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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
Hi dear!!!
Next update by the way I liked a lot this name fire and ice completely contrast yet made for each other to break and make each other 👍🏼
Here he is sleeping in king-size bed there bechari ishani is doing saas sewa 🤪
Nightmare's 😕 you brought them also and that too for a change ishani is dying in his nightmares 🤣
She falls of the cliff and everything is on fire something like his condition with total chaos in his mind about the situation right now 🤔
Then if this dream is bothering him for 7 months then why he is not letting his ego aside and going back to her
A true explanation regarding diamond and business situation was very well written 👏 👏 👏
So it was not necessary but he still choose to come only to stay away from her 😭
Your descriptions of ranveer's disheveled condition was reprimanding of some sort of sexy Italian men 🤪
The whole tussle between his heart and mind and how he reads her pain knows how much he is hurting her bit again sissy about his own pain was amazing it truely portrayed confusion in his mind regarding her love 😳
That line was very well describing his pain that how come she think he ll kill mota babuji that itself means she never considered him her friend.
That parting time description was amazing I really wonder if this is your first writing work because it is so well described
Thanks for giving ishani's point of view she is having the hardest time something that ranveer went through when left alone by everyone and also the one you loved.
Seriously poplu you are an amazing writer I just wonder why it took you so late to come up with this but nevertheless you will compensate it for now I guess. This whole chapter had so much amazing thing all the emotions of pain.
Thanx for pm
Waiting for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
Hi Annu,,,
Hope you are doing good?😛😛😛
You have done a nice job dear 👏👏👏👏
The way he is fighting between his brain and heart was so well written 👏👏
He is always this kind man only having confusion over his mind and heart
you have written it very nicely
you are really a amazing writer Annu
waiting for the next
overall a perfect chapter 👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
Very Beautiful!! Marvellously written!

It's a shame that you plan to write just five! 🤗

Superb way with words and conveying their emotions. Keep updating!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54

Always the first one. 😎
Take your time to un-res, Sugar Pie. 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

Hi dear!!!
Next update by the way I liked a lot this name fire and ice completely contrast yet made for each other to break and make each other 👍🏼
Here he is sleeping in king-size bed there bechari ishani is doing saas sewa 🤪
Nightmare's 😕 you brought them also and that too for a change ishani is dying in his nightmares 🤣
She falls of the cliff and everything is on fire something like his condition with total chaos in his mind about the situation right now 🤔
Then if this dream is bothering him for 7 months then why he is not letting his ego aside and going back to her
A true explanation regarding diamond and business situation was very well written 👏 👏 👏
So it was not necessary but he still choose to come only to stay away from her 😭
Your descriptions of ranveer's disheveled condition was reprimanding of some sort of sexy Italian men 🤪
The whole tussle between his heart and mind and how he reads her pain knows how much he is hurting her bit again sissy about his own pain was amazing it truely portrayed confusion in his mind regarding her love 😳
That line was very well describing his pain that how come she think he ll kill mota babuji that itself means she never considered him her friend.
That parting time description was amazing I really wonder if this is your first writing work because it is so well described
Thanks for giving ishani's point of view she is having the hardest time something that ranveer went through when left alone by everyone and also the one you loved.
Seriously poplu you are an amazing writer I just wonder why it took you so late to come up with this but nevertheless you will compensate it for now I guess. This whole chapter had so much amazing thing all the emotions of pain.
Thanx for pm
Waiting for next



Hello, DV! 🤗 Hope you are doing well. 😛

Yes, perfectly analysed. 👏 I love that poem by the same name from Robert Frost. And hence, decided to keep it as the title for this one.

🤣 🤣 Saas seva. 🤪

Ho, you are so funny. 😆 Ishaani also received her share of agony, now. 🤪

That nightmare is very, very symbolic. Spoiler alert. Shh. 😃

Yes, very right! Ego is the problem here.

Thanks so much, I was worried if that would make sense because I have not much knowledge in the Commerce sector. But I am trying to improve.

Sexy Italian man? 🤪 🤣 Aw, imagination running wild, no? 😉

I am so happy you liked those parts. 🤗

Yes, it's my first ever story on a couple. I am a writer who writes on serious issues like death of parents, death in general, domestic abuse, diseases - cancer and all... macabre topics, I know.

But I write happy stuff quite well, too. Like, I have written something on the love between siblings, parental love, etc.

Aw, no need of thanks, darling. ❤️

Der aaye, durust aaye. 😊 Thank you so much. 🤗

Update will be up, soon. 😊

Love,
Poplu.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56

Thank you so much, dear! 🤗 It means a lot to me. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sakshi5050

Hi Annu,,,
Hope you are doing good?😛😛😛
You have done a nice job dear 👏
The way he is fighting between his brain and heart was so well written 👏👏
He is always this kind man only having confusion over his mind and heart
you have written it very nicely
you are really a amazing writer Annu
waiting for the next
overall a perfect chapter 👏



Hello, Sakshi! ❤️

I am doing splendid. How are you?

Thank you so much! I am so glad that you like it.

Yes, you've understood well. He always has such insecurities and confusions.

That's so nice of you! 🤗 I am humbled. ☺️

I will update the next one, soon. Don't worry. 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: matsh

Very Beautiful!! Marvellously written!

It's a shame that you plan to write just five! 🤗

Superb way with words and conveying their emotions. Keep updating!!



Welcome to the thread, matsh! 🤗

That's a huge compliment coming from you, thanks so much. ❤️ ☺️

I will try to write other stuff! 😃

Thanks, again! ❤️

I will update, soon. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59

Take your time, Gudiya! 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
It's amazing dear...
Very touchy and heart broken ...
I was just speechless while reading it ...
you describe their feelings very awesomely...
Update soon

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