Yeh Laal Ishq, Yeh Malaal Ishq - IshRa OS - Page 3

Brilliantly written

If there is something called perfect writing, this is it. Perfect! In every sense. I haven't read something this good on this forum. Great work buddy!!! If you could, please do share your other works

Aaani, what r u doing  girl! Aaagh I don't like you. Y y y...y r u writing this oses...u r pulling me into the web of ishra again. Its so beautiful I wanna cry. 

Originally posted by: -Anku-

And one more in the day to tear me up 😭 But oh so wonderful to have one where it's about Raman's feelings this time. 

Raman gets this venomous when he's hurting, angry, or broken. He lashes out and hurts everyone along with him, it's always been a trait. Ishita probably even knows it by now. Which is why even now when he wants to see her hurt, when he's so detached he understands her emotions so well. He recognizes every such thing he knows would hurt her, scald her and although he takes pleasure in it partly, the love in him for her doesn't allow that happiness to survive for long when he feels the pain she does. 

I've loved every bit of this work so much Aani. Marveling at how well you understand these two characters, that it's hard to point out. But some of my favourite moments. 

1. When he feels the burden slightly lifted, finally feels that someone mirrors his pain of losing Ruhi, he sees his anguish in her eyes and for the first time in years feels that someone understood him.

2. When realization hits, her words pinching him...him gauging how his acerbic words have hurt her. 

3. You've given a glimpse of a very likely interaction between Ishita and Pihu...I can't wait to see this on the show... of how they lay the foundation of a relation between them. How they'll form a bond and how she'll accept Ishita as her mother. I got feels reading them here. 

Wonderful interpretation once again of a likely scenario on the show. 🤗 Thanks for posting. Cannot wait to read more from you. 

Originally posted by: Anuhyaa

Aani, you are on a roll or what...
& Iam not complaining...

Iam so glad that you finally penned Raman's thoughts & its absolutely brilliant...What all I wished & hoped for...
If the Cvs do even 40% of this , Iam a happy audience...

& this time, along with Raman's pain we also got Ishita's turmoil...because those two are always interlinked...& only in togetherness they can find the solace..
The whole thing is just a treat to read...

Thank You...😳🤗

"Her heart in her eyes she watches the best of both worlds afar, too scared to step forward, too weak to move back and walk away." - beautiful...

Originally posted by: Veeann

Beautifully written Aani, but way too sad. My heart is breaking 😭 😭

Originally posted by: Missy-rc

fantastic OS, you're a great writer

Originally posted by: ..TeriDeewani..

I m speechless Aani di ...👏

It is written so beautifully.. each emotion of IshRa described by u makes me sad 

An amazing piece of work 👏⭐️❤️

Hopefully CVs won't ruin this track😊

Originally posted by: sarsyed

Wonderful writing 👏

I hope we get to see anything of this sort in the show too.

Originally posted by: lerinim

Here comes another brilliant os of yours. I totally loved it although it's very emotional.plz write a story about ishra reunion full with emotions ... once again thnx for pm

Love from Sri lanka