravan proposed her on knee & she except it

But what Sumo wants to his girlfriend only for oneday

Shravan cried and smiling at the same time on rainy.

I hope shravan ka nervous break down na hojaye, he is not stable anytime uska BP phirse low ho Sakta hai agar woh aisa hi kartha rahega.

Please Sumo Shravan ko chodke mat jao. Woh nehin reh payega tumhre bina ghut ghut ke mar jayega.

Nice update emotional kar ditha tune.

Update soonish
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanls and loads of love ... Jerry,Mystic,Vinayak and Arshu...😊

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