Hai Phaasle Tum Se Na Jaane Kyun New FF

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                              HAI PHAASLAE TUM SE NA JANE KYUN

Concept      : Siya and Raghav main characters are parted their ways Yashas and  Yashita bring
                       them together           
                      Parallely showcases another couple Laksh and Urmi
                      prolouge part 2 will be updated๐Ÿ˜ƒ
    It is the main backdrop of the story character sketch will be updated...
    I will decide whether to continue or not based on the comments...  

This FF will be in Hindi pardon me for my mistakes in hindi๐Ÿ˜†



Prolouge Part 1

Subah Cheh bajhae Mumbai...
Dudh wale ne ghanti bajai jaise hi awaaj ayi dwarwaja khulti hai 
Doodh wale: Meemsaab kal jyaada doodh dalne ke liye kaha aaj bhi jyada chahiyae
Siya              : thinks in her mind kal tak maa aur papa yahi the
                       aaj  chale gaye aur mein phir sae
                        akeli ho gayi...
                        She replies Aaj se jayada doodh nahi chaiyae
translation๐Ÿ˜†: Milk man come to Siya's house situated in Mumbai early in the morning at 6 AM
he asks her whether to put more packets of milk like yesterday
Siya thinks...
Till yesterday mom and dad were with me now they have left too
I am all alone once again
She replies to milk man no i don't need more milk from today

Siya goes to kitchen
intro in her own words
Life bhi kitni ajeeb hai na doo saal bithgaye phir bhi mein wahi ki wahi reh gayi pharak sirf itna hai aaj meri life mein do logon add hogaye Yashas and Yashita...
Mein batana bhul gayi mein hu Siya Singh sorry ...nahi Siya patil
iss badi si Mumbai sheher mein  ek badi MNC mein company secretary ki kaam karthi hu
pura office manage kana meri zimmedari hai aur uss ke saath maa ki zimmedari bhi hai
par life mein khush hu mein, ek hi kami hai...aur woh hai ra...
ithne mein Yashas rota hai...
Siya quickly wash the milk bottles and boil them fill the with warm milk and go to her bedroom
Yashas tum bahut badmaash ho bilkul apne papa ki tarah dekho Yashita kitni samjdaar hai...

Life is so strange at times it has been two years but i am still stuck in my past. But there is one good change i have two new members in my life Yashas and Yashita..
I forgot to introduce myself I am Siya Singh  Sorry i am Siya Patil
I live in the big city Mumbai and i work as a Company secretary in a big MNC i have to handle the entire office and organise the events.
And i have another responsibility as a mother to my kids.
I am happy and contented with my life but there only one thing i miss it is Ra...
Meanwhile Yashas will cry'

Siya quickly wash the milk bottles and boil them fill the with warm milk and go to her bedroom
She tell Yashas that you are so naughty and trouble me a lot you are so like your father, See Yashita she is so understanding and is not like you

Scene shifts to Delhi...
Saadhe Chae Bhajae
Raghav intro in his own words
A handsome young man wents out his anger on his punching bag...
Do saal
Tumhari jaane ki wajah bhi nahi pata...
Kithi baar mein tujhae doondna chahaa tum nahi mili...
Pata nahi kaisi hogi tum
Wapas nahi aa sakthi...
Kisne kaha tujahe jaane ke liyae
Tum khud ko aur mujhae ithni badi saza dogi i have not expected...
Maa aur Papa bhi kuch nahi batatae...
Tumhari parents mera shakal bhi nahi dekna chahtae
Mila Chata hu par mil nahi sakta...kaha ho tum
Khud pae gussa ataa hai mujhae
apni khud ki company hai mein CEO ban gaya life mein sab kuch achive kiya par tumhae khodi...
pata nahi tumse kabhi mil paavunga...

Translation:
scene shifts to Delhi
Its 6.30 am
A handsome young man wents out his anger on his punching bag...
It has been two years
I have searched for you many times you i could not find you
I hope you are fine
Why don't you come back???
Did i tell you to go away???
Why are you punishing me and yourself with your decision. I have never expected it...
My parents will never tell me what happened
Your parents hate to see my face
I am angry at myself
I now own a company and i am the ceo of the company everything is so perfect and you are not with me
Will i ever be able to meet you???


Why did this distance between us????


HAI PHAASLAE TUM SE NA JAANE KYUN


Prolouge Part two

Mumbai Laksh Mehta ke ghar

Laksh a handsome young man so tough and gets angry so soon...
Listen to what he say::
Laksh talks to himself seeing in mirror:
Laksh ab tumhae shaath rehana sikna hoga warna tumare ane wale bacchon ko kaise sambhalogae.
( Jab sae pata chala ki Urmi maa banne wali hai tab sae Laksh khud ko tayar karaha hai achae papa banane ke liyae)
Oh God Laksh tum phir sae bhul gaya subah subah Urmi ko apni yoga ke liye lejana hai and uss ke baad usae garam dudh dena hai. Laksh iss sae phelae ki Urmi uthjayae jaldi kitchen mein chalo aur dudh garam karkae flask mein dalo.
Laksh in Kitchen:
Talks to himself
Pata nahi Ladkiya saare kam jaldi jaldi kaisae khatam kartae hai office bhi jatae hai
i really feel this place weired
par meri jaan Urmi ke liyae nahi mera honewala ya wali bachhae ke liye
mein kuch bhi karunga any thing...

Laksh lights the stove puts the vessel on it and pour the milk into it.

Laksh now introduces himself
Hello all i am Laksh Mehta mein and Ram ek ki office mein kaam kartae hai, infact we are partners with equal rights. Our company has two CEO's sounds strange no. Urmi works with us but now she is on her pregnancy leave as she is in her eighth month i should take good care of her.
 Ram is my best friend i need him in every decision of my life but it seems aaj kal mujahe uska nahi usko mera jarurat jayada hogaya.  Ram and Siya they are responsible for my marriage with Urmi come true. Siya se yaad aya i miss her so much she is like my bestie but i will soon find out her where ever she is..

Urmi wakes up and rolls on her bed to see Laksh is not there.. She slowly get up
Laksh itni subah utjaata hai see i am so lazy
Mujhae yoga karni hai and mein so rahi hu
i think i should hurry up or else mein class ke liyae late ho javungi
She hurriedly gets up and get down her bed and slightly slips and screams Laksh...
Laksh puts off the stove and hurriedly reach their room
Urmi Kya hua r u ok???
Urmi hugs Laksh๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Urni says I am ok Thank God i was about to slip but some how managed to balance myself..
Laksh is all angry
How many times i have told you Urmi???
tum apni khayal nahi raksakthi, agar tumhae kuch ho jati toh mein khud ko kabhi maaf nahi karpavunga
Urmi holding her ears says " I am sorry Laksh i will be more careful from now on."
laksh hugs Urmi and tell her to get ready quickly she has only 15 min time.
Urmi gets ready
She stares into mirrior and say
Mein kithni moti ho gayi hu
 smiling she caresses her baby bump
par koi baath nahi meri sweet baby will come in to this world so soon.
Urmi intoduces herself
Hello all you might confused i am Urmi Mehta beloved wife of Laksh Mehta... I work with Raghav and Laksh in the same office and will look after the administration work. Presently i am on leave. I am expecting my baby in 20 days and i am all exited. But i really miss Siya she is my best friend what if she have any babies till now??? I am not sure but i felt so. Raghav and Siya helped me and Laksh getting married going against to our parents wish. I am all happy now.
Pata nahi kya hua humare best friends Raghav and Siya are not together now
Its not they have moved on Raghav abhi bhi Siya ko miss karta hai
and i am sure Siya bhi Raghav ko miss karthi hogi.
I wish humae jaldi Siya miljaye phir sab theek hogayega..
Guys mein app se baad mein baat karthi hu i am getting late for my yoga class๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Laksh amd Urmi leave to the yoga class in their car


I think aap ko yeh pasand aayi hai
Please share your opinion
Should i continue...
it will be based on your support
manas๐Ÿ˜Š

DOES DREAMS EVER COME TRUE WILL END SOON๐Ÿ˜ณ


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Posted: 8 years ago
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i like you new ff๐Ÿ˜‰ but please write this in english because i don't unterstand hindi ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Manas...great start...๐Ÿ‘
Mills and Boon type lag raha hai...which is...very good๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
par ULKA???? Seriously???๐Ÿ˜ฒ


Mila? Mili? Urmi?...plzzz...but it's up to you..๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Manas :P
Nice start :)
I love it.
Update ASAP.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Manas why not in English. ๐Ÿ˜”
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved it ...so Yashas and yashita are kids ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜Š
Continue soon ...

Bt Ulka kyu ? ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
It can be Urmi , Mila , Urmila as well !
Oormila is a nt a old name ...One of my senior is Oormila .๐Ÿ˜ณ
Anyways ...writer knws the best .
All the best for this FF ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: jayvenk

Manas why not in English. ๐Ÿ˜”


yup , Reading hindi takes time ..
English is more easy n relatable ๐Ÿ˜ณ
bt no issues . As per your comfort Manu .

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Guys does my hindi sound soo odd๐Ÿ˜•
its just i wanted to improve it
i knew meri hindi๐Ÿคฃ
Guys as you all felt it soo odd
i will be back to my original fav LakMi
Laksh and Urmi as always๐Ÿ˜ƒ
now its ok ๐Ÿ˜‰
i edited it๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Edited by sugunmanas - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sweety it's not u. It's me. I have problem reading hinglish fast.I enjoy reading in English
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb start. Plz continue soon.
Luv kush ki jagah yashas, yashita, sounds good.