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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: l.savitree
Fantastic start & beautifully written khushi pov.. just love it👏 ❤️
Hope to see a strong khushi & un update soon

Thank you so much! I hope to meet up to your expectations :)

Originally posted by: shyamidutt
Like you said a lot was written about this equation of Armav and Khushi but something about the way you wrote touched me very deeply. I was all choked up reading it. I do hope that your Khushi is going to turn out to be stronger with self respect. I can't wait for the next part !! Thank you :)

Yes, true... thank you so very much. This comment meant a lot, especially that I could connect m y characters emotionally with you :) Well I hope you love the next part :)

Originally posted by: Savera84
Like it? No I loved it.
I am with the people who wants to know Khushi's point of view and wants to know why and how Arnav forgave himself so easily.
Good work.
Cheers...

Hehe, thanks *blush* Well I hope you find the next chapter fitting!

Originally posted by: binduk
Fabulous writing.. Loved it.

Thanks!

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetie_angel
Nice start good start

Thank you!

Originally posted by: melanie64
Awesome! I felt hurt along with Khushi. Beautiful portrayal of emotions. Hope you will update soon.😊

Thanks a ton, I hope the next few updates will make you happy :D

Originally posted by: bungeejump
Interesting start! Truly some actions were never redeemed! Captured her emotions and thoughts well!

Thanks a ton dear, I am glad I could convey the story well enough :D

Originally posted by: DMGFan-2b-not2b
The SS made me a lil sad. Reminded me of all those times that Arnav misbehaved or ridiculed Khushi but never ever really apologised or made up for that.

And here he is, being completely insensitive to khushi's feelings, happily chatting away to Sheetal. Which man comes home late, sees his wife after 7 days and then walk s away to chat to another woman.

Khushi should walk. Away to see if she really makes a doff in Arnav's life and v hopefully force him to realise recognise and acknowledge her place in his life

Oh I am so sorry, didn't intend to sadden you! But I really hope the future updates will make you much more happy :D It'll be much better, trust me!

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sarita_barun
Really enjoyed seeing things from Khushi's perspective.
Arnav really needs to see what he has in front of him and not take her for granted.

Thank you so much, I completely agree with you!

Originally posted by: Anu567

Sree,

This was so sad for various reasons...Khushi recalling their slowly falling in love, their present where Arnav still seems to be in his Laad Governor avatar, and neglects her or makes her feel inadequate as he chats with Sheetal...please give us a happy wala ending? Pretty please?!

Waiting,

I know, I wish I could make it happier but I promise you of a happy ending (I hate sad endings, die crying I tell you!)

Originally posted by: Ajoop5
Bookmarked😳

Aww, thanks!

Originally posted by: Pmmpta
Interesting story...

Thanks a ton!

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: SushSush
emotional shot.. felt bad for kushi.. hope arnav realizes that he takes her for granted.. is he blind?? can't he see through his wife's all is well facade & insecurities?? doesn't he miss his wife?? sheetal might be his friend.. but don't he remember he has a wife now?? don't know what u have planned.. but please don't make her forgive him without proper redemption.. he must repent.. continue soon.. do pm me.. will b waiting..

*Sigh* True, but it's easier said than done... how many of us try to look into the hearts of our loved ones? Be it mother, father, brother or husband? Same from the other end... inspite of having the ability to communicate, we are the ones who erect barriers for no reason and don't worry... Arnav will grovel :)

Originally posted by: SirenMitra
Bang on!! Every time I watched old episodes, I always wanted to see them give some credit and respect what she did for their family... Especially Arnav... But no and Khushi just forgave everyone...
What you wrote, it was awesome... Loved it...

Thank you so much! Really... trust me that's what pushed me to write this...

Originally posted by: IpKkNdSaRunArHi
How, just HOW many more hidden talents do you possess?
This was FANTABULOUS!!!

*blush* Thank you sooo much! Trust me!

Originally posted by: amina.ahmedraza
Beautifully written waiting for more, please update it soon

Thanks a ton, will try to update ASAP

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: kushiarnav1
interresting ...wondering why arnav is taking kushi for granted...

Hmm, will get to know soon :)

Originally posted by: rosalineak
Good start...

Thanks!

Originally posted by: aafan
Awesome presentation of the events!please continue

Thank you so much dear!

Originally posted by: mrin0709
Awesome story...

Thanks a ton!

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Fuzzbucket
first beautiful vms and now this..👏

Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: mira
please update soon...

WIll try to do it ASAP

Originally posted by: ChocolateArshi
Well written... Loved it<3

Thanks a ton!

Originally posted by: Aishu136
Loved it totally!
I think in this story redemption track would be a completely different one!
The way you recited Khushi's monologue is like exceptional.
Looking forward to the future update and do pm me

Thank you so much! I am so glad that you really loved it... thank you! And over that you found freshness in it :)

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: jisa
Loved it..!
eagerly waiting for arnav's POV..
w8ng for next..!

Thanks a ton, I hope you like the next part!

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PreenaRak

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Posted: 8 years ago

Its so nice. Without any flaws. U wrote it very well. Eventhough arnav loves khusi alot, he has failed many times to respect her n believe her too. He forgets that those things r also necessary in love. Waiting for nxt part

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kiran1992

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Posted: 8 years ago

Interesting start...😊

Waiting for the next update...

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: PreenaRak
Its so nice. Without any flaws. U wrote it very well. Eventhough arnav loves khusi alot, he has failed many times to respect her n believe her too. He forgets that those things r also necessary in love. Waiting for nxt part

Thank you so much! Hope the next part does justice to it!

Originally posted by: kiran1992
Interesting start...😊
Waiting for the next update...

Thanks!

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