Abhiya 2 shot :Waiting , Part 2, pg 5 - Page 2

Many many happy returns of da day 🥳. Nice update n best of luck 

This just amazing
I always believe that the love grow in between pain is more strong than anything else
Thanks for pm
Please continue soon
Eagerly waiting for next part

Nice concept but Pia's side needs to convince more as she was so madly in love with Kabir . I really like the way they both supported each other . Sometimes pain brings us closer & here too same thing happened .

Be lated Happy Birthday :D

I love ur SEXY writing... but this two shot is sad one!!You have put KaPi part really well that one can feel/get convinced that their bond was strong one and both were madly in love with each other.

I liked the fresh change you put through AbhIya's story after their past- the accident thing with both...from the feelings,dialogues,therapist for Pia ,the treatment ,their   surroundings   n all was nice written and had a nice read...pls cont.and waiting for next part...Update soon.

P.S thank u Abhay's wife was Metz...lol

P.P.S pls do write more..more..n more!!!All the best for exams... wishing after exams you will try to give us another OS/FF/SS if you are going to continue with writing then only...me
gonna catch all ff's after exams including urs. <3
Edited by --geny-- - 8 years ago

awesome chapter
poor abhiya in heart breaking state 🥺
both partners r in life support machine 😭
I just love the way abhiya support each other emotionally 🤗
both r attract to each other
at the moment pia also felt guilty for thinking abt abhay
OMG abhay told pia he likes her 😲
wow pia kiss abhay 😳
continue plz

Awesome...u r such a good writer...i mean like so gud story...i love thanx for pm

Awesome plot!!!

Uff! Back after a long time!

And immediately after returning back , I have this wonderful opportunity to read this fantastic   story of yours. MARVELLOUS !! BEAUTIFUL !!

LOVED the car scene! Really,amongst all the Indian serials, PKYEK was undoubtedly one of the best, no no , the BEST !

Waiting immensely for the next update ! 😊 Edited by shreyarupa - 7 years ago

Happy wala birthday gurl 😃 wat a romanchak story yaa😳 tragic lives of the main leads but they find solace in each other😳 hayiii😳😳😳 pleas update the next part soon😳

And yes, belated happy birthday to u.

Also, I wanted to say that I read your 3 SS on Abhiya. Quite fabulous!

And again, waiting for the next update! 😊