ShivIka FF: PROMISES- The Final Promise: I Love You (Pg 39)

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Immaturebookie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

I'm in love with your writing😊. Do update fasf 😉

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pennyg

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

just ahhh! cant wait for the next chapter👏

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twerping

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

With each update, you just continue to prove how adept you are as a writer! This conversation between them under the guise of a temporary truce was a perfect follow up to the previous update! And the hints of disturbing emotions regarding each other that is growing within the two!! Tantalising stuff! And Kitty Kat!!! Really?! Shivay should ponder over the fact that he managed to continue eating on seeing that note in her diary but lost it on hearing too much about Tia! 😆

Can't wait for your next update!

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twerping

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

As for your comment on Omkara... Seriously, I totally understand now how you managed to write him like that. I love the analogy you used to describe him.. re: him not being the knight in shining armour and instead being the innkeeper giving broken people a place to rest, asking no questions of them lest he be asked in return. That was so accurate and so profound a thought--it will be really interesting to see how you write Om into his own love story.

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SRKian

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Ok i read chap 4 & 5 in a go nd both were amazing!luved jealous shiv in chap 4 nd luved shiv's thought abt ani's world hw she reaches to c in chap 5 😆 update soon

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Sophia Khan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

He eats her food .. Anika loves calling him Billu lmao and I love it.. Shivaay cant even hear Tias name and he will marry her 😆
You are such an amazing writer.. This was amazing. I can't wait for the next one. Thank you for updating fast as well 😳

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Tanu156

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Hey me again 😃😳 yeah u can ignore me bcoz I am going to comment more often !! BTW how are u able to bring the comedy without rudra or O !! 😲 Not that I am suggesting anything g bcoz I won't u r already great n I wish u all the best !!! Just keep up good work I love your story😊