AsYa FF: Mohabbatein - Part 18 Updated: Pg 140 - 20/12/16 - Page 93

This is one of my favourite part of this FF till now...

U just made my day...WHAT A BEAUTIFUL UPDATE.
Thank u fr the long and so beautiful update dear.
god...really its freaking awesome, sooo damn gud dear.
when i finished reading of this update with the last line "he was falling, hopelessly for her", trust me i realized i'm crazy nd falling hopelessely for this story,
Each nd every line...mind blowing, fantabulous.
the emotions expressed through out the story, its like i'm can see nd feel the emotions
honestly i overwhelmed...no words to say,
bz i missed ASYA like Crazy nd this story is one of the story i have nd had alwys looking for, nd every time the update comes...its more than worth wait
i just want to say u r an amazing writer yaar, its from my heart. Trust me.
so coming to the update ,. i luvd ASYA parts, LUVD IT So so much. the longing, pain, loneliness of them, their attraction towards each other...so beautifully written. Marvellous
i laughed via the "sugar" barista parts...So funny
nd that bike riding...WOW
u reminded the QH 1 too,...beautiful parts
I really LUV the way of ur writing...intense nd cute ASYA parts., i cant ever forgt them,. EVER.like asad felt that zoya looks adorable when she is in her half sleeping state.
nd yess that scene is so adorable , when zoya scold everyone fr disturbng her sleep...its cute nd hilarious.
ayaan- aahil-zoya conv, bhai's concern towards their lil sis Zoya...cho chweet they are.nd asad finally relieved bt kind of confused at ayaan -zoya relation.
nd i thnk every one is realizing asad's care towards zoya as Mr. khan feelings are out of control day by day ;)
totally it is an outstanding , marvellous awesome amazing update which i couldnt get enough nd LUVD IT TO THE CORE.
Nw feeling so so exciting nd impatient too fr the nxt update...dreaming on of ASYA.
update sooonish as u can dear...waiting nd waiting .

is there teaser ?? if there, then i missed.
Where is it ??
did i really missed??
here i'm going mad by thnkng wat'll happen nxt, !!!!
U'll not delay the update with the teaser, na !!
dont do that na,...
waiting very eager fr the nxt update...update soon dear

Well today I finally have some time to type a comment!

I read every single one of your updates and smile laugh and cry with the characters! It is simply amazing and written beautifully. ...
I would like to thank you wholeheartedly for writing this wonderful story...I love the lengthy updates and I look forward
to each and every one of them...

I'm loving the tension between Asya now...and wow that kiss on her hand...was so sweet and cute

Looking forward to the next update! 😃

unres

finally read it

firstly really sorry mujhse long comment nahi likhe jate ( or u cn say i cn't describe my thought/views in words )

But again words can not describe my feelings for this worder full update ( whole story )

so coming to update ..

love ever bit of it ( i luv asya parts the most ) their nok jhok ,..fir wo gift n wo kiss hayee ...

he is falling for her .. ( i knw same with her also )

ab to next prt ka bhi w8 ni hota continue soon,,( i pls asya prt jayada rakhna mujhe bake log pasand nahi hai .)

THE PICS U POSTED ON LAST IS BEAUTIFULL . ( or zoya he dress toh ,,,AAK ne use lacture nahi dia asie dress dekh kr worndering )

plsss update soon

or ha mere chote chore comment se he kaam chalna padega

Awesome update

Loved it

He asked the kids abt the girl who was kidnapped & shocked to know that it was zoya.

He reached there & saved her on time. He was guilty for his action which was his biggest mistake as it could destroy her life & anger on himself as his best friend betrayed him.

He know what he do with akram even akram knew as well.

He wanted to apologise but zoya is zoya, never let him complete his words. Liked the bike scene. It shocked them but he can't control himself when it's related to zoya.

Aahil saw her injuries & asked her. He was relieved to hear sis from Ayaan. Liked the way she handled the situation. She can fight with him but can't see his head down with guilt. Malik uncle didn't buy that reason. Gift was wonderful, I simply loved it.

He got to know finally who that new coffee barista is. Finally he completed his task to apologise her & she forgive him.

In sum up, all the scenes written beautifully.

Waiting for next update soon.

Thanks for pm

This was super duper awesome. Full of Asya. Love it. Can't wait for more. Finally Asad is eating an inkling about Zoya and his relationship with Ayan and Ashli. Poor Aahil. Hope he is managed to get away from the engagement and poor poor Anaya. I feel so bad for her. She is going to be so heart broken.