Reserved. Again.
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This was SO Raman. Reading this piece was like channeling him in my mind, comprehending his anger, his desire to hurt her, his pain on her tears, his reluctance of letting her interact with Pihu, his understanding of her pain. He's such a complicated man, that no one truly understands him, ever. I dare say not even Ishita, though she comes closest. (And vice-versa)
His taunts on Mani, on being deliberately away from Pihu, his possessiveness for Pihu - spell his anger to the T. He's bruised so badly by her decision, that in some way reiterates that he's not fit for love - a notion that he himself has been fighting for a long, long time.
To know she was dead because of his words was a blow. To learn she was alive yet pretended to be dead was a bigger blow. It hurt him in ways even Ruhi's death couldn't and you portrayed this with such perfection Aani π π
Your stories are like KP-DT. You watch them enact a brilliant scene, you feel inspired, and then you think this was the final straw, this can't be improved further. And then they come back, upping their own performance every single time. It's like old wine, only gets better π π³ π³
Edited by -Nidoo- - 7 years ago
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