Akdha ss The sacrified love Note on Pg 62

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Rahi

@Rahiramesh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#291

WOW this was super awesome update👏
Mystery woman was Jo's Mom😊
Kids are villains of Ja's love life😆
It was very very sweet update😃
Please don't end it so soon😭

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SomeoneloveJA

@SomeoneloveJA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#292

Awesome updates dear..
Ja found Jo and his kid..
JaJo's wedding coming up...
Jo's mom is the mystery woman...who called Ruk...
oh..kids are cute...
waiting for JaJo' wedding..
Update fast dear...

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Shinning_Stuti

@Shinning_Stuti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#293

Beautiful one.🤗 Loved the interaction between Jalal and Jodha. If Jodha could move a step forward and had a courage to tell everything to Jalal maybe things would not be complicated but perhaps human sometime can't do what situation wants them to do for their selfrespect, respect for any relationship and sentiment related with a relation... loved the way you crafted the way jalal realised his love...

Jodha's mother's action was not ethically correct but this way she saved Jalal and Ruqaiya's lives too along with Jodha and her kids.😳

Kids are very cute...❤️

Everything is happy happy now. So waiting for a colourful chapter ahead. Thanks dear.😃

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eshalli

@eshalli

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#294

Lovely chapter dear
Loved it
Continue soon
Thxcc 4r pm

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Raksha Gupta

@1357raksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#295

Wonderful updates. ..

Read 8th nd 9th chapter nw...

Chapter 8

Jalal was trying to keep him away from asking jodha nd jealous of his friends when he talking about jodha... nd was also amazed by her new look. .. jodha was worried what will she do when she was jalal...

Chapter 9

Wow finally jodha told everything to jalal nd they r happy family nw...

Wow so it was jodha's mom wh had called ruks... she did good job...

Every one r happy in d family nd planning for joja marriage. ...

Nd ower jalal is in naughty mood but poor him he couldn't get what he want his kids want their mom back...

Update soon...

Nd thanks for pm...

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cute.ritu

@cute.ritu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#296

Originally posted by: cute.ritu
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Amazing chappy

Jo told him the truth

Wow jalal confessed his love 😳

So now everything is fine

Ohhh so maina was the one who called ruks

Jalal told everything to hamida & they all r also happy with it 😛

Last part was superb..joja's cute moments 😳

Bechara jalal didn't get his kiss because of

His naughty baby's who now became villain in his love story 😆

Thanks for pm

update soon

& plz don't end this story so soon

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divyadaya13

@divyadaya13

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Posted: 9 years ago

#297

Awesome update. Lovely story. You took forward the story amazingly. Hope you will write some more akdha ff's after ending this story.😳

Edited by divyadaya13 - 9 years ago

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mickeymini

@mickeymini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#298

Originally posted by: divyadaya13
Awesome update. Lovely story. You took forward the story amazingly. Hope you will write some more akdha ff's after ending this story.😳

Hehehe planning actually
I have three concepts in my head
Thinking which to start
Moreover I need to improve my writing skills s bit more

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Shinning_Stuti

@Shinning_Stuti

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#299

Originally posted by: mickeymini

Hehehe planning actually
I have three concepts in my head
Thinking which to start
Moreover I need to improve my writing skills s bit more

Hey your writing skill is not that bad. It's fine, simple snd lucid.😳 and it will improve a lot along with the practice of writing.😊

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misty

@misty22

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#300

Ur jst amazing. ..cnt fnd wrds...d chappy ws xtremely bfull..joja nd d kids ere supa...u really a brilliant writer wd grt imaginative power ...so jo s mom ws masterming...lvly...tnku shoo mucg fr pm nc update. ..plz update nzt part asap..lv u..lukin forward fr more bfull akdha ff s...