Akdha ss The sacrified love Note on Pg 62

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Hello a small thought about akdha came to my mind yesterday
Hope you all will like it
Not so great but you can read it

Chapter-1

The entire house was decorated for the engagement of the two love birds .
Soon the man obviously jalal arrived in his car along with his family and stepped out the car to find his to be fatherinlaw and motherinlaw standing at the entrance of their huge mansion holding a thali .
Soon the aarti was done and all entered inside the hall.

Somewhere inside the room a girl was humming a beautiful song and was looking equally beautiful .
Quite excited for her engagement with the love of her life .

Soon everyone took their respective places inside the hall .
The equally excited groom was waiting for the glimpse of his dulhan .

Thinking about this he recalled how they just 1year back through common friends and how he professed his love for her 7 months back !!!
How he and she have dated for months by even more deeply getting into love .
How there family first objected on their relation but later on have accepted them with open heart .

But his heart is lacking of something that is his best friend who left him a year back without even informing him .
He wanted to share his most happiest times with her but she is not with him nor he know where she is to contact orelse atleast speak once .

He wanted to know why she left even without informing him .
His childhood friend , his playboy girl ,his saviour everything .
He is badly missing her when he needed her the most .

Then his eyes shifted to the staircase where a beautiful lady is coming down wearing a beautiful yellow lehenga but the smile on her face was fake which was not unnoticed by jalal .

She came and sat beside him but was maintaining a gap and was never looking straight into his eyes .

Soon the rituals for the engagement has begun and the time has come for both to exchange rings .

All the family were quite happy for them as these two were perfect for each other .

Jalal has forwarded his hand so that the bride will slip the ring in his finger and that happened within seconds .
In-between he noticed that the bride is a bit hesitating to make him wear the ring .
Soon it's his turn to make her wear the ring .



He asked her hand to forward but the next minute turned out to be a shock for him when the bride has refused to wear the ring .

"You cheated me with your longtime girlfriend " said the bride
"You were not honest with me.You cheat ,you womanizer jus..just get out from my sight " said the bride with a pain in her voice .

With these words the groom's anger has reached to the peaks and
finally ...


"Rukuiya" he exclaimed and slapped her hardly on her face .


Ok ok hope u all enjoyed
I will update next part soon
I mean tomorrow for sure
This time pakka


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Index
Chapter 1 : Pg 1
Chapter 2 : Pg 7
Chapter 3 : Pg 17
Chapter 4 :Pg 21
Chapter 5 :Pg 25
Chapter 6 : Pg 27
Chapter 7 : Pg 33
Chapter 8 : Pg 36
Chapter 9 : Pg 42
Chapter 10 : Pg 47
Chapter 11 : Pg 53

The End
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Posted: 9 years ago
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what about that ss, which u started in which jalal ditched jodha??
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Posted: 9 years ago
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what about that ss, which u started in which jalal ditched jodha??
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I forgot that re
This will be short one
I m writing it in mobile
No laptop so
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats for new as monica
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice concept dear
Now I m eagerly waiting for first chapter .
Plz update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome chapter dear
Continue soon
Thxcc 4r pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: swriter

Nice concept dear
Now I m eagerly waiting for first chapter .
Plz update soon


Dear this is the first chapter
I forgot to write it on the top
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome chappy dear...
thanx for pm..
nd haan plzzz is baar continue karnaa...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sony23akdha

awesome chappy dear...
thanx for pm..
nd haan plzzz is baar continue karnaa...

This time pakka re
Chota wala hi hoga

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