Abhiya 2 shot :Waiting , Part 2, pg 5 - Page 3

Firstly, Belated happy Birth Day Dear 😊
& secondly this ts is really nice..different from other stories..Both were lonely n in need of happiness
But i think they were attracted towards eachother in a different way..
Anyway, waiying for next update

Originally posted by: ...Seema...

wish u a v happy birthday.keep smiling

A brilliant update.

i just felt the emotions n feelings ,abhay n piya went through

looking forward to next update

all da v best fr ur exame

Thank u seema 🤗
Glad u liked it !

Originally posted by: doll.12

Don't ask yar... We have same situation.. Meri birthday PE bhi nahi bnaya kisi ne?? *sniff* *sniff* ... Hehehe... Because no one knows except those ... Whom I told ..<div></div> and they also didn't wished .. Haye ... Kia Karen??...

Koi nahi yaar, real life hai na! And tell me next time , I'll wish u :)

Originally posted by: doll.12

😛 To dear sweet love ... (name bhool Gaye real wala) *maafi* .. 😳 happy happy Happy Birthday.. Oo balle balle.. Oo ... Chakde padhe.. Ooo... May Allah bless you always.. May your happiness last forever ... Hope to have a treat ... Kia kehti u/?? ... Yummyyy... Yumm yumm... May you get the best things which you deserve ... Always shine and twinkle ...

Regards...

Tooba... 😳

Mera naam bhul gayi!! 😆 it's Isha !! 1 year man ;)
And thank u 🤗

Originally posted by: Twinkle_alisha

Heyyy Sis I'm Really Sorry I Didn't Knew About Ur Birthday.. 😔

But Anyways Many Many Happy Birthdays To U... 😳

Now Coming To Update It Was Mind-Blowing... 😊

And I Wished U All The Best 4 Ur Exams.. 😊

And Thanks 4 The PM.. 😊

It's ok Alisha :) seeing u after a long time btw
And thank u for ur wishes 😳
Glad u liked it !

Originally posted by: mahi4ever

Many many happy returns of da day🥳. Nice update n best of luck

Thank u 🤗

Originally posted by: Dark-Beauty

This just amazing
I always believe that the love grow in between pain is more strong than anything else
Thanks for pm
Please continue soon
Eagerly waiting for next part

Thank u 😳 and i agree with u .updating right now :)

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

Nice concept but Pia's side needs to convince more as she was so madly in love with Kabir . I really like the way they both supported each other . Sometimes pain brings us closer & here too same thing happened .

As i said u need to wait for the second part, u cannot judge her simply on the first part as I had warned . I agree with u , pain brings us together sometimes and sometimes apart .glad u liked it !

Originally posted by: --geny--

Be lated Happy Birthday :D

I love ur SEXY writing... but this two shot is sad one!!You have put KaPi part really well that one can feel/get convinced that their bond was strong one and both were madly in love with each other.

I liked the fresh change you put through AbhIya's story after their past- the accident thing with both...from the feelings,dialogues,therapist for Pia ,the treatment ,their   surroundings   n all was nice written and had a nice read...pls cont.and waiting for next part...Update soon.

P.S thank u Abhay's wife was Metz...lol

P.P.S pls do write more..more..n more!!!All the best for exams... wishing after exams you will try to give us another OS/FF/SS if you are going to continue with writing then only...me
gonna catch all ff's after exams including urs. <3

Thank u 🤗

Awww, that means a lot 😳 .i am glad I succeeded in describing Pia's past well . But there's going to be a shock on the next chapter 😉

😆 had to put Maithly , not really a big fan of her .

Glad u like my writing dear ! I will write more stuff in Jube and after June , first I have to get in medical college 😆 meanwhile u could read my previous stories :)

Ps- what's ur name??

Originally posted by: jyotikaur

Awesome...u r such a good writer...i mean like so gud story...i love thanx for pm

Thanks means a lot Jyoti 😳