IshVeer FS: Fire and Ice. [COMPLETED] - Page 7

Originally posted by: ayeshamukhtar

It's amazing dear...
Very touchy and heart broken ...
I was just speechless while reading it ...
you describe their feelings very awesomely...
Update soon

Originally posted by: Ajay4love

oh my god its written by anamika... this much of creativity.. I'm really impressed 😳 well written girl. abhi I have just the first chapter or first shot and I loved it 😊. keep writing

Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-

Aw, thank you so much, Ajay! 🤗 I am so happy that you liked it.

Read the second one, soon. 😊

Shall I send you the CC link?

Originally posted by: Ajay4love

oh definitely very soon I'll read the second one... no don't send the cc link as I m busy till july.

after July I'll definitely gonna pm u or krish for the cc link.

btw how's everyone? and give my Greetings to all🤗

bye 😊

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

And finally, a long and overdue reply comes! Saves your eye rolls and slippers, girl, life has been hard.


That's only for fun I do. Now, I was so waiting for this entrance of yours in this thread. Welcome! 🤗

But chuck my grievances aside. After reading these two chapters, all I want to do is give you a big, warm bear hug. From being AureliaRye, who I still remember first interacting with on Wattpad where you told me how much my works had influenced your life in terms of your studies and your newfound interest in reading novels (yes, I still have the messages!) to being Poplu today who's written two of the best chapters in angst I've read in a long, long time, you've made me proud, girl.

A warm hug it is, then. 🤗 🤗 🤗

Aw, I remember all those and more. ❤️ God knows how many accounts on Wattpad are there whose passwords I have forgotten. 🤪 Three, probably. 😆 And you just told my story on this IF and Wattpad in a few lines. I am so glad to have made you proud! 🤗

I feel like a proud mommy right now so give me two minutes to collect my tears.

❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Yeah, alright. Enough sentiment. Let's get down to business. So this is going to be sadism galore with Ishaani, eh? Nice... this me likey likey. Give me angst and sadism and I'm a sucker for it, be it Ranveer or Ishaani. And you promise me five whole chapters of that - you've already earned yourself a nice 100 brownie points.

Yes, with Ishaani. 😈 Aw, 100! ⭐️

But now let's plunge into the world of angst that you've set up over here. Ah, the hate track. So many hopes for the angst, no? Big disappointer in that, but we have our set of compensation now. Ranveer has been away from Ishaani for seven months on what is cited as a "business crisis". But what it really is is the crisis of the heart.

I have set up such an angsty world that it startles me too. I have never written something so painful and agonising before. 😆 Yes, the hate track is the apt one for all our sadism needs. 😉 The show one was such a disappointer, as you said. But I am here to satisfy that hunger. 😈 Crisis of the heart! How aptly you've analysed it! I say, DV, Elvish, Nids and you analyse the situations best!

Oh the anger, betrayal, hurt, hatred and pain that the human heart burns underneath... Ranveer is no different. And left behind are the ashed of a past with an innocence unparalled and unmatched. Left behind is Ishaani... damaged, despondent and desperate. Oh, she's left to fight the guilt and the remorse all alone; self-imploding love only making her loathe herself a little more. The pain, the fear, the anxiety, the longing for him.

Yes, they both are drowning themselves in that eternal pit of pain, agony and fear. Suffering and more suffering. 😭

She's closing the windows and crosses into her mind an old memory associated with Ranveer - the memory of two doves that were a part of their life. Heroics and selflessnees - need anything be said more about Ranveer? And then there's concern and selfishness for his own wellbeing - need anything be said about Ishaani's love for him?

Nothing more's there to be said for those two. 'Cause you and I have said it all.

And finally rescued amidst the mass of rains and risk are Malhar and Bhairavi, inspired from the ragas. Uncanny resemblances are made and the doves are identified as a metaphorical version of Ranveer and Ishaani. He all alone at the pinnacle of success and wounded; she at the lowest pit of her life hidden underneath all the accusations and isolations of the society and wounded. Both in need for each other, yet too far and too hurt to make the move.

Okay, you are a clairvoyant! 👏 Reading deep into everything and into their minds.

When I first read the line about the spoiler, my mind went into an overdrive, and I was all, 'What? She's killing Ranveer? NO!', until practicality claimed me and I went all 'Oh, she's talking about the dove, not Ranveer. Close shave, there.' I'm very interested in knowing what happened to Bhairavi, though. Died? 'Course she must have...

That spoiler is mainly for bamboozling. 😉 Bhairavi must have died after they left her, well healed physically. But few know that everything is one and the mentality of doves is no different from ours. Every animal has a soul and they all have soulmates, too. So, she must have...

Ishaani snaps out from her thoughts and we're given a quick run through in those seven months. If not Ranveer, then Ishaani did the next best thing - make amends with his family. Slowly, painfully yet steadily, she did the impossible - made Amba approve of her. Oh, sane, sane characters over here... if they only knew the desperation we write them with to proclaim their sanity...

Yes, we write them so well - the perfect opposite of what those CVs did.

And then draws the first chapter to an end. Ishaani shutting close the drapes of the windows in the corridor when Parul comes up to her and tells her that it's Ranveer on the line... Ah, the run for her life, towards her life in that long, red pallu...

Beautiful review of the first chapter! Loved it. ⭐️

With this, the first chapter comes to an end and blends in with the second. A nightmare! Wow, nightmares are the latest fancies now, aren't they? All the prophetic symbolisms and incidents... oh, the thrill of writing and defying it all yet have destiny play the final hand in the most unexpected yet expected way. *Coughs**Coughs* Got too emotional.

Moving onto the second one, now. 😊 Yes... nightmares are the new dream. (A version of the statement, 'pink is the new black' - though I don't believe this pink and black stuff 😆). Aw, yes. Nightmares have so many symbolisms. This one is really a huge one in terms of symbolisms and spoilers for the climax!

Let me carry on. Ah, symbolism of the nightmare... Oh yes, it is too late for some amends to be made. Sometimes, some damages are irrevocable, just like love is. Oh, her stole reminded me of the way Ishaani ran to the phone with the flame red weave of her Banarasi saree trailing in the air... mauve, flame red... what is going to happen?

Yes. It's gonna be a huge and shocking climax! Lips are to be sealed and so are some statements made to bamboozle. 😈

The sky rains blood upon him as the horrifying view never ceases to leave his eyes. Her falling into nothingness - because he was too late. Too late to save her, to embrace her. He falls upon his knees as her name leaves his lips in a bloodcurdling moment of the ugliest truth capable to sap the life out of him - it was his fault. Bhairavi couldn't save Malhar... Ranveer couldn't save Ishaani.

It was his fault. 💔 Yes. This! This bold one is really really true.

He's rudely awoken from the nightmare-ish slumber to find himself disheveled, the horror of the seven-month old dream burning into his eyes. Oh, it's a battle alright. A battle of the heart and the heart, one of love, the other of betrayal. He slaps water upon himself where he's in for a reality check. Oh, the agony... the crude brutality of the emotions, naked as you've written them. There's nothing left for me to say since you wrote it all, and with such stark honestly that it blew me out of my mind.

Aw, I am really happy to have satisfied (I hope) you. I never really thought myself capable of setting up such a world of brutal and cruel agony. This is the first ever time I am writing something as raw and emo-core as this. And Ranger's emotions are most challenging yet fun to write about than Ishaani's, no?

Oh, I could go on and on about how... alive, your angst is. Scorching, endearing, consuming yet satisfying. Oh, the sadist in me is purring in approval. Oh yes... there's remorse, there's realization, there's loathing and a little more self-loathing. This is the only mantra of emotions his emotionally repressed mind can fathom.

Love. Pain. Scars. Love. Pain. Scars. Betrayal. Heartbreak. Angst. Betrayal. Heartbreak. Angst.

This is the perfect code. Love ending with angst. 🥺

And then comes the excerpt where he walked away for her. Who cared really about the business or how long it takes for things to be alright? It was an escape he needed from the reality... from the never-ending mass of his suffocated heart that kept shattering every time at her sight. The betrayal alive in his burning heart, the broken fragments aflame everytime he thought about how she'd chosen Chirag over him. Who cared really if she loved him?

💔 I wonder if you had written F&I., how would you have? You would have rocked it because your review itself is so powerful!

She needed to feel the pain he felt. She needed to hurt like he was hurting. There could be no relief, just more pain. God, see what you're doing to me! And there... he left her to face the pain of a lifetime on her own, crushing her underneath the same life that was supposed to bring life to both of them. It was going to be the death of her now, if not him. He walked away once, she won't.

Yes, she won't. She stayed behind to serve and make amends with his (their) family. She won't leave them.

For a thirteen-year old, you astound me. Truly. The impeccable language, grammar and vocabulary, the pulsating aura of angst and above all, the feel of the emotions that your words emote are something that's a rare phenomena for a person your age. And the topics you've been writing about - wow, I really wonder how damningly good (forgive my language) you are to become after a couple of years down the line. You truly are gifted, ma petite. And the angst - one of the best ones that I've read in ages.

Ah, I turned 14 this Feb. 😛

Presto... I am speechless. Receiving such a huge, huge compliment from such a gargantuan ace in writing is just bliss. I will try to use my gift to the fullest.

And thank you so much! 🤗

Language is no problem. I sometimes use it, too. ;)

Do please update the next part soon. But above all, do please write some more after this! I cannot wait to read what you have in store for us next because you, girl, have the potential of being THE finest of the lot in the near future. All the best for your future endeavours and keep making me proud like this!

Yes, I will surely try to write more after this series.

Thank you so much, dear!

I am really really happy to have made you proud!

Loads of love,
LM

Love and more love,

Poplu.

Ps. I forgot the main thing - welcome to the club, love! Also, I think I could have written more in the review, but I kinda blanked out. Sorry about that. And also sorry for the emo-less review. It's too long, you see.

PS. Thank you so much for the welcome! I am here to stay here for more. 😳

It's okay, dear. The review was really nice to read! I love interacting with you.

And it's okay about the emoticons, too. 😊

Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-

That's only for fun I do. Now, I was so waiting for this entrance of yours in this thread. Welcome! 🤗

Ah, the fire of your story is sufficient to make me warmly welcome here. 😉😉 And gee, sorry for making you wait for so long though. 😛😛

A warm hug it is, then. 🤗 🤗 🤗

Aw, I remember all those and more. ❤️ God knows how many accounts on Wattpad are there whose passwords I have forgotten. 🤪 Three, probably. 😆 And you just told my story on this IF and Wattpad in a few lines. I am so glad to have made you proud! 🤗

I'm aware of two, the third one no. 😆😆 And hehe, it made for a good summary. 😳😳 It's good to have old reminders at times to show us how ahead we've come forth in life. 😃😃

❤️ ❤️ ❤️


Yes, with Ishaani. 😈 Aw, 100! ⭐️


Me likey likey. 😉😉

I have set up such an angsty world that it startles me too. I have never written something so painful and agonising before. 😆 Yes, the hate track is the apt one for all our sadism needs. 😉 The show one was such a disappointer, as you said. But I am here to satisfy that hunger. 😈 Crisis of the heart! How aptly you've analysed it! I say, DV, Elvish, Nids and you analyse the situations best!

Hehe, we've gotten good at the analysis. And I kind of like to see meaning in everything, so I guess it's an unavoidable habit. 😆😆 On a random note, yes, hate track - big disappointer in terms of angst.



Yes, they both are drowning themselves in that eternal pit of pain, agony and fear. Suffering and more suffering. 😭

Suffering and calamity. 😭😭

Nothing more's there to be said for those two. 'Cause you and I have said it all.

I forgot to add that this was the first time when she realized she was in love with him... an opaque realization but it was there until the night he got shot. Damn it!

Okay, you are a clairvoyant! 👏 Reading deep into everything and into their minds.

Hehe, I love tinkering with psychology like you know, and mix that with the subtle art of philosophy and mystic sciences of karma, spiritual pyschology and those little symbolisms and I've got a party going on. 😃😃 This shouldn't be a surprise for you. 😉😉

That spoiler is mainly for bamboozling. 😉 Bhairavi must have died after they left her, well healed physically. But few know that everything is one and the mentality of doves is no different from ours. Every animal has a soul and they all have soulmates, too. So, she must have...

Ah, spoilers for bamboozling? 😈😈 I can feel it in my guts that there's a lot more to that single-line A/N than met the eye. 😉😉 Bring it on, I'm waiting to see whether what I have in mind is right or no. 😎😎

Yes, we write them so well - the perfect opposite of what those CVs did.

Sigh...

Beautiful review of the first chapter! Loved it. ⭐️

I'm glad you did. ⭐️⭐️

Moving onto the second one, now. 😊 Yes... nightmares are the new dream. (A version of the statement, 'pink is the new black' - though I don't believe this pink and black stuff 😆). Aw, yes. Nightmares have so many symbolisms. This one is really a huge one in terms of symbolisms and spoilers for the climax!

The dream is tempting me. 😛😛 Now I understand why Elvish is getting so antsy about Ishaani's nightmare in US. Not a pretty wait to see whetehr you are right and till what extent the dreams are to come true. 😕😕 I better shut up before I give out more spoilers.

Yes. It's gonna be a huge and shocking climax! Lips are to be sealed and so are some statements made to bamboozle. 😈

😈😈 Whatever it is, I will have my revenge for this with US. 😈😈 Just kidding, you're making me more and more intrigued with the mystery now! 😳😳

It was his fault. 💔 Yes. This! This bold one is really really true.

I still feel there's something missing my eye though. 🥺

Aw, I am really happy to have satisfied (I hope) you. I never really thought myself capable of setting up such a world of brutal and cruel agony. This is the first ever time I am writing something as raw and emo-core as this. And Ranger's emotions are most challenging yet fun to write about than Ishaani's, no?

It's always a pleasant surprise when you learn what you are capable of and the extent to which you are capable. And yes, it's bound to have taken its strain with you seeing how raw it is. Take care of yourself in term of that. 😊😊 And yes, the most fun to write. 😛😛

This is the perfect code. Love ending with angst. 🥺

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💔 I wonder if you had written F&I., how would you have? You would have rocked it because your review itself is so powerful!

☺️☺️ Flattering as that is, it's the strength of your own writing that brought out that little spell of angst within me in the reviews as well. Give yourself props for that. 👏👏

Yes, she won't. She stayed behind to serve and make amends with his (their) family. She won't leave them.

😳😳😳

Ah, I turned 14 this Feb. 😛

Presto... I am speechless. Receiving such a huge, huge compliment from such a gargantuan ace in writing is just bliss. I will try to use my gift to the fullest.

And thank you so much! 🤗

Language is no problem. I sometimes use it, too. ;)

Sorry, my bad. 😛😛

And girl, you deserve it. Keep up the good job. 🤗🤗 And God, stop making me blush with the praises... ☺️☺️ I'm just glad that you love what I write. 😃😃

Yes, I will surely try to write more after this series.

Thank you so much, dear!

I am really really happy to have made you proud!

This is just the beginning, you still have along way to go. 😉😉

Loads of love,
LM

PS. Thank you so much for the welcome! I am here to stay here for more. 😳

It's okay, dear. The review was really nice to read! I love interacting with you.

And it's okay about the emoticons, too. 😊

Ps. Thank Godness!

And sorry it got too long, though.

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue