Abhiya 2 shot :Waiting , Part 2, pg 5 - Page 5

awesome update...hawww kabir cheated on her...

Belated happy b'dy dear
prt-1 very emotional updt.. With broken pia & abhay.. Tough time for them.. Pia being alone, without abhay.. Kabir's haunting memories.. Pia's developed feelings towards abhay..!! & maithili being abhay's wife😡 superb updat..!

Prt-2 amazing updt..!! Its a relief to knw that kabir is cheating on her with misha.. Pia's sadness & guilt part reduced to a extent bt unfortunately its not same fr abhay..Girl, i love this line "u r frgiven pia, always" it spokes his volumes of love.. !!

Beautiful ending of beautiful story. I luved it.

Beautiful story. Even more beautifully written. Kabir's affair kinda fueled Pia's moving on process. Although she had already taken one step ahead. Keep writing more!!

As usual beautiful update...well written with Piya's emotions while taking out all about Kabir n his stuff.Jeh-Pia were funny...lol food food.At last AbhIya <3

Do write more...forum will be active.

P.S.me geny and u can call me the same... :D

Wow awesome update
Emotions was fabulously described
Easily connected with the story
As usual a brilliant unique work
Thanks for pm
Please continue it
Don't want it to end here
'll love to read more
Please continue pretty pretty please

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

Nice one.

I did get the HIMYM reference. Huge fan. :)

Oh someone did ! 😆 I love HIMYM , though I didn't like the mother so much . I always loved Robin and Ted too much 😳

Originally posted by: --geny--

As usual beautiful update...well written with Piya's emotions while taking out all about Kabir n his stuff.Jeh-Pia were funny...lol food food.At last AbhIya <3

Do write more...forum will be active.

P.S.me geny and u can call me the same... :D

Jey achaa tha na ? 😉
Will try to write after July :(

Thanks for reading geny 🤗

Originally posted by: Dark-Beauty

Wow awesome update
Emotions was fabulously described
Easily connected with the story
As usual a brilliant unique work
Thanks for pm
Please continue it
Don't want it to end here
'll love to read more
Please continue pretty pretty please

It means a lot , thank u 😳 🤗

But I don't think I can continue it :( I think this is the best place to end , don't want to bore people with stretching it . I could write an epilogue , if I get time :)